Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence naming one or two favourite foods, then give one or two specific reasons or a brief example. Reduce filler words (uh, um) and avoid listing many items without detail.

예시: I most enjoy rice with vegetable curry and fish curry. For example, the vegetable curry at my aunt’s house has fresh spices and coconut milk, which makes it rich and comforting. I also sometimes eat pizza because it’s quick and convenient.

제안: Answer directly with a clear past-tense sentence and provide a short specific detail about why you liked it. Avoid hesitation and repetition.

예시: When I was young, I loved rice mixed with milk. My mother used to add a little sugar and cardamom, so it tasted sweet and comforting, and I associated it with happy mornings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide one or two specific seasonal examples and a reason using linking words (for example, in summer… because…). Reduce fillers and be slightly more detailed.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat a lot of fresh fruits like mangoes and watermelon because they are refreshing. In winter I prefer warm dishes such as stews and soups because they help me feel warm.

제안: Respond with a clear comparison using linking words (when I was a child… now…). Give one specific reason for the change and avoid listing many current favourites without explanation.

예시: Yes. When I was a child I loved rice mixed with milk because it was simple and comforting. Now I prefer biryani and pizza because I enjoy stronger spices and more varied flavours.

× Well, my favorite food is uh, rice and vegetable Curry or fish Curry, uh, I also like umm uh, beef Curry or uh, pizza burger etc.

✓ Well, my favorite foods are rice and vegetable curry, fish curry, beef curry, pizza, and burgers.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect conjunctions and list punctuation, and pluralization. Use commas to separate items and 'and' before the last item. 'Food' should be plural when listing several items. Capitalization of 'curry' is unnecessary. Remove filler words like 'uh' for clarity. Suggested improvement: Make a clear, punctuated list and use plural when listing multiple foods.

× And it is very tasty and delicious.

✓ They are very tasty and delicious.

The subject refers to multiple foods, so the verb and pronoun must be plural. 'It' is singular; use 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Avoid redundant adjectives: 'tasty' and 'delicious' are similar; one is sufficient. Suggested improvement: Ensure pronouns agree with the noun number and streamline adjectives.

× I like food, uh, did I like when I was a child, very young, uh, I think, uh, milk mixed with rice, It is very favorite dish of my and it is very delicious and.

✓ I liked, when I was a child, milk mixed with rice. It was my favorite dish and it was very delicious.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about the past, so use past tense 'liked' and 'was'. Also 'favorite dish of my' is incorrect word order and possessive; use 'my favorite dish'. Avoid run-on sentence by splitting into two sentences and remove filler words. Suggested improvement: Use past tense consistently and correct possessive adjective placement.

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because, uh, every season, uh, different types of variety foods, uh, uh, came, uh, and I like it.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because each season brings different kinds of food, and I like that.

The original uses incorrect word order and preposition 'of' in 'types of variety foods' and an incorrect verb 'came'. Use 'each season brings' to express occurrence. 'Kind(s) of food' is the correct collocation. Replace 'it' with 'that' referring to the idea of seasonal foods. Suggested improvement: Use clear subject-verb structure ('each season brings') and correct noun phrases ('kinds of food').

× Uh, uh, such as uh, summer season is many varieties of fruit.

✓ For example, in summer there are many kinds of fruit.

Incorrect adjective placement and article use: 'summer season is many varieties of fruit' is ungrammatical. Use 'in summer there are' or 'the summer season has'. 'Varieties of fruit' is acceptable but 'many kinds of fruit' is more natural. Remove fillers. Suggested improvement: Use correct existential 'there are' with plural noun and natural noun phrase.

× Yes, when I was a child, my favorite food was uh, milk mixed with rice and uh, However, uh, my uh, favorite food is uh, biryani and uh burger pizza, uh, because it is very tasty.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my favorite food was milk mixed with rice. However, now my favorite foods are biryani, burgers, and pizza because they are very tasty.

This response mixes past and present without clear contrast; split into two sentences and use past tense 'was' for childhood and present tense 'are' for current favorites. Use plural 'foods' and plural pronoun 'they' with 'are'. Also fix listing and remove filler words. 'Burger pizza' is unclear; separate into 'burgers and pizza'. Suggested improvement: Use clear temporal markers ('when I was a child' vs 'now') and match verb tenses and plural forms accordingly.