Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 발음과 어휘 선택을 개선하세요. 문장이 중복되고 불명확한 표현(예: "pasta is very religious")이 있어 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 주제 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤, 구체적 이유와 예시를 간결하게 덧붙이세요. 또한 불필요한 중간 음절(umm 등)을 줄이고, 정확한 어휘(olive oil pasta, tomato pasta)를 사용하세요.

예시: My favourite food is pasta, especially olive oil pasta and tomato pasta. I enjoy them because they are simple to prepare and full of flavour. For example, I often make tomato pasta with fresh basil and garlic, which makes it very tasty.

제안: 구조와 어휘를 명확히 하세요. 과거 질문이므로 과거형을 사용하고, 음식 이름을 정확히 표현하세요(예: kimchi fried rice). 또한 감정 표현을 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어가고 불필요한 발화를 줄이세요.

예시: When I was young, I liked kimchi fried rice the most because my mother cooked it well. It had a slightly spicy flavour and always made me feel comforted. I remember eating it after school with my siblings.

제안: 대답을 더 구체적으로 하고 시제와 문법을 정확히 사용하세요. ‘seasonal vegetables’와 ‘cold noodles’ 같은 정확한 표현을 사용하고, 이유를 덧붙여 계절별 차이를 설명하세요. 문장을 연결할 때 접속사(For example, In summer) 사용을 권장합니다.

예시: Yes, I do. In autumn and winter I usually eat seasonal vegetables like root vegetables and cabbage because they are warming. In summer I prefer cold noodles or salads because they are refreshing and help me stay cool.

제안: 질문에는 변화 여부를 묻고 있으므로 분명하게 ‘변하지 않았다’ 또는 ‘변했다’로 답하세요. 과거와 현재를 비교하는 문장을 사용하고, 구체적 이유를 추가하세요. 불필요한 망설임을 줄이고 문장 흐름을 자연스럽게 하세요.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed; I still enjoy fried rice. When I was a child my mother made it often, and I still like it because it's comforting and versatile.

× Oh I like to eat pastas umm such as oil pasta and toma tomato pasta because umm umm pasta is very religious and and.

✓ Oh, I like to eat pasta, such as oil pasta and tomato pasta, because pasta is very versatile.

The noun 'pasta' is an uncountable noun in English and should not take a plural 'pastas'. 'Toma tomato' seems to be a typo for 'tomato'. 'Religious' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'delicious' or 'versatile'. Use of commas clarifies the sentence. Suggestion: Use uncountable nouns correctly (pasta), correct typos, and choose an appropriate adjective like 'delicious' or 'versatile'.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: I like to eat some kimchi rice fried rice and my mom is good at making uh, pinky rice so I like feeling.

✓ I liked to eat kimchi fried rice when I was young, and my mom was good at making pink rice, so I enjoyed it.

The question asks about the past ('did you like'), so the answer should use past tense 'liked' and 'was'. 'Kimchi rice fried rice' is redundant; 'kimchi fried rice' is correct. 'Pinky rice' likely means 'pink rice'. 'I like feeling' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I enjoyed it'. Suggestion: Align verb tense with the question (use past tense), use correct noun phrases, and express feelings with verbs like 'enjoyed'.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? Student: Yes I do. In school I usually. Season vegetables and in summer I would like to eat for noodles. Umm.

✓ Yes, I do. At school I usually eat seasonal vegetables, and in summer I like to eat cold noodles.

Sentence fragments and word order are incorrect: 'In school I usually.' is incomplete. 'Season vegetables' should be 'seasonal vegetables'. 'I would like to eat for noodles' is incorrect; likely 'cold noodles'. Use 'at school' not 'in school' (both possible but 'at school' fits context). Ensure complete clauses with verbs. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments, use correct adjective forms ('seasonal') and proper object phrases ('cold noodles').

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: Umm, I would like to eat fried rice. When I was young. I would still like to eat it.

✓ Umm, I liked to eat fried rice when I was young, and I still like to eat it now.

Question uses present perfect 'has...changed since you were a child' asking about change from past to present. Response should compare past and present: use past tense 'liked' for childhood and present 'still like' for now. 'When I was young.' is a sentence fragment. Suggestion: Combine clauses into one sentence to compare past and present, use past tense for childhood habits and present tense for current habits.