Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and complete your final thought. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons with a linking word, and finish with a short extra detail or example. Avoid repetition (e.g., "very delicious").

예시: My favourite food is biryani because I enjoy spicy, aromatic dishes. For example, my family makes a chicken biryani with fragrant spices and potatoes, which we usually eat to celebrate special occasions.

제안: Use correct tense and add a linking word to contrast past and present. Give one brief specific example to make your answer more vivid.

예시: When I was young, I liked sweet foods such as chocolate cake and caramel cake. However, now I prefer spicy dishes like noodles and biryani because I enjoy stronger flavours.

제안: Correct grammar (plural/singular and verb forms) and use linking words to organise the comparison. Be specific about examples and reasons (e.g., why soup in winter).

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to keep warm, while in summer I eat salads and fresh fruit because they are refreshing and cooling.

제안: Use correct tense consistently and avoid listing too many similar items. Provide a brief reason for the change and one clear example to make your point stronger.

예시: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred sweet treats such as chocolate and caramel cake, but now I prefer spicy dishes like biryani and spicy noodles because I enjoy bolder flavours.

× My favorite food is biryani because I like traditional and spicy food.

✓ My favorite food is biryani because I like traditional, spicy food.

The original sentence is mostly correct but lacks a comma between coordinate adjectives 'traditional' and 'spicy'. Use a comma to separate two equal adjectives modifying the same noun. Suggestion: place a comma between coordinate adjectives (traditional, spicy).

× It's a very delicious dish and I always prefer to eat biryani when I'm happy and we can make biryani with potatoes and.

✓ It's a very delicious dish, and I always prefer to eat biryani when I'm happy. We can also make biryani with potatoes.

The original contains a run-on sentence and an incomplete clause ending with 'and'. Split into two sentences to clarify meaning and complete the second thought. Add 'also' for natural emphasis and remove the trailing 'and'.

× When I was young I like sweet dishes such as chocolate cake, caramel cake, but now I like spicy foods.

✓ When I was young I liked sweet dishes such as chocolate cake and caramel cake, but now I like spicy foods.

The clause 'When I was young' sets a past time, so the verb should be in the past tense ('liked') rather than present. Also use 'and' to connect two items in a short list. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time expression and use 'and' between list items.

× Yes, I usually eat the different foods in different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I usually eat different foods at different times of the year.

Do not use 'the' before 'different foods' here. Use plural 'times' and the preposition 'at' with 'time(s) of the year'. Correct phrase: 'at different times of the year.'

× In winter I prefer to eat warm food like soup but in summer I eat salad and fresh fruit because it give me fresh.

✓ In winter I prefer to eat warm foods like soup, but in summer I eat salads and fresh fruit because they make me feel refreshed.

Several issues: use plural 'foods' and 'salads' for general habits; add a comma before 'but' joining clauses; the subject for the verb is plural ('salad and fresh fruit' -> 'they'), so the verb should be 'make' not 'give'; 'feel refreshed' is the natural expression rather than 'give me fresh.' Suggest: plural nouns for general statements, correct verb agreement, and idiomatic phrase 'feel refreshed.'

× Yes, my favorite food changed.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed.

When discussing a change from childhood to now, present perfect ('has changed') is natural to show connection to the present. Simple past 'changed' is not wrong but less natural here. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes that affect the present.

× When I'm child I prefer to eat sweet food like caramel cakes, chocolate cakes, chocolates.

✓ When I was a child I preferred to eat sweet foods like caramel cake, chocolate cake, and chocolates.

'When I'm child' is incorrect: use past tense 'was' and include the article 'a' -> 'was a child.' Also 'prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match past time. Use plural 'foods' for general category, and list items consistently; add commas and 'and' before the last item.

× But now I prefer to eat spicy food like noodles and biryani and others.

✓ But now I prefer to eat spicy foods like noodles, biryani, and other dishes.

Use plural 'foods' for general preference. Use commas to separate items and 'other dishes' is more natural than 'others.' Keep present tense 'prefer' because this is current habit.