Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct vocabulary/collocation errors. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one or two specific supporting details (why you like it, a brief example). Use correct words (e.g., "mango" seems incorrect — likely "Mangoli" or "regional"; 'beef curry' not 'beef Curry') and avoid redundancy like 'absolutely delicious to eat'. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is my region's traditional dishes, especially beef curry and roasted chicken. I enjoy them because the spices create deep, complex flavours and the dishes are usually served with fresh rice and vegetables. For example, a spicy beef curry my family cooks has tender meat and a tangy tomato-based gravy that I love.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice, and make meaning clear. Begin with a topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific detail or memory. Fix errors: 'I mostly liked sweets', 'rasgulla' spelling, 'I loved them because they tasted sweet and comforting'. Avoid irrelevant filler.

예시: When I was young, I mostly liked sweets, especially soft, syrupy rasgulla and chocolate. I loved them because they tasted sweet and comforting, and my family often gave them to me as a special treat after school.

제안: Be more concise and use clearer linking words to explain reasons. Start with a direct answer (Yes), then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Correct small errors: 'the same types', 'taste buds'. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I do. I prefer different foods depending on the season because seasonal ingredients taste better and suit the weather. For example, in winter I enjoy hearty curries and roasted dishes, while in summer I prefer light salads and fresh fruit because they feel refreshing.

제안: Use correct grammar and clear vocabulary; be specific about how tastes changed. Start with a clear topic sentence in past vs present (I used to... but now...). Fix errors: 'When I was a child I preferred sweets', 'I enjoy spicier food', 'my tastes have become more adventurous', 'chilli curry' and 'strong seasonings'. Give one clear example of a dish you now like.

예시: When I was a child I preferred sweet treats, but now I enjoy spicier food. My tastes have become more adventurous; for example, I now like chilli curry with strong spices and aromatic seasonings, whereas before I avoided spicy dishes.

× Well, I like to eat all types of food, but mostly I love to eat our traditional mangoi dishes such as beef Curry, roasted chicken, mixed vegetable and more as they are made with lots of spices which make the food flavorful and absolutely delicious to eat.

✓ Well, I like to eat all types of food, but mostly I love our traditional mango dishes such as beef curry, roasted chicken, mixed vegetables and more, as they are made with lots of spices that make the food flavorful and absolutely delicious.

Incorrect capitalization and adjective/noun forms: 'mangoi' is likely 'mango' (spelling) and dish names should be lowercased unless proper nouns; 'mixed vegetable' should be plural 'mixed vegetables'; sentence was wordy with repeated 'to eat'. Suggestion: use correct spellings, pluralize countable nouns, avoid redundant verbs, and use 'that' to introduce a defining relative clause. Grammar problem type ID:13

× When I was young I mostly like sweets, especially soft syrupy rasagulla and chocolate.

✓ When I was young I mostly liked sweets, especially soft syrupy rasgulla and chocolate.

The time marker 'When I was young' requires past tense. 'like' should be changed to past 'liked'. Maintain consistent past tense throughout the sentence. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I laughed them as they tested treat and comforting and my family often gave them to me as a treat.

✓ I loved them as they tasted sweet and comforting, and my family often gave them to me as a treat.

Multiple errors: 'laughed' is incorrect verb choice (should be 'loved'); 'tested' is wrong form, should be 'tasted'; 'treat' used where adjective 'sweet' fits; sentence needs 'and' with comma for clarity. Suggest using verbs that match meaning and correct past tense forms. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Oh yeah, I love to eat different foods at different times of the year as I don't like to have same types of food all the time as it is quite boring.

✓ Oh yeah, I love to eat different foods at different times of the year because I don't like to have the same types of food all the time; it is quite boring.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'same types of food'. Also 'as' repeated and awkward; use 'because' or rephrase. Combine clauses more clearly. This concerns article and conjunction usage but primarily fixes modality of expression. Grammar problem type ID:17

× That's why I prefer to have different kinds of food depending on the changing seasons and weather.

✓ That's why I prefer different kinds of food depending on the season and the weather.

Use singular 'season' in this context or 'the seasons'; better to say 'depending on the season and the weather'. Adding 'the' before 'weather' clarifies reference. Preposition 'on' is fine; this corrects noun forms and article use. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Sometimes it also depends on my taste bud.

✓ Sometimes it also depends on my taste buds.

'Taste bud' is singular and usually used plural 'taste buds' when speaking generally. Use plural noun to match general meaning. Grammar problem type ID:12

× When I was child I prefer sweet treats most of the time, but now that I am older I enjoy Spicer more.

✓ When I was a child I preferred sweet treats most of the time, but now that I am older I enjoy spicier food more.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'child'; tense inconsistency—use past 'preferred' for past time; 'Spicer' is incorrect word/formatting, should be 'spicier' (comparative adjective) and specify 'food'. Ensure comparative form 'spicier' and correct capitalization. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I think my testimonies have become more adventurous.

✓ I think my tastes have become more adventurous.

'Testimonies' is the wrong noun; 'tastes' fits context for food preferences. Use correct vocabulary to convey meaning. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, I now like dishes with chilli Curry or strong seasons, which I quote then.

✓ For example, I now like dishes with chili curry or strong seasonings, which I used to avoid.

Several problems: 'chilli Curry' inconsistent capitalization and spelling—use 'chili curry' or 'chilli curry'; 'strong seasons' is incorrect word choice, should be 'strong seasonings' or 'strong spices'; phrase 'which I quote then' makes no sense—replace with 'which I used to avoid' to convey change. Fix noun forms, word choice, and clarify meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26