Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and fluent. Give a clear topic sentence without hesitation or repetition, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use natural collocations (e.g., "fried chicken") and avoid filler words.

예시: My favourite food is fried chicken because I enjoy its crispy skin and juicy meat. For example, I often buy it from a small shop near my home, and it makes me feel comforted after a long day.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, then give specific examples and use linking words (e.g., "for example", "such as"). Avoid repetition and incorrect verbs—use past tense consistently.

예시: When I was young, I liked sweet baked goods. For example, I often ate pies and cakes from a local bakery, and I also enjoyed fried chicken as a special treat.

제안: Answer directly and organize ideas with linking phrases like "in summer" or "during festivals." Be specific about seasonal changes and avoid repetition and unclear words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and definitive examples.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For instance, in winter I prefer hearty dishes like stews and fried chicken, while in summer I eat lighter meals such as salads and cold noodles. During festivals I also try traditional foods like Vietnamese sticky rice or Korean barbecue.

제안: Give a clear yes/no response first, then explain how preferences changed with specific reasons and use linking words like "because" or "now". Use correct tense and avoid repeated words.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. As a child I preferred sugary cereals because they were easy and sweet, but now I enjoy more savory foods like fried chicken and rice because I appreciate stronger flavours and more variety.

× My favorite food is the. Chicken fry fried chicken.

✓ My favorite food is fried chicken.

The original has incorrect and extra definite article 'the' and duplicated words. Use no article before uncountable/general food when stating a preference (or use 'the' only for specific items). 'Chicken fry fried chicken' is redundant; correct phrase is 'fried chicken'. Remove 'the' and duplicate words to make a grammatical sentence.

× When we were young, when we were young, I ride this bakery. Such as pie, chicken, such as cake, sugar.

✓ When I was young, I used to go to a bakery and eat things like pies, chicken, cakes, and sweets.

Repeating 'when we were young' and using present tense 'ride' is incorrect. Use 'I was young' for first person past, and 'used to' to describe habitual past actions. 'Ride this bakery' is ungrammatical; likely 'go to a bakery'. 'Such as' should lead into examples in a list; use plural forms and correct nouns ('pies', 'cakes', 'sweets'). Combine into one coherent sentence.

× I is is different different food in DGR such as a cake banoffee such as a chicken fry or the uh, Vietnam food or Japanese food or Korean food uh?

✓ I eat different foods in DGR, such as banoffee cake, fried chicken, Vietnamese food, Japanese food, and Korean food.

The subject-verb agreement is wrong: 'I is' should be 'I eat' or 'I have'. Duplicated words should be removed. 'Different food' should be plural 'different foods'. Articles and item names need correct forms: 'a cake banoffee' should be 'banoffee cake'; 'a chicken fry' should be 'fried chicken'. List the cuisines with commas and 'and' before the last item.

× Yeah, when we we shy, I I write to eat the cereal, cereal for the children, but when I go I back to eat the Celia but don't feel like that.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to eat cereal, but now when I go back to eat cereal I don't feel the same.

Many tense and word choice problems: 'when we we shy' appears to intend 'when I was shy' or 'when I was a child'—use 'when I was a child'. 'I I write to eat' is wrong; 'used to eat' expresses past habitual action. 'Celia' is a misspelling of 'cereal'. Maintain past for the childhood habit and present tense for current feeling. Remove duplicates and fix word order.