Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatical: state your favourite food in a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid extra or unclear phrases and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Focus on correct tense and sentence structure (e.g., "My favorite food is milk fudge because I love sweets and the texture is..."), and avoid guessing what others think.

예시: My favorite food is milk fudge because I have a sweet tooth and I enjoy its rich, creamy texture. For example, I often eat a small piece after dinner to relax. Also, I like how it comes in different flavors, such as pistachio and cardamom, which makes it interesting.

제안: Use clear past-tense forms and correct word order. Start with a topic sentence in past tense, then give specific supporting details and a linking word. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'butter chicken' not 'butter nines') and grammar (e.g., 'my family often cooked Punjabi food') are important. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetitive phrases.

예시: When I was young, I liked almost every kind of food, but I especially enjoyed spicy dishes because I loved strong flavors and heat. For example, my family often cooked Punjabi food, such as rich curries and butter chicken, which I always looked forward to eating.

제안: Good structure and specific examples. To improve, add one linking word to show contrast and one brief personal detail to make it more natural (e.g., mention a favorite seasonal dish). Keep sentences concise and avoid repeating the same verbs.

예시: Yes, I usually eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and sweet puddings because they are warm and comforting, whereas in summer I enjoy salads and fresh fruits like mangoes because they feel refreshing and hydrating.

제안: The transcript shows no real answer. Always respond directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and give 1–2 specific reasons or examples. Use past and present tense accurately to compare childhood and current preferences.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed much since I was a child; I still love milk fudge because I enjoy sweet flavors and the nostalgic feeling it gives me. However, I now appreciate a wider variety of desserts and sometimes choose lighter sweets like fruit-based treats.

× I like all fruits but my favorite food. Is milk fudge because I love sweets? And everyone likes sweets.

✓ I like all fruits, but my favorite food is milk fudge because I love sweets, and everyone likes sweets.

The original contains fragmented and incorrectly punctuated clauses: 'but my favorite food.' is a fragment and 'Is milk fudge...' mistakenly starts with an auxiliary verb. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). To fix it, combine related ideas into one complete sentence with the correct subject-verb order: 'my favorite food is milk fudge.' Use commas to join clauses or split into correct sentences. Suggestion: ensure each clause has a subject and correct verb order and avoid starting statements with an auxiliary verb unless forming a question.

× My family often cooking cooked Punjabi food like rich curries and butter nines when I always forward to.

✓ My family often cooked Punjabi food like rich curries and butter chicken, which I always looked forward to.

The original mixes forms: 'often cooking cooked' is redundant and incorrect; 'butter nines' is likely a typo for 'butter chicken'; 'when I always forward to' lacks correct verb and structure. This fits incorrect past participle or participle usage (ID 9) and sentence structure issues. Correct by using simple past 'cooked' for habitual past actions, replace wrong noun, and use the correct phrasal verb 'looked forward to' with its object. Suggestion: use 'cooked' for repeated past habits and ensure phrasal verbs include their object.