Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the food name and give a clear reason using correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the food, then add one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like “because” or “so” and correct collocations (e.g., “high in protein,” “nutritious,” “calorie intake”). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: My favourite food is steak because it is high in protein and very nutritious. As a bodybuilder, I eat steak often to help build and repair muscle. Also, it provides the calories I need to train hard.

제안: Use past tense correctly and be concise. Begin with a topic sentence stating the food, then add a specific reason and a brief supporting detail. Use linking words like “because” and correct verb forms (e.g., “my mother cooked”).

예시: When I was young, I liked chicken porridge because it helped me recover energy after tiring weekends. My mother also cooked it for me whenever I was sick, so it became a comforting food.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and explain the exception with correct phrasing and tense. Use linking words like “however” or “but” and avoid vague verbs like “trans change.” Be specific about what changes and why.

예시: Generally no, I eat the same foods from January to November. However, in December I switch to more Western dishes, such as steak and barbecue, because of holiday meals and family gatherings.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give specific reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words like “because” and “so,” correct prepositions and verb forms (e.g., “used to love,” “they help me build muscle”). Limit to three sentences.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to love chicken porridge, but now I prefer steak and sushi because they are high in protein and help me build muscle.

× My favorite food is thick because it reaches of protein and nutritious.

✓ My favorite food is thick because it is rich in protein and nutritious.

The original uses 'reaches of protein' which is incorrect. Use 'rich in protein' to describe high protein content and 'nutritious' as an adjective. Also include a linking verb 'is' to form a correct predicate. Suggestion: Use 'rich in' or 'high in' + noun to describe nutrient content.

× Also I am a bodybuilder and need calorie intake which don't protein as the Dom dominate.

✓ Also, I am a bodybuilder and need a calorie intake that is high in protein as protein is essential.

The clause 'which don't protein as the Dom dominate' is ungrammatical. 'Which' should refer to 'calorie intake' but the verb and noun forms are wrong. Use a relative clause 'that is high in protein' or 'which contains a lot of protein.' Clarify meaning: 'protein is essential' instead of 'the Dom dominate.' Suggestion: Use 'that is' + adjective phrase or 'which contains' + noun to describe attributes of 'calorie intake.'

× When I was young, I liked chicken porridge because it helped me to recover my energy when I got tired at the weekend.

✓ When I was young, I liked chicken porridge because it helped me recover my energy when I got tired on weekends.

Use past tense consistently (liked, helped). 'Helped me to recover' is acceptable but 'helped me recover' is more natural. Use 'on weekends' rather than 'at the weekend' for habitual occurrences; both are possible but plural 'weekends' fits better in this context. Suggestion: Keep past tense verbs and prefer concise verb patterns like 'helped me recover.'

× My mother cook for the chicken porridge for me when I got sick.

✓ My mother cooked the chicken porridge for me when I got sick.

Subject-verb agreement in past tense: 'mother' requires past form 'cooked', not 'cook.' Remove extraneous preposition 'for' before 'the chicken porridge.' Suggestion: Use simple past for completed actions (cooked) and 'cooked the chicken porridge for me.'

× Absolutely not. I eat same food from January until November.

✓ Absolutely not. I eat the same food from January until November.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'same food.' Also present simple is fine for habitual actions. Add 'the' to specify the particular food habit. Suggestion: Use 'eat the same food' when referring to a specific repeated diet.

× However in December I started to trans change my food into western food such as steak and also BBQ.

✓ However, in December I started to change my diet to Western foods such as steak and barbecue.

'Trans change' is incorrect; use 'change' or 'transition' as a verb. 'Food' is better expressed as 'diet' and 'Western' is capitalized. Use plural 'foods' or uncountable 'food' and 'barbecue' instead of 'BBQ' for formality. Maintain past tense 'started.' Suggestion: Use 'started to change my diet to Western foods' or 'began transitioning to Western foods.'

× Absolutely yes because of I used to love a chicken porridge but now I prefer steak or sushi due to the nutrition facts which consists of a lot of protein and also they help me to build a muscle.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I used to love chicken porridge, but now I prefer steak or sushi because they are high in protein and help me build muscle.

Several errors: 'because of I used to' is ungrammatical—use 'I used to' or 'because I used to.' 'A chicken porridge' should be 'chicken porridge' (no article). 'Due to the nutrition facts which consists' is wrong: use 'because they are high in protein' and 'consist' should agree with plural 'facts' but better to rephrase. 'Build a muscle' should be 'build muscle' without article. Split into clearer sentences and maintain tense. Suggestion: Use 'I used to' for past habit; avoid unnecessary articles with uncountable foods; use 'help me build muscle.'