Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise by starting with a clear topic sentence, avoiding repetition, and adding a brief reason or example. Use one linking phrase if you add detail. Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: I love pizza. It’s my favourite because I enjoy cheese and many pizzas are very cheesy. For example, I often choose a margherita or quattro formaggi when I eat out because they’re rich and satisfying.

제안: Answer in a single coherent reply: give a topic sentence then specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid short fragmented sentences and ambiguous phrases like “red meats and goats.” Use precise vocabulary and one linking word to connect ideas.

예시: When I was young I preferred meat-heavy and fast foods. For example, I often ate chicken and other red meats, and I enjoyed fast-food burgers and fries. As a result, I didn’t eat many vegetables back then.

제안: This is a good structured answer; make it more natural by tightening language and adding one specific example and a linking word for coherence. Keep it concise and ensure correct collocations (e.g., “in different seasons” and “cooling foods”).

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer cooling foods like salads and chilled fruits, while in winter I choose warm dishes such as vegetable soups and stews.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain why and include a specific time reference naturally. Avoid uncertain phrasing like “I think” when you can be more definite. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

예시: Yes, it has changed. As a child my favourite was burgers, but two years ago I started preferring pizza because I now appreciate the variety of toppings and the cheesy texture.

× My favorite food is pizza as I love eating cheese and pizza has good amount of cheese in it.

✓ My favorite food is pizza because I love eating cheese, and pizza has a good amount of cheese in it.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'good amount'. Also 'as' is better replaced by 'because' for clarity in this context; a comma before coordinating conjunction improves flow. Suggestion: include articles where needed and use 'because' for reasons.

× When I was young I used to love eating non veg items such as chicken. Red meats and goats. I used to love eating junk food.

✓ When I was young, I used to love eating non-vegetarian items such as chicken, red meat, and goat. I also used to love eating junk food.

The original contains sentence fragments ('Red meats and goats.') and inconsistent phrasing. Combine fragments into one sentence and use 'non-vegetarian' or 'non-veg' consistently; use singular uncountable form 'red meat' and 'goat' as meat, not 'goats'. Add comma after introductory clause. Suggestion: avoid fragments and maintain parallel list format.

× Yes, I do eat different kinds of foods on different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I do eat different kinds of foods at different times of the year.

Use preposition 'at' with 'times of the year' and plural 'times' when referring to multiple occasions. Also 'time of the year' should be 'times of the year' to match 'different'. Suggestion: use 'at different times of the year.'

× I eat cooling foods in summer such as salads and warmer foods on colder seasons like soup.

✓ I eat cooling foods in summer, such as salads, and warmer foods in colder seasons, like soup.

Use 'in colder seasons' rather than 'on colder seasons'. Add commas around examples. 'Cooling' and 'warmer' are acceptable adjectives but sentence needed correct prepositions. Suggestion: use 'in' with seasons and include commas for clarity.

× Yes, my favorite food when I was a child was burger, but right now I enjoy eating pizza more than burger.

✓ Yes, my favorite food when I was a child was the burger, but right now I enjoy eating pizza more than burgers.

When referring to a type of food in general, use the plural 'burgers' or include the article 'the' if referring to a specific burger. Here plural 'burgers' is more natural when comparing general preferences. Suggestion: use plurals for general comparisons: 'pizza more than burgers.'

× I think it has been two years since my favorite food has changed.

✓ I think it has been two years since my favorite food changed.

With 'since' followed by a past event, use simple past, not present perfect. 'Since my favorite food changed' is the correct structure. Also 'has been' is acceptable for duration but pairing 'since' with 'has changed' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'since' + past simple for the change event.