Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce hesitation and redundancy, give a clear topic sentence, and add one specific detail about why you like it. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating simple adjectives.

예시: My favourite food is pepperoni pizza. I like it because the spicy pepperoni and melted cheese create a rich, savory flavour, and it’s quick to make at home. For example, I usually prepare it on weekends with fresh dough and lots of tomato sauce, which makes it taste even better.

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence, explain clearly whether you liked that food and why, and avoid double negatives. Provide one specific supporting detail or memory.

예시: When I was young, I liked Margherita pizza. I enjoyed it because the simple combination of tomato, mozzarella and basil tasted fresh, and my parents often bought it after weekend outings.

제안: Answer directly and accurately, use correct time expressions, and give specific seasonal examples. Avoid incorrect word choices (e.g. calling pasta a fruit) and explain how seasons affect your food choices using linking words.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I often eat hearty stews and pasta because they are warming, whereas in summer I prefer salads and fruit because they are refreshing.

제안: Provide a clear comparison between past and present favourites with a reason. Use linking words (however, because) and avoid excessive hesitation. Be specific about current preferences and health reasons.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to eat a lot of pizza when I was a child; however, now I prefer fruit and vegetables because I want to stay healthy and feel more energetic.

× My favorite food is pizza and the pita bread pepperoni is my favorite pizza topping.

✓ My favorite food is pizza, and pepperoni on pita bread is my favorite pizza topping.

The original sentence misuses the definite article 'the' before 'pita bread' and has awkward word order. Use no article for general materials (pita bread) and reorder to 'pepperoni on pita bread' for clarity. Also add a comma to join two independent clauses.

× I usually cook uh, pizza at the weekend.

✓ I usually cook pizza at the weekend.

Remove filler sounds. 'Cook pizza' is correct present simple for habitual actions. In some varieties 'on the weekend' is used, but 'at the weekend' is correct in British English; both are acceptable.

× It is uh, easy to prepare.

✓ It is easy to prepare.

Remove filler 'uh' to make the sentence fluent. The structure 'It is easy to prepare' is correct for describing a dish.

× I like it so much.

✓ I like it a lot.

'So much' is informal but acceptable; 'a lot' is more natural in this context. Tense is present simple expressing current preference.

× I like it Margarita pizza when I was young but I never eating no because it is not delicious.

✓ I liked Margherita pizza when I was young, but I never ate it because I did not find it delicious.

Multiple tense and grammar issues: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'when I was young' (past tense). 'Margarita' should be 'Margherita' (name of pizza). 'Never eating no' is ungrammatical and contains a double negative; use past simple 'never ate it' and 'did not find it delicious' to express lack of taste.

× But before I like it.

✓ But before, I liked it.

To refer to the past, use past tense 'liked'. Also place 'before' properly; a comma improves clarity: 'But before, I liked it.' Alternatively, 'However, earlier I liked it.'

× Yes, I eat different foods once on the month.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods once a month.

The expression for frequency is 'once a month' not 'once on the month'. Use the indefinite article 'a' with time expressions like 'month'.

× Pasta is really delicious fruit, but before I never ate it.

✓ Pasta is really delicious, but I had never eaten it before.

'Delicious fruit' is incorrect — pasta is not a fruit; remove 'fruit' and add a comma. Use past perfect 'had never eaten' or past simple 'never ate' depending on sequence; 'had never eaten it before' clearly shows it was new experience prior to that time.

× Yes, I have. My favorite food was pizza, but uh, I sometimes eat it because uh, I always uh, eat fruit and vegetables.

✓ Yes, it has. My favorite food used to be pizza, but I now only sometimes eat it because I always eat fruit and vegetables.

The original 'Yes, I have.' is unclear for 'Has your favourite food changed?' A better response: 'Yes, it has.' 'My favorite food was pizza' should be 'used to be pizza' to indicate past habit. Clarify frequency: 'now only sometimes eat it' and remove filler words. 'Always eat fruit and vegetables' explains current habit.

× It is important for my health so I don't eat pizza.

✓ It is important for my health, so I don't eat pizza often.

Add comma before 'so'. Saying 'I don't eat pizza' can imply never; if the student sometimes eats pizza earlier sentence, 'don't eat pizza often' matches intended meaning. Maintain present simple for habitual action.