Food— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite food?
수험생
My favorite food is hot pot because it's convenient and very social. I often meet my close friends and share a variety of ingredients around the table, which creates a lively and friendly atmosphere.
시험관
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
수험생
When I was young, I liked hot pot because it was convenient and very social. I often met my close friends and shared a variety of ingredients, which created a lively and friendly atmosphere.
시험관
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
수험생
When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fast food such as fried chicken and hamburgers because they were convenient and delicious. Now I prefer eating more vegetables for health reasons.
시험관
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
수험생
Absolutely. When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fast food such as hamburgers and fried chickens because they were very convenient and delicious. Now I prefer eating more vegetables for health reasons.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite food?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答自然且相关，但略显重复，句子可以更简练并加入具体细节（如你最喜欢的汤底或常吃的配料）以增加说服力和丰富度。注意不要超过5句，并使用连接词使叙述更连贯。
예시: I love hot pot because it’s both convenient and sociable. For example, my favorite is a spicy Sichuan broth, and we usually share beef slices, mushrooms and leafy greens. Eating together creates a lively atmosphere and makes me feel close to my friends.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答与第一题几乎重复，未能直接回应“小时候喜欢什么食物”的变化或具体细节。建议直接给出过去偏好的食物，并比较过去与现在，使用连接词（e.g. when, although, but）来增强逻辑性。
예시: When I was young I preferred fast food like hamburgers and fried chicken because it was tasty and easy to get. However, as I grew older I began to enjoy home-cooked dishes more because they were healthier.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答偏离题意，问题询问是否随季节更换食物，但你的回答讲的是年龄变化。建议直接描述季节性饮食习惯（如夏天吃凉拌菜，冬天吃热汤），并用连接词说明原因。
예시: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons. In summer I eat more salads and cold noodles to stay cool, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews because they are warming and comforting.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
점수: 82.0제안: 回答清晰直接，说明了变化和原因，但可以更具体（例如什么时候开始改变、现在最常吃的菜或怎样保持健康饮食），并控制在5句以内以保持自然流畅。
예시: Yes, it has changed. As a child I loved hamburgers and fried chicken because they were convenient, but in my late teens I started choosing vegetables and grilled fish to stay healthier. Now I usually cook balanced meals with plenty of vegetables and lean protein.
문법
× When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fast food such as hamburgers and fried chickens because they were very convenient and delicious.
✓ When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fast food such as hamburgers and fried chicken because they were very convenient and delicious.
错误类型：可数名词单复数不一致。“chicken”作快餐类食物时通常用不可数或作集合名词表示肉类（fried chicken），不加复数。原句中同时用了hamburgers（复数）和fried chickens（复数），与习惯搭配不符合。建议把“fried chickens”改为“fried chicken”或都用复数一致（hamburgers and fried chickens 也可，但更自然的是 fried chicken）。
× Absolutely. When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fast food such as hamburgers and fried chickens because they were very convenient and delicious.
✓ Absolutely. When I was young, I used to eat a lot of fast food such as hamburgers and fried chicken because they were very convenient and delicious.
错误类型：可数名词单复数不当。与前一条相同，’fried chicken‘ 更常用来泛指炸鸡这种食物，故将复数形式改为不可数/统一表述以保持自然表达。
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