Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể. Để cải thiện lên điểm cao hơn, thí sinh nên rút ngắn một chút độ dài (không quá 4–5 câu) và thêm một câu nêu lí do cá nhân ngắn gọn ở cuối để tăng tính cá nhân hóa (ví dụ: kỷ niệm hoặc cảm giác khi ăn). Tránh sử dụng cụm từ quá chung chung như “Pan Asian” mà không giải thích nếu dùng.

예시: I love Pan-Asian food, especially Japanese and Korean dishes, because I enjoy the balance of flavours and fresh ingredients. For instance, sashimi has a delicate texture I find relaxing, and a steaming bowl of ramen is very comforting on cold days. These foods remind me of a trip to Tokyo when I first discovered them.

제안: Câu trả lời mạch lạc, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể, cùng sự chuyển tiếp rõ ràng sang hiện tại. Để hoàn thiện, có thể rút ngắn một chút phần mô tả thói quen (ví dụ “beg my parents”) và thêm một nguyên nhân ngắn gọn hơn cho sự thay đổi để tăng tính logic (ví dụ sức khỏe, kiến thức dinh dưỡng).

예시: As a child I loved sweets like gummy bears and lollipops because I liked their chewy texture and bright flavours. I used to ask my parents for them at the supermarket, but now I choose fruit or dark chocolate because I'm more aware of nutrition and try to eat healthier.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý hay (ăn theo mùa) nhưng nhiều lỗi về từ vựng và ngữ pháp khiến ý không rõ ràng. Cần dùng từ vựng chuẩn, cấu trúc đơn giản và mạch lạc: nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi dùng liên từ (for example, in summer, in winter) để liệt kê ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh những từ sai như “rehabilitates”, “ravitate” và câu đầu không đầy đủ.

예시: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons. For example, in summer I prefer refreshing foods like cold soba or salads to stay cool. In winter I usually eat hot, comforting dishes such as spicy stews or noodle soup to keep warm.

제안: Câu trả lời ý tưởng rõ nhưng bị nhiều lỗi ngôn ngữ (từ sai, cụm từ lộn xộn, tiếng lắp “uh”) làm giảm rõ rệt tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Cần mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ sai như “tests” hay “face”, loại bỏ tiếng ngắt quãng và giải thích ngắn lý do thay đổi (ví dụ: học về dinh dưỡng, muốn khỏe mạnh).

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed a lot since I was a child. I used to love sweets like candy and cake, but now I prefer healthier options such as sushi or miso soup because I'm more concerned about nutrition and overall wellbeing.

× Certainly might continue. Rehabilitates are heavily dictated by the seasons.

✓ Certainly. My food choices are heavily dictated by the seasons.

The original has incoherent fragments and wrong word choices ('might continue', 'Rehabilitates'). This is a sentence structure error: replace the fragments with a clear subject and verb. Use 'My food choices are heavily dictated by the seasons' to convey meaning clearly. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and appropriate verb and avoid incorrect vocabulary.

× During the sweltering summer months, I usually ravitate towards refreshing foods like cold soba or salads to beat the heat.

✓ During the sweltering summer months, I usually gravitate towards refreshing foods like cold soba or salads to beat the heat.

The verb 'ravitate' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'gravitate' followed by 'towards' + noun. This is an error involving verb formation/present participle vocabulary. Suggestion: use correct verb 'gravitate' in present simple for habitual actions.

× Conversely, in winter, I tend to prefer hot, comforting dishes such as spicy stews or noodle soup to keep warm.

✓ Conversely, in winter, I tend to prefer hot, comforting dishes such as spicy stews or noodle soups to keep warm.

The original is grammatical but 'noodle soup' is countable and pairing with 'spicy stews' suggests parallel plural; changing to 'noodle soups' improves parallelism. This reflects verb/noun form consistency. Suggestion: keep parallel number forms in lists.

× My tests have changed a lot.

✓ My tastes have changed a lot.

'Tests' is a wrong word choice instead of 'tastes'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error causing nonsense. Suggestion: choose the correct noun 'tastes' when talking about preferences.

× As a child I was obsessed with sweets like candy and cake, but I have grown out of that face now.

✓ As a child I was obsessed with sweets like candy and cake, but I have grown out of that phase now.

Using 'face' is a wrong word; the intended word is 'phase'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Suggestion: use 'phase' to indicate a temporary period of behaviour.

× My dad is much more refined and I prefer healthier dishes such as uh, sushi or miso soup because I'm more concerned about nutrition and well-being.

✓ I am much more refined now and I prefer healthier dishes such as sushi or miso soup because I'm more concerned about nutrition and well-being.

The original 'My dad is much more refined' likely confuses the subject; context indicates the speaker is describing themselves. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/subject reference. Change to 'I am much more refined now' to match meaning. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure the subject matches the intended speaker and avoid fillers.