Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và trật tự từ. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi như “in not only” và dùng thì đúng. Rút gọn ý, không lặp lại, và dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "sweet foods", "help me concentrate", "tough times"). Nên có tối đa 3–4 câu: chủ đề, giải thích ngắn, ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: My favourite food is sweet snacks. They lift my mood and help me concentrate while studying. For example, I often have a piece of chocolate before an exam to calm my nerves.

제안: Cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh câu bị lõm ý; sửa thì sang quá khứ (liked) và dùng cụm từ chính xác. Tránh các câu không liên kết như “The different different states.” Nên nêu chủ đề, lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, so, for example).

예시: When I was young I liked spicy food because I enjoyed strong flavours. For example, my family often ate spicy soups that made meals exciting and memorable.

제안: Cần dùng thì và từ đúng (e.g., "grown up" not "roll up"), và trả lời trực tiếp về thay đổi theo mùa nếu được hỏi. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về mùa và ví dụ. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, dùng linking words (for example, during, however).

예시: Yes, I do. During winter I prefer hot, spicy soups, while in summer I choose light, sweet snacks like fruit. For example, in winter I often eat spicy noodle soup to stay warm.

제안: Câu rất rối và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp; cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể. Tránh từ không phù hợp như "depression" hay lặp từ. Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: "Yes, it has changed. I used to... but now... because..."

예시: Yes, it has changed. I used to prefer very spicy dishes as a child because I liked intense flavours, but now I prefer sweet snacks because they help me relax and concentrate while studying.

× To be honest, I would like to sweet food because in not only make me excited but also help me to focus on my lesson and it can make me feel better after I have a bad day or I have difficult time.

✓ To be honest, I would like sweet food because it not only makes me excited but also helps me to focus on my lessons and can make me feel better after I have a bad day or a difficult time.

The sentence has several issues: incorrect preposition 'in' used before 'not only'; missing articles before 'sweet food' and 'difficult time'; incorrect verb forms and subject-verb agreement ('make' -> 'makes', 'help' -> 'helps'); pluralization of 'lesson' to 'lessons' for general meaning; unnecessary pronoun 'it' placement corrected. Suggestion: use 'not only... but also' structure with correct verb agreement and include articles where needed. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Well, when I was young, I really love spicy food simply because that's it.

✓ Well, when I was young, I really loved spicy food simply because of that.

Question uses past tense 'did you like', so response should be in past tense. 'love' should be 'loved'. 'that's it' is informal and unclear; 'because of that' or a clearer reason is better. Suggestion: match tense to the question and avoid vague phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× The different different states.

✓ There were many different varieties (or 'styles') of spicy food.

Sentence fragment and repetition 'different different states' is unclear and lacks a subject and verb. It should be rewritten as a complete sentence describing variations. Suggestion: provide a full clause like 'There were many different varieties of spicy food.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Other than other Thai food, it's had a like a cheap impression flavor in my mind when I first tried it.

✓ Compared to other Thai food, it left a cheap impression on me when I first tried it.

Incorrect use of 'other than other' and awkward structure 'it's had a like a cheap impression flavor'. Use 'compared to' or 'compared with', correct verb 'left' for past effect, and 'impression on me' is the proper collocation. Suggestion: use collocations 'left an impression on me' and simpler comparative phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? Well, I would say yes, at different time I would choose the food that related to that time.

✓ Well, I would say yes; at different times I choose foods that are related to that season.

Use plural 'times' for general cases, 'related to' requires passive 'are related to' or 'that relate to'; 'that time' is vague—'that season' or 'that period' is clearer. Also present simple 'choose' fits habitual meaning better than 'would choose'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general habits and correct verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× First of all, when I was young I usually ate spicy food.

✓ First of all, when I was young I usually ate spicy food.

This sentence is already correct in past tense and matches the question, so no change is required. Keep past simple 'ate' for habitual past actions. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× However, when I roll up, I refer sweet food because it's necessary for my study and my focus.

✓ However, when I grew up, I preferred sweet food because it was necessary for my studies and my concentration.

'Roll up' is incorrect idiom; should be 'grew up'. Tense should be past 'preferred' to match 'when I grew up'. 'Refer sweet food' is wrong verb choice. 'It's necessary for my study and my focus' needs plural 'studies' and 'concentration' is more natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement with past tense. Suggestion: use 'grew up' and 'preferred', and choose appropriate nouns like 'studies' and 'concentration'. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Say yes, there's a big difference between the flavor that I enjoy since I was young and right now when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, there is a big difference between the flavors I enjoyed when I was young and those I enjoy now.

The original mixes tenses and confusing time references. Use 'there is' for present observation and match past 'enjoyed' with 'when I was young'. Use plural 'flavors' and refer back to 'those I enjoy now' for clarity. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and consistent tense. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× I prefer some spicy food which give me a depression, I I mean impression.

✓ I preferred some spicy foods which left an impression on me.

'Prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match child-time context. 'Which give me a depression' is incorrect and likely meant 'gave me an impression'; 'left an impression on me' is the correct phrasing. Remove repeated 'I'. Suggestion: use 'left an impression' and correct tense. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× However, right now I need to eat more.

✓ However, right now I tend to eat more sweet foods.

Original 'I need to eat more' is vague and may contradict earlier context; likely intended to say preference change. Clarify by specifying 'sweet foods' and using 'tend to' for habitual present. Suggestion: make the sentence complete and consistent with context. Grammar problem type ID: 26