Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two supporting details (why you like it and when you eat it), and avoid repetition. Use linking words if adding reasons. Keep to 2–3 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., “dish” or “meal”) to sound more fluent.

예시: I love fried rice — it’s my favourite dish because it’s flavorful and quick to make. I often eat it for dinner or when I’m short on time, and I enjoy adding vegetables and soy sauce for extra taste.

제안: Organize your reply with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, give specific examples, and use simple, correct grammar. Use linking words like “for example” or “also” to connect ideas. Avoid unclear words and correct verb tenses (e.g., 'when I was young' + past tense).

예시: When I was young, I liked vegetables, especially broccoli and carrots. For example, I often ate steamed broccoli with dinner, and my parents encouraged me to try different veggies.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain with specific reasons or an exception. Use linking words (“however,” “because”) correctly and avoid repeating phrases. Correct subject-verb agreement and reduce redundancy.

예시: No, I usually eat the same foods all year: fried rice, fried chicken and vegetables like broccoli and carrots. However, I sometimes eat seasonal fruits in summer, such as watermelon.

제안: Answer clearly with a contrast between past and present using correct tenses and linking words (e.g., “used to… but now…”). Provide a brief reason for the change and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes. I used to dislike spicy food when I was a child, but I enjoy it a lot now because I learned to appreciate stronger flavours and tried spicy dishes with friends.

× My favorite food is fried rice. I'll eat a lot of that because I love fried rice so much.

✓ My favorite food is fried rice. I eat a lot of it because I love fried rice so much.

The modal 'I'll' (I will) suggests future intent but the context expresses a habitual action. Replace with simple present 'I eat' to indicate regular habit. Also replace 'that' with 'it' for correct pronoun reference to food.

× When I was seeing I like fidget table sport because I like when ha eating the greens which is them like broccoli. I I like car carrot also.

✓ When I was young, I liked playing table games because I liked eating greens such as broccoli. I also liked carrots.

Original has multiple structure and word choice errors. 'When I was seeing' is incorrect; use 'When I was young'. Present-tense 'like' must be past 'liked' to match 'When I was young'. 'fidget table sport' is unclear; likely 'playing table games' or 'table sports' — here 'playing table games' fits. 'when ha eating the greens which is them like broccoli' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I liked eating greens such as broccoli'. Remove duplicate 'I I' and correct 'car carrot' to 'carrots' or 'carrot' depending; use plural 'carrots'. Ensure tense consistency (past) for childhood.

× MMM no because I always eat the same food at the time of the year. I always eat fried rice, fried chicken and some vegetables, especially broccoli and carrots because I enjoy them because my mom also enjoy to eat them.

✓ No, because I always eat the same foods throughout the year. I always eat fried rice, fried chicken, and some vegetables, especially broccoli and carrots, because I enjoy them and my mom also enjoys eating them.

Use simple present 'I always eat' is correct for habitual actions; change 'food' to plural 'foods' or keep 'the same foods'. 'At the time of the year' is awkward; use 'throughout the year'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my mom also enjoy' should be 'my mom also enjoys'. Use 'enjoys eating' rather than 'enjoy to eat' (verb pattern: 'enjoy' + gerund). Added commas for clarity.

× When I was a child, I didn't like a spicy food and when I was teenager right now, I was so much like spicy food and I eat that a lot of spicy food.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't like spicy food, but as a teenager I liked spicy food a lot and I ate it often.

Tense and article errors: 'a spicy food' should be 'spicy food' (no article). 'When I was teenager right now' mixes times; use 'as a teenager' to indicate later period. Maintain past tense: 'I was so much like spicy food and I eat that a lot' is incorrect; use 'I liked spicy food a lot and I ate it often.' Ensure consistent past tense when describing past preferences.