Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and irrelevant words. Aim to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and simple vocabulary if necessary. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'also' to connect ideas.

예시: My favourite food is Japanese hotpot. I like it because it combines sweet and sour flavors and I can choose different meats. Also, I usually eat it with rice, which makes the meal more filling.

제안: Your answer mixes past and present and is confusing. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence about childhood, then give specific details and use linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

예시: When I was young, I liked simple fried rice. I loved it because it was mild and easy to eat. Also, my mother often added a fried egg on top, which made it more delicious.

제안: The answer is unclear and mixes time references. Answer directly about seasonal or occasion-based food habits, using clear time expressions (e.g. 'in winter', 'for my birthday') and linking words like 'for example' correctly. Use simple, correct grammar and stay within five sentences.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods for different occasions. For example, I usually eat Japanese food for family gatherings, but for my birthday this year I will choose Italian food. In winter, I prefer hot soups and stews because they are warming.

제안: This answer is grammatically incorrect and confusing. Start with a clear yes/no topic sentence (e.g. 'Yes, it has changed') and then give a specific reason and an example of a food you disliked before but like now. Use past tense for childhood and present perfect or present for current state, and avoid unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to dislike curry because the smell and strong spices put me off. However, as I grew older I learned to enjoy its flavours, and now I like mild curry with rice.

× The album admired to a superiority.

✓ I went to a restaurant I admired because it was very popular.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure: 'album' is wrong word, 'admired to a superiority' is ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Suggestion: use clear subject and verb ('I went to') and precise nouns ('restaurant', 'popular').

× I try a security first time at Japanese and it says it's test very sweet and sour at the same time and you can select the meat and the superior ghee restaurant and eat together with rice.

✓ I tried Japanese food for the first time; it tasted sweet and sour at the same time, and you could choose the meat and eat it with rice.

Multiple sentence structure and tense errors: 'I try a security first time at Japanese' is incorrect; 'try' should be past tense 'tried' (type 5 Past tense issue) and word choices are wrong. Also use consistent past tense 'tasted' and correct verb objects 'choose the meat and eat it with rice'. Suggestions: use past tense for past experience and simplify clauses.

× it says it's test very sweet and sour at the same time

✓ it tasted very sweet and sour at the same time

The phrase uses 'says' and 'test' incorrectly. This is misuse of verbs and adjectives/adverbs (type 13). Use the past verb 'tasted' to describe flavor. Place adverb 'very' before adjectives 'sweet and sour'.

× and you can select the meat and the superior ghee restaurant and eat together with rice.

✓ and you could choose the meat at a high-quality restaurant and eat it with rice.

Article and word choice are incorrect (type 22 Article errors). 'the superior ghee restaurant' is unclear; use 'a high-quality restaurant' and include object pronoun 'it' for 'eat it with rice'.

× One of my favorite foods is Tokiya Key.

✓ One of my favorite foods is Tokiya Key.

This sentence appears correct in number; no change needed. (type 1 Singular and plural issue) Note: keep proper noun as is.

× I try his first time last year and I don't like how the flavors can be sweet and sour at the same time.

✓ I tried it for the first time last year, and I didn't like how the flavors were sweet and sour at the same time.

Tense inconsistency: 'try' should be past 'tried' and 'don't like' should be past 'didn't like' to match 'last year' (type 5 Past tense issue). Also 'can be' should be 'were' to describe that past experience. Suggest maintaining past tense for past events.

× I especially enjoy choosing the different meat and eat them together with rice and fresh egg.

✓ I especially enjoy choosing different meats and eating them with rice and a fresh egg.

Verb and noun form errors: use plural 'meats' when referring to different types (type 1 Singular and plural issue) and parallel gerund form 'choosing' and 'eating' (type 8 Verb + -ing form). Also include article 'a' before 'fresh egg' and use 'them' to refer to 'meats'.

× Yesterday, umm, I I chose the different fate at the different family year, for example, then I'm serving my birthday party.

✓ Yesterday, I chose a different dish for a family event; for example, I served it at my birthday party.

This sentence has many structure and word choice errors (type 26). 'Different fate' and 'different family year' are unclear; replace with 'different dish' and 'family event'. Use past tense 'chose' and 'served'. Remove filler 'umm' and duplicate 'I'.

× Last year I chose the Japanese cuisine, but at this year I will choose the Italian cuisine instead to change.

✓ Last year I chose Japanese cuisine, but this year I will choose Italian cuisine instead for a change.

Incorrect time expression 'at this year' and awkward phrase 'to change'. This is a tense/time expression error (type 7 Future tense issue and type 6 Present tense issue). Use 'this year' and idiom 'for a change'.

× Most my favorite food have changed last since I was shy after shine.

✓ Most of my favorite foods have changed since I was a child.

Many word choice and structure errors (type 26). 'Most my' should be 'Most of my', 'food' should be plural 'foods', 'last since I was shy after shine' is nonsensical—replace with 'since I was a child'.

× I hate the Curry smelly because if I try it first time and it has a strong taste and I didn't like it.

✓ I hated curry because when I tried it the first time it had a strong smell and taste, and I didn't like it.

Adjective/adverb and tense issues (type 13 and type 5). 'Curry smelly' is incorrect; use 'curry' with 'had a strong smell'. Match past tense 'hated' and 'tried' for past experience. Avoid using 'if' when meaning 'when'.

× But when I'm growing up I turned to and it's not turned to be my favorite dishes.

✓ But as I grew up, I changed my mind and it became one of my favorite dishes.

Tense and structure errors (type 6 Present tense issue and type 26). Use past tense 'grew up' and 'changed' to describe development. 'Turned to' is incorrect here; use 'changed my mind' and 'became' to indicate becoming a favorite.