Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer more directly and clearly. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I don’t usually carry many keys.”). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, “But when I lived in a hostel I had several keys because I wanted to lock my possessions.”). Keep sentences grammatical and avoid unnecessary words. Aim for 2–3 short sentences and correct tense and word choice.

예시: No, I don’t usually carry many keys. However, when I lived in a hostel I had several because I needed to lock my belongings in a shared room.

제안: Provide a brief clear account with linking words and a little more detail. Start with a direct answer (Yes). Then describe when and what you did, using past tense and linking words like “then” or “so”. Add a short reflection if relevant (e.g. what you learned). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I once lost the keys to my hostel room. I couldn’t find them, so I had to break the lock to get inside, and after that I started keeping a spare key with a friend.

제안: Give a clear direct response and organise details logically. Start with a simple negative or positive sentence (e.g. “No, I don’t often lock myself out.”). Use linking words like “because” to explain why, and mention the exception briefly. Make grammar correct (e.g. “the keys are in my pocket”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I don’t often lock myself out because I usually keep my keys in my pocket and I rarely lock my room. Once I accidentally locked my vehicle, but that was the only time.

제안: Answer directly and explain the condition with clear vocabulary. Begin with your opinion (Yes or No), then qualify it using linking words like “but” or “unless” and give a reason (e.g. trustworthiness). Avoid filler sounds and unclear words like “tenure.” Use one or two concise sentences.

예시: Yes, it can be a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour, but only if you trust them. If you’re not sure about their reliability, it’s better to leave a spare key with a close friend or use a secure key box.

× No, always not.

✓ No, not always.

The adverb 'always' is in the wrong position. In negative sentences, 'not' typically follows the auxiliary or comes before an adverb: 'not always' is correct. Suggestion: place 'not' before 'always' or use 'I don't always' with an auxiliary.

× But till some time when I was in hostel I picked some keys now my cabbadent room also because there are many students can take things in don't pack that's why I locked my.

✓ But when I stayed in the hostel for a while, I collected some keys for my cabinet and locked my room because many students might take things if they're not packed properly.

This sentence has multiple structure issues: incorrect word order, missing articles, wrong verb forms and unclear nouns ('cabbadent'). I corrected word order, added articles ('the hostel', 'my cabinet', 'my room'), used past tense 'stayed' and 'collected', and clarified the cause using 'because many students might take things if they're not packed properly.' Suggestion: break long thoughts into shorter sentences, use correct nouns, include articles, and keep tense consistent.

× Yes, I lost my keys in hostel of my room.

✓ Yes, I lost my keys in my hostel room.

Preposition and article usage and word order were incorrect. Use 'in my hostel room' or 'in my room at the hostel.' The past tense 'lost' is correct; adjust phrase order and possessive 'my' for clarity.

× Then I break my lock and open door.

✓ Then I broke the lock and opened the door.

The verbs should be in past tense to match the sequence of events. Use 'broke' (past of 'break') and 'opened' (past of 'open'), and include definite article 'the' before 'lock' and 'door.'

× No, I don't forget the keys and lock myself because the keys in my pocket and I don't lock my room.

✓ No, I don't forget my keys or lock myself out because the keys are in my pocket and I don't lock my room.

Use 'don't forget' with the object 'my keys.' Use 'lock myself out' for the reflexive idea and include 'are' for present continuous state ('the keys are in my pocket'). Also use 'or' instead of 'and' to express alternative. Articles and prepositions corrected.

× One time I locked my vehicle, otherwise not.

✓ One time I locked my vehicle; otherwise, I haven't.

Tense consistency and clarity needed. 'One time I locked my vehicle' is past; to show it didn't happen otherwise, use present perfect 'I haven't' or rephrase 'I haven't done that otherwise.' Adding punctuation and a clarifying verb improves clarity.

× Uh, yes, it is good idea, but your neighbors are good if your neighbors are not, uh, tenure.

✓ Yes, it is a good idea, but only if your neighbors are trustworthy; if they are not, then not.

Missing article 'a' before 'good idea.' The sentence also used incorrect word 'tenure' and repeated 'neighbors' awkwardly. I replaced 'tenure' with 'trustworthy' to fit intended meaning and restructured to be clearer. Suggestion: use definite/indefinite articles where needed and choose appropriate adjectives.