Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak in present tense and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I walk a lot), then give 1–2 specific details using linking words. Avoid tense mistakes and unnecessary fragments. Pronunciation and sentence structure need clarity.

예시: Yes, I walk a lot. I walk every morning when I wake up, and I often walk with my clients to the park or the shops because I help them with errands.

제안: Use past tense consistently and organize into a topic sentence plus supporting detail. Be specific about frequency and activities, and use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "because", "so").

예시: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. For example, I used to go to the nearby park with my grandfather almost every weekend because he liked spending time outdoors.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence explaining the main reason, then add two specific, connected reasons using linking words. Finish your thought; avoid leaving sentences incomplete.

예시: People like walking in parks because parks are relaxing and help balance a busy life. For instance, students can relieve stress after studying and office workers can take a short break to exercise and refresh their minds.

제안: Be specific and use conditional form correctly. Begin with a clear conditional sentence (If I had the chance...), then give concrete details about the place and reasons why (scenery, trail length). Avoid unclear words and fragmented phrases.

예시: If I had the chance, I would go hiking at Maolin. There are long trails that take about two hours, and I would enjoy the beautiful scenery and the fresh air while getting good exercise.

제안: Use past tense for past actions and be concise. Start with a direct answer (I went to Sandin Park yesterday), then add specific routine details and link them (for example, "usually" or "after"). Correct small errors (park name vs house).

예시: I went to Sandin Park yesterday. I usually walk there twice a week, and last night I walked there with my parents after dinner.

× Yes, I did. I think daily.

✓ Yes, I do. I walk daily.

The student used 'did' (past tense) inconsistently with 'I think daily' and the intended habitual meaning. Use present simple 'do' and 'walk' to express routine actions. Suggestion: use present simple for habits (I do/walk daily).

× I walk a lot when I was woke up.

✓ I walk a lot after I wake up.

The sentence mixes present simple 'walk' with past 'was woke up' (incorrect passive). Use present simple for habitual actions and the simple present 'wake up' (not 'was woke up'). Also 'after' clarifies sequence. Suggestion: 'I walk a lot after I wake up.'

× I walk in a little bit and when I go to my client's home, I just assist them to do a lot of things and basically just went to the park and walk with them or go to the grocery shopping.

✓ I walk a little, and when I go to my clients' homes, I assist them with many things. Basically, we go to the park and walk together, or go grocery shopping.

There are tense and form errors: 'walk in a little bit' is unclear; use 'walk a little'. 'Client's home' should be plural possessive 'clients' homes' if referring to multiple clients. 'Assist them to do a lot of things' should be 'assist them with many things'. 'Went to the park and walk' mixes past and present; use consistent present simple for habitual actions. Also use 'grocery shopping' without 'the'. Suggestion: keep present simple and correct prepositions and plural possessive.

× So it's.

✓ So that's it.

The fragment 'So it's.' is incomplete and likely intended as 'So that's it.' Use contraction 'that's' and complete the phrase. Suggestion: complete fragments to avoid sentence fragments.

× When I was a child and I worked a lot with my grandpa and my grandpa like to go to the park nearby my house.

✓ When I was a child I worked a lot with my grandpa, and my grandpa liked to go to the park near my house.

Tense inconsistency: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'When I was a child'. 'Nearby my house' is awkward; use 'near my house'. Suggestion: keep past tense for past memories.

× So I would like to say I quite enjoy go to park to work with my grandpa.

✓ So I would like to say I quite enjoyed going to the park to work with my grandpa.

Use past tense 'enjoyed' for past events, and 'going' (gerund) after 'enjoy'. 'Go to park' needs an article: 'the park'. Suggestion: use 'enjoyed going to the park'.

× So that's quite often to do that.

✓ So I did that quite often.

Original word order is unnatural. Use clear subject-verb structure: 'I did that quite often.' Suggestion: keep simple subject-verb-object order.

× I think it's a good place can relaxing and balance your lifestyle.

✓ I think it's a good place to relax and balance your lifestyle.

Incorrect structure: 'can relaxing' is ungrammatical. Use infinitive 'to relax'. 'Balance your lifestyle' is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'a good place to relax'.

× So usually if for example, usually if you are student, when you finish your study, you can go to the park to do some exercise and enjoy a little bit walking.

✓ For example, if you are a student, when you finish your studies, you can go to the park to exercise and enjoy a short walk.

Remove duplicated 'usually if', add article 'a student', plural 'studies', use 'exercise' (verb) or 'do some exercise', and 'a short walk' is more natural than 'a little bit walking'. Suggestion: use articles and correct noun forms.

× And if you are the office worker and you may need to.

✓ And if you are an office worker, you may need to do the same to relax.

Original is a sentence fragment and awkward article use 'the office worker'. Add 'an' and complete the clause. Suggestion: avoid fragments by completing the idea.

× If I would like to go to the long world, maybe I will go to Mao Lin here have you can go hiking and have very long distance like walking side, you can to have around 2 hours and do a little bit longer exercise and you can enjoy quite nice here waiter and will.

✓ If I could go on a long trip, I might go to Maolin here. You can go hiking there on long trails that take about two hours, do longer exercise, and enjoy the nice scenery and weather.

Original mixes conditional forms and has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use 'If I could' or 'If I had the chance' and 'I might' for hypothetical. Correct place name 'Maolin'. Use 'hiking' and 'trails', 'about two hours', 'nice scenery and weather'. Suggestion: use proper conditional structure and simplify sentences.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

The question from examiner uses 'lately' which is okay, but 'lately' with past simple can be awkward; 'recently' fits better. Suggestion: use 'recently' for past actions.

× Yesterday I just went to the park nearby.

✓ Yesterday I went to the nearby park.

'Just' is unnecessary with 'yesterday' and word order 'park nearby' should be 'nearby park' or 'park nearby my house'. Suggestion: simplify to 'Yesterday I went to the nearby park.'

× My house is called Sandin Park and usually I will win here twice a week and I will go with my parents after we have dinner.

✓ The park near my house is called Sandin Park, and I usually come here twice a week. I go with my parents after we have dinner.

Confusion between 'my house is called Sandin Park' (park vs house). 'Will win' is incorrect; use 'come' or 'go'. Use present simple 'usually' with habitual actions. Suggestion: clarify subject and use correct verbs for habitual actions.

× So that's recently I walk in the Sandin Park.

✓ So recently I've been walking in Sandin Park.

Use present perfect continuous 'I've been walking' for recent repeated actions. 'In the Sandin Park' unnecessary article 'the' before proper park name. Suggestion: use present perfect continuous for recent activities.