Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp hơn, rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi dùng từ (work/ rest/ go) sai chỗ và lặp từ. Sử dụng câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi thêm 1–2 câu cụ thể (khi nào, thường đi bao lâu) và liên từ để nối ý.

예시: I don't walk a lot during weekdays because I feel tired after work. However, I try to take short walks at the weekend for about 20–30 minutes to get some exercise and fresh air.

제안: Cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và giảm tiếng ậm ừ. Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề ở quá khứ, giải thích cụ thể nơi chốn/hoạt động và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

예시: Yes, I did. I often walked outside when I was a child because I had plenty of free time. I usually went to the local playground where I played games and ran around with my friends.

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng chính xác (walk, park, places). Trả lời rõ lý do chính và bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: không gian, an toàn, hoạt động) với liên từ.

예시: People like walking in parks mainly because of the fresh air and open space. In addition, parks are safe and pleasant for activities like jogging, walking dogs, or meeting friends.

제안: Câu trả lời lủng củng, lặp từ và ngữ pháp điều kiện sai. Nên dùng cấu trúc điều kiện loại 2: "If I had the chance, I would..." Nêu rõ địa điểm và lý do cụ thể, tối đa 3 câu.

예시: If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would choose a countryside trail near my town. There is wide open space and beautiful scenery, which would make the walk relaxing and refreshing.

제안: Tốt hơn nhưng cần thống nhất thì quá khứ và sửa lỗi thì, dùng câu mạch lạc hơn. Tránh câu ngắn vụn; nối các ý bằng liên từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (thời lượng, hoạt động thấy).

예시: I went for a walk in the local park last weekend. It was peaceful with many trees, so I wanted some fresh air and exercise. I walked for about 30 minutes and saw people chatting and children playing on the grass.

× Well I don't work a lot after work I usually feel quite tired so I prefer to rest at home and re rest at home where I then go for work. Though I try to take short work at the weekend to get some exercise.

✓ Well, I don't walk a lot. After work I usually feel quite tired, so I prefer to rest at home. I sometimes go for a short walk at the weekend to get some exercise.

The original contains incorrect verb choices and inconsistent tense/meaning. Use 'walk' instead of 'work' where appropriate (verb choice error within present tense). Separate sentences for clarity and use 'sometimes' and 'short walk' to express occasional action. Ensure present simple for habitual actions: 'I don't walk', 'I usually feel', 'I prefer', 'I sometimes go'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yet I did, I often go outside to have a walk when I was a child because I have a lot of time to, uh, talk time. So I usually go to the playground and working there.

✓ Yes, I did. I often went outside to take a walk when I was a child because I had a lot of free time. I usually went to the playground and played there.

When talking about past habitual actions, use past simple: 'went', 'had', 'went', 'played'. Correct verb forms and collocations: 'take a walk' and 'free time'. Replace incorrect present forms 'go' and 'have' with past forms to match 'when I was a child'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think that people might work in part is because they like the fresh air and there are plenty of place for them to work.

✓ I think that people might like walking in parks because they enjoy the fresh air and there are plenty of places for them to relax or exercise.

The sentence misuses words ('work in part', 'place', 'work') and has awkward structure. Replace with correct collocations: 'like walking in parks', 'fresh air', 'places', and appropriate verbs 'relax' or 'exercise'. Ensure noun forms are plural when needed. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× If I have a chance to take a long walk, I would choose my my I would choose a local area in local board in my area because there is plenty of space to people for working for example it when I was a child actually.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would choose a local area in my neighborhood because there is plenty of space for people to walk. For example, I used to go there when I was a child.

This sentence mixes present and conditional incorrectly. For hypothetical situations contrary to present fact, use the second conditional: 'If I had... I would choose...'. Fix repetition, choose correct nouns ('neighborhood'), and use 'for people to walk'. Use past simple 'used to go' for past habit. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× Well, I went for a walk in the local park that weekend. It was peaceful and there were many trees, so I went. I want some fresh air and exercise. For example, I work for about 30 minutes and I saw people shouting and children playing.

✓ Well, I went for a walk in the local park last weekend. It was peaceful and there were many trees, so I went to get some fresh air and exercise. For example, I walked for about 30 minutes and I saw people chatting and children playing.

Use 'last weekend' instead of 'that weekend' when referring to a recent past event. Maintain past tense for actions: 'I went', 'I walked', 'I saw'. Replace 'want' with past 'went to get' to express purpose. 'Work for about 30 minutes' is incorrect; use 'walked for about 30 minutes'. 'Shouting' may be grammatically okay but 'chatting' fits a park scene better; ensure verb tenses agree. Grammar problem type ID: 5