Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more informative and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. For example, explain how often you walk, where, and why or why not. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: No, I don't walk very often. I usually drive or take public transport because I commute long distances, but I try to walk short distances for errands at weekends to stay active.

제안: Extend the answer with specific details and a linking word. Mention frequency, places you walked, and a brief reason or memory to make it natural and engaging.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked to the park near my house with my friends on weekends because our parents liked us to play outside and get fresh air.

제안: Give a fuller, more natural response with a topic sentence and supporting reasons. Use linking words (e.g., because, also, for example) and include specific benefits that people enjoy in parks.

예시: People like walking in parks because the air is fresher and there is less traffic. Also, parks offer pleasant scenery and quiet paths, which help people relax and exercise.

제안: Correct grammar and choose a realistic place. Use a conditional structure properly and give reasons why you would choose that location. Keep answer concise and specific.

예시: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the coast near my city because the sea breeze and wide promenade make walking very enjoyable and refreshing.

제안: Answer the past-tense question correctly and give a specific recent place you walked to. Use a past tense sentence and add a brief reason or timing. Avoid irrelevant replies about work unless linked clearly.

예시: Recently I went for a walk in the neighborhood park last Saturday because I wanted some fresh air after working at home all day.

× Because Park has fresh air.

✓ Because the park has fresh air.

The student omitted the definite article 'the' before a singular countable noun 'park' when referring to a specific concept (parks in general or the local park). Use 'the' to indicate a particular place familiar in context; alternatively use the plural 'parks' ("Parks have fresh air") for a general statement.

× If I have a chance, I will walk in my house.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in my neighborhood/park.

The question asked a hypothetical about a past-tense conditional structure ('Where would you like... if you had the chance?'). The student used a first conditional (If I have... I will) which does not match the hypothetical. Also 'walk in my house' is odd for a 'long walk' — 'neighborhood' or 'park' fits better. Use the second conditional (If + past simple, would + base verb) for unlikely or hypothetical situations.

× I will work at home.

✓ I worked at home recently. / I have been working at home recently.

The question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' which expects a past or present perfect answer about recent past activity. The student's reply uses future tense 'will', which is inappropriate. Use past simple ('I worked at home' if a specific past time) or present perfect ('I have been working at home') to describe recent actions. Additionally, 'work at home' does not answer 'where did you go for a walk'; a more relevant reply would mention a place walked to (e.g., 'I walked in the park near my house').