Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan; ancak biraz daha ayrıntı ve bağlaç ekleyerek daha doğal ve etkili hale getirebilirsiniz. Örneğin neden kısa mesafeleri tercih ettiğinizi ve ne sıklıkta yürüdüğünüzü belirtin.

예시: Yes, I walk quite regularly. I usually walk short distances, mainly for errands or to the nearby park, because I find it quicker and healthier than driving.

제안: Cevap tekrarlı ve dağınık; cümle yapısını düzeltip daha akıcı detay ekleyin. Hangi aktiviteleri yaptığınızı, kiminle yürüdüğünüzü veya ne sıklıkla yürüdüğünüzü belirtmek faydalı olur.

예시: Yes, I did. I grew up in a village, so I often went for walks and hikes in the nearby forest with my friends and family, usually almost every weekend.

제안: Genel bir fikir vermişsiniz fakat doğru bağlam ve daha spesifik nedenler ekleyerek cümleyi güçlendirin. Ayrıca 'the States' gibi belirsiz ifadelerden kaçının ve insanlara görüş, temiz hava, güvenlik gibi sebepler sunun.

예시: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air, green space and a peaceful environment, especially in cities where there are many buildings and limited open areas.

제안: Cümledeki anlam belirsiz ve kelime seçimi hatalı. Neden deniz kenarını tercih ettiğinizi açıkça söyleyin ve duygusal ya da görsel detaylar ekleyin. Ayrıca cümle yapısını daha doğal hale getirin.

예시: I would love to take a long walk by the seaside because I enjoy the sound of the waves and the open view, which helps me relax and think clearly.

제안: Cevap net fakat küçük bir tekrar hatası ve daha fazla bağlam eksik. Gitme zamanını ve yürüyüşün nasıl olduğunu, kiminle gittiğinizi veya ne kadar sürdüğünü ekleyerek yanıtı geliştirin.

예시: Recently I went for a walk at Amar Lake since there is no sea nearby in Ankara; I went with a friend and we walked along the shore for about an hour, enjoying the scenery.

× Yes I do. I prefer walking for short distances.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer walking short distances.

The original sentence uses 'walking for short distances' which is not incorrect but slightly wordy. More natural English omits 'for' in this context: 'walking short distances.' Also a comma is needed after 'Yes'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + gerund without 'for' when indicating general preference (prefer walking short distances).

× Yes, I did. I spent my childhood in the village, in my village. I used to. Hiking in forest.

✓ Yes, I did. I spent my childhood in my village. I used to go hiking in the forest.

Sentence fragments and repetition occur. 'I used to.' is a fragment; it should be followed by the activity. 'Hiking in forest' lacks an article and proper verb. Combine into a full sentence: 'I used to go hiking in the forest.' Also remove redundant 'the village, in my village' and use 'my village.'

× Because there are lots of buildings in the States and so people can only walk in the park.

✓ Because there are lots of buildings in the city and so people can only walk in parks.

The phrase 'in the States' is ambiguous and likely incorrect here; 'the city' or 'cities' fits better. Also 'the park' implies a single park; use plural 'parks' if speaking generally. Preposition 'in' is fine but article usage and noun choice should match generalization: 'in cities' or 'in the city' and 'walk in parks.'

× I usually prefer Seaside for a long walk because I like watching to see when I'm walking.

✓ I usually prefer the seaside for a long walk because I like watching the sea when I'm walking.

Proper noun/phrase needs an article: 'the seaside.' 'Watching to see' is ungrammatical; use 'watching the sea' or 'seeing the sea.' Also 'sea' not 'see.' Replace 'see' (verb) with 'sea' (noun).

× I went to to Amar Lake because there isn't a sea in Ankara.

✓ I went to Amar Lake because there isn't a sea in Ankara.

There is a duplicated 'to' (typo). The rest is fine: past tense 'went' is correct and present 'isn't' correctly states a general fact about Ankara. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'to' and ensure spacing is correct.