Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Avoid filler words and repetition, and correct word choice (e.g., 'some science books', not 'sign books'). Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

예시: I enjoy reading sometimes, especially science books and comics that teach practical ideas. For example, science books have helped me understand simple experiments, and comics make learning fun and easy to remember.

제안: Give a clear preference and two concise, specific reasons linked logically. Correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'book' not 'pook') and avoid conflicting phrases like 'also' that confuse meaning. Keep sentences coherent and natural.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and often cheaper. For instance, I can carry many ebooks on my phone and access free articles online without buying physical books.

제안: This answer is clear but can be more concise and varied. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a contrasting example of when you skim. Use linking words (e.g., 'however', 'on the other hand') for coherence and be specific about what you do when reading carefully (note-taking, highlighting).

예시: I read carefully when the material is related to my school subjects because I need to understand details for exams and assignments. However, I only skim articles or news when I just want a general idea and I don't need to remember them.

제안: Make your position clear and avoid confusing comparisons. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'scanning' vs 'detailed reading') and give specific reasons and an example of how detailed reading helps you. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition like 'by reading by reading'.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas and remember important information. For example, when I study a textbook chapter in detail, I take notes and review them, which improves my exam performance.

× Honestly I do prefer reading sometimes.

✓ Honestly, I prefer reading sometimes.

Using 'do prefer' is grammatically correct for emphasis but sounds unnatural here. Use simple present 'I prefer' to state a habitual preference.

× Uh, some sign books or comic books help me learn a lot and gain some practical knowledge.

✓ Uh, some science books or comic books help me learn a lot and gain practical knowledge.

The word 'sign' is likely a typo for 'science'. Correct the adjective 'science' which modifies 'books'. Ensure word choice matches intended meaning.

× But obviously I don't like reading much because compared to other activities it is not as enjoyable as these those are.

✓ But obviously I don't like reading much because, compared to other activities, it is not as enjoyable as they are.

The original uses a confused demonstrative phrase 'these those are'. Replace with correct pronoun 'they are' and add commas for clarity. This fixes sentence structure and reference.

× I would say I do prefer reading on the screen because also reading on a paper is kind of classic.

✓ I would say I prefer reading on a screen because reading on paper is kind of classic.

Drop unnecessary 'do' for natural present preference and remove extra 'also'. Use 'on a screen' and 'on paper' without articles for idiomatic English.

× The reading on the screen helps give me a sense of convenience and also I don't need to pay for a pook and I will read it for free.

✓ Reading on the screen gives me a sense of convenience, and I don't need to pay for a book because I can read it for free.

Remove unnecessary definite article 'The' before 'reading', correct typo 'pook' to 'book', and rephrase for clarity and natural word order. Combine clauses with conjunction and use present simple for habitual fact.

× I would definitely read it carefully because by reading those papers or books, I can learn a lot of information which is very useful for my subjects and for my exams as well.

✓ I would definitely read them carefully because, by reading those papers or books, I can learn a lot of information that is very useful for my subjects and exams.

Match pronoun 'them' to plural 'papers or books'. Use 'that' instead of 'which' for defining clause and remove redundant 'as well'. Keep gerund 'reading' correctly but ensure pronoun agreement.

× Well, actually I enjoy detailed reading more because others can give me a sense of convenience but as I told you by reading by reading I can get a lot of radical and theoretical information for my life so that I would extremely prefer detailed reading more.

✓ Well, actually I enjoy detailed reading more because skimming can give me a sense of convenience, but as I told you, by detailed reading I can get a lot of practical and theoretical information for my life, so I strongly prefer detailed reading.

Replace vague pronoun 'others' with 'skimming' to clarify contrast. Remove repeated phrase 'by reading by reading'. Change 'radical' (wrong word) to 'practical' to make sense. Use 'strongly prefer' instead of 'would extremely prefer' for natural collocation and correct adverb placement.