Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms, articles), remove redundancy, and give one specific supporting detail. Limit to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words if adding details (for example, “because” or “so”).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially at weekends when I have free time. I usually read novels because they help me relax and refresh my mind.

제안: Clarify and polish your answer: begin with a clear preference sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons linked logically. Avoid vague phrases like “attachment with the paper”; be precise (e.g., ‘like the feel’).

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I like the feel of a physical book. Also, screens often distract me with notifications, so I can concentrate better with paper.

제안: Organize into a direct topic sentence and two clear contrasting examples. Correct grammar (use ‘when I read official documents’), and add linking words like ‘for example’ and ‘however’. Be specific about situations and why careful reading is needed.

예시: I need to read carefully when dealing with official documents or studying for exams. For example, when I check contracts or prepare for the IELTS, I focus closely to avoid mistakes; however, I skim light articles or social posts when I just want quick information.

제안: State your preference clearly, then explain reasons with clean grammar and linking words. Replace unclear phrases like “the delivering of” with ‘detailed reading’. Keep to 2–3 sentences and give a brief example of when you use each method.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to concentrate and understand the topic fully. For instance, when I study a textbook I read slowly and take notes, while I only scan headlines or short news when I need quick facts.

× Usually on the weekends I have a Pretty Little time.

✓ Usually on the weekends I have a pretty little time.

Use of capitalization is incorrect (not a proper noun) and article usage is acceptable; main issue is capitalization and unnatural phrasing. Suggest using lowercase for common adjectives and consider a clearer phrase such as 'a nice time' or 'some free time'.

× If I got opportunity I read books because it it gives more energy, refreshment.

✓ If I get the opportunity, I read books because they give me more energy and refreshment.

Conditional with present/future requires present tense in the if-clause (use 'get' not 'got'). Also add the definite article 'the' before 'opportunity'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'books' and include 'me' after 'give'. Remove duplicated 'it'. Add commas for clarity.

× I prefer it on the paper over the screen because I have an attachment with the paper but I'm not familiar with the screen and when I start reading on the screen I feel bored and distracted.

✓ I prefer paper over the screen because I am attached to paper; I'm not familiar with screens, and when I start reading on a screen I feel bored and distracted.

Do not use the definite article 'the' with uncountable or general nouns like 'paper' or plural 'screens' here. 'Attachment with' is incorrect; use 'attached to'. Use plural 'screens' when speaking generally. Split into clearer clauses and use consistent phrasing.

× When why not I am rewarding my official documents then I have to careful.

✓ When I am proofreading my official documents, I have to be careful.

Original sentence has extra words ('why not') and incorrect verb 'rewarding' instead of 'proofreading' or 'checking'. Also missing auxiliary verb 'be' before 'careful'. Rearrange word order and use appropriate verb for the context.

× Similarly for the exam preparations like IELTS, I I should be serious when reading in.

✓ Similarly, for exam preparations like the IELTS, I should be serious when reading.

Duplicate 'I' should be removed. 'Reading in' is incorrect; drop 'in'. Include the article 'the' before 'IELTS' optionally. Ensure concise phrasing consistent with present habitual action.

× However in other conditions it depends on the what I am reading.

✓ However, in other situations, it depends on what I am reading.

'Conditions' is awkward; 'situations' fits better. Remove extra 'the' before 'what'. Add commas for clarity and smooth flow.

× Umm, I prefer the delivering of over scanning.

✓ Umm, I prefer detailed reading over scanning.

'Delivering of' is incorrect and unclear. The intended contrast is between detailed reading and scanning; use 'detailed reading' which is a noun phrase. Maintain parallel structure 'X over Y'.

× When I sit on the reading I have to give some time and want to concentrate on the on the subject what I'm reading.

✓ When I sit down to read, I have to give it some time and concentrate on the subject I'm reading about.

Use 'sit down to read' rather than 'sit on the reading'. Include object 'it' after 'give'. Remove duplicate 'on the'. Use 'about' after 'reading' or rephrase to 'the subject I'm reading'. Ensure natural verb and preposition choices.

× So scanning is a not good option for me.

✓ So scanning is not a good option for me.

The placement of 'a' is incorrect before 'not'; remove the article. 'Not a good option' is proper negative construction without splitting 'not' and 'a' incorrectly.