Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答をもっと自然で文法的に正しくし、簡潔に話す練習をしてください。具体的には：1) 文法ミス（make me feeling → make me feel、relax → relaxed、I lead → I prefer/ I like）を直す。2) トピック・センテンスを明確にして、Supporting detailを1つか2つに絞る（どんなジャンルが好きか、その理由）。3) 最大5文に収め、冗長な表現を避ける。練習方法：正しい文を声に出して5回繰り返し、録音して発音と流暢さを確認する。

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax. I especially prefer mystery and fantasy novels, as they let me escape into imaginative worlds. For example, when I read a mystery I like trying to solve the puzzle before the ending, which makes it exciting.

제안: 意味は伝わるが、論理展開と語彙の選択が不自然です。具体的には：1) ‘It depends on the situation’と語尾を整える。2) 不要な文（Because I like balls.）は削除するか置き換える。3) 理由は明確に簡潔に述べる（軽さのため・リラックスのため）。接続詞（so, because, when）を使って一貫性を持たせる。練習方法：状況ごとに2～3文で理由を準備し、5文以内で話す練習をする。

예시: It depends on the situation. If I am travelling or commuting, I prefer e-books because they are lightweight and convenient. But at home I choose paper books when I want to relax, because I enjoy the feel and smell of real pages.

제안: 回答が混乱していて具体性が足りません。具体的には：1) 最初の文は意味が不明確（read early when I am busy→何を言いたいのか不明）。2) 明確な対比を示す（いつは詳細に読み、いつはざっと読むか）。3) 理由と例を加える。語順と文法（I have to read carefully when I write reports）を直す。練習方法：『いつ/なぜ/例』の順で答えるテンプレートを使い、毎回同じ構造で練習する。

예시: I usually skim articles when I am busy to get the main idea quickly, for example checking news headlines. However, I read very carefully when I write reports or study for exams because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes.

제안: 理由は伝わるが表現が不自然で語彙選択が曖昧です。具体的には：1) 'spread my emerging words' は意味不明なので具体的に何をしたいのか（語彙を増やしたい、想像力を広げたい）に言い換える。2) 接続詞で論理を整理する。3) 具体例（場面や効果）を加える。練習方法：自分が詳細に読む理由を3つ用意し、それぞれを短い文で述べる練習をする。

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me visualise scenes and understand characters deeply. Also, careful reading improves my vocabulary and helps me notice subtle details that make the story more enjoyable.

× Yes, I like reading because it makes me feeling more comfortable and relax.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

'Make' is a causative verb that should be followed by the base form of the verb (make someone do), so 'makes me feeling' is incorrect; use 'makes me feel'. Also 'relax' should be the adjective 'relaxed' to describe a state. Suggestion: use 'makes me feel' + adjective (e.g., relaxed).

× Especially I lead a a mystery book or fantasy book.

✓ Especially, I read a mystery or fantasy book.

The verb 'lead' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'read'. There is also a duplicated article 'a a' and unnecessary repetition 'book' after each genre. Suggestion: use 'read' and simplify with 'a mystery or fantasy book'.

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

When referring to a specific context, English requires the definite article 'the' before 'situation'. Suggestion: use 'the situation' or 'the circumstances'.

× Because I like balls.

✓ Because I like both.

'Balls' is a wrong word here; context suggests the student meant 'both' (prefer both formats). This is a word choice error affecting sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'both' or rephrase to 'I like both paper and screens'.

× If I want I don't want to carry heavy work, I choose ebooks.

✓ If I don't want to carry heavy work, I choose ebooks.

The sentence contains a contradictory 'If I want I don't want' and awkward noun 'work' for 'books'. Remove redundant phrase and use 'books' instead of 'work'. Suggestion: 'If I don't want to carry heavy books, I choose ebooks.'

× If I want to feel more relaxed, I choose paper books.

✓ If I want to feel more relaxed, I choose paper books.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× I think I have to read early when I I am busy.

✓ I think I have to read quickly when I am busy.

The phrase 'read early' is incorrect for the intended meaning; likely the student meant 'read quickly' or 'read earlier'. Also there is a duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I' and use 'quickly' to express speed: 'read quickly'.

× On the other hand I have to read carefully when I write some report.

✓ On the other hand, I have to read carefully when I write a report.

Article 'some' is informal and awkward here; use 'a report'. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase. The structure 'have to read carefully when I write a report' is correct. Suggestion: use 'a report' and include comma for clarity.

× I like to read more carefully because I like to imagine the book's detail and book's content, and I want to spread my emerging words.

✓ I like to read more carefully because I like to imagine the book's details and content, and I want to expand my emerging vocabulary.

Use plural 'details' for multiple details and avoid repeating 'book's'. 'Spread my emerging words' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'expand my emerging vocabulary'. 'Expand' is a better verb and 'vocabulary' is the correct noun. Suggestion: use 'details and content' and 'expand my emerging vocabulary'.