Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng: Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ "uh"), sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ "broaden my horizons", "news" thay vì "the newspaper" nếu nói chung). Lược bớt chi tiết không cần thiết và sắp xếp câu theo cấu trúc rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu loại sách/ bài báo bạn thích và lý do cụ thể, kèm dẫn chứng ngắn.

예시: To be honest, I enjoy reading because it broadens my horizons. For example, I often read news websites and short stories after school to relax, and they help me learn new vocabulary and ideas.

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, trật tự ý và từ vựng chính xác: sửa lỗi cấu trúc (ví dụ "it is"), dùng cụm từ phù hợp ("look up words" thay vì "find down it"). Thêm liên kết logic giữa lý do và ví dụ. Giữ trong tối đa 3-4 câu đủ rõ ràng.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it's faster and more convenient. For instance, I can quickly look up unfamiliar words and adjust font size, which makes studying easier.

제안: Rõ ràng hơn về ý nghĩa: câu trả lời hiện thiếu mạch lạc và nhiều lỗi khiến ý không rõ. Trả lời theo cấu trúc: nêu khi nào cần đọc kỹ (ví dụ: hợp đồng, hướng dẫn, tài liệu học) và khi nào không (ví dụ: tin tức nhanh, quảng cáo). Dùng từ vựng chính xác và liên từ để liên kết ý (because, while, for example).

예시: I need to read carefully when the information is important, such as contracts, instructions, or study materials, because mistakes can be costly. However, I don't read carefully when I skim news headlines or ads, since I only want the main idea.

제안: Giảm lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp: thay "secure" bằng từ phù hợp (e.g. "expand"), dùng cụm từ rõ ràng như "improve my vocabulary". Bổ sung liên kết và ví dụ ngắn để minh họa tại sao detailed reading hữu ích. Hạn chế câu dài không cần thiết, tối đa 3-4 câu.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me expand my vocabulary and understand ideas more deeply. For example, when I read academic articles carefully, I learn new expressions and remember meanings better.

× To be honest, I quite like reading because, uh, it helps me broaden my horizon and breath within school, uh, So I often read uh, the lawful and the newspaper is a fun way to relax after a busy day.

✓ To be honest, I quite like reading because it helps me broaden my horizons and breathe while at school. So I often read law-related material and the newspaper as a fun way to relax after a busy day.

The sentence contains several issues: incorrect noun form 'horizon' should be plural 'horizons' (common collocation), 'breath' (noun) is used instead of 'breathe' (verb), and the phrase 'within school' is unnatural; 'while at school' is preferable. Also 'the lawful' is not correct; likely meant 'law-related material' or 'legal texts'. Suggestions: use correct verb/noun forms and idiomatic prepositional phrases. Use parallel structure and concise phrasing.

× I prefer to read on a screen because it very fast and modern. When I do some vocabulary I can find down it so it's very useful and comfortable.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it is very fast and modern. When I look up vocabulary I can find it easily, so it's very useful and comfortable.

Missing auxiliary 'is' causes grammatical error; this is a linking verb issue (present simple). 'Do some vocabulary' is incorrect; use 'look up vocabulary' or 'search for vocabulary'. 'Find down it' is ungrammatical; use 'find it easily'. Suggestions: include the verb 'is' for descriptions, use correct collocations like 'look up' and place objects after verbs correctly.

× Or when I need to read carefully. Or when I read important information in practice. Skin and skin skill when I not read carefully, When I only give idea many so I think really carefully.

✓ I need to read carefully when I encounter important information in practice or when developing practical skills. If the text is only giving many ideas, I do not read as carefully, but if details matter I read very carefully.

Original contains fragmented sentences and unclear phrases ('Skin and skin skill' is unintelligible). 'When I not read carefully' lacks auxiliary 'do' and negation. Sentence fragments should be combined into coherent sentences. Suggestions: combine related ideas, correct negation with 'do not' or 'don't', and replace unclear vocabulary with intended meaning such as 'practical skills'.

× To be honest, I prefer detailed reading because I want to improve reading, secure and boost my vocabulary, so I want to detail information. So I think it's a very useful and important for me.

✓ To be honest, I prefer detailed reading because I want to improve my reading, strengthen and boost my vocabulary, so I focus on detailed information. I think it's very useful and important for me.

Problems: missing possessive 'my' before 'reading'; 'secure' is incorrect in this context — use 'strengthen' or 'improve'; 'want to detail information' is unnatural — use 'focus on detailed information'. 'a very useful and important' has an extra article 'a' before 'very'. Suggestions: use correct verbs for intended meaning, include possessives, and remove unnecessary articles.