Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь использовать правильное время и согласование, а также более естественные фразы. Начинайте с прямого ответа (Yes/No и краткое объяснение), затем добавляйте детали. Избегайте смешения времен (present/past) и неестественных словосочетаний (‘cooler’ в этом контексте звучит странно). Можно также сократить количество слов и убрать паузы или заполнители.

예시: Yes, I do. My reading habits have changed over the years: I used to read a lot of fiction, but now I read mainly biographies because I enjoy learning about real people's lives.

제안: Улучшите грамматику и выбор слов, избегайте повторов и заполнителей. Начните с чёткого утверждения, объясните причину и приведите пример. Исправьте ошибки: ‘prefer to reading’ → ‘prefer reading’, ‘straight better’ непонятно — используйте ‘read more comfortably’ или ‘concentrate better’; ‘it doesn't tear my eyes’ → ‘it doesn’t strain my eyes’.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and it doesn't strain my eyes. For example, I usually read novels and biographies in print rather than on a screen.

제안: Сформулируйте ответ более ясно: сначала скажите, когда вы читаете тщательно, затем объясните почему. Избегайте неясных фраз и наполнителей (‘uh’). Используйте конкретный пример и корректную структуру предложения. Также уточните термин (вместо ‘Olive book’ используйте ‘a complex novel’ или название книги, если нужно).

예시: I read carefully when the material is complex or when I need to remember details, for example with a complicated novel or a textbook. If I don't read carefully, I might miss important plot points or factual information.

제안: Улучшите грамматику и логику: используйте настоящее время и связки. Сначала назовите предпочтение, затем объясните, когда используете сканирование, а когда — детальное чтение. Избегайте путаницы в словах (‘charters’ → ‘characters’). Приводите чёткие примеры.

예시: I usually scan texts first because it saves time and gives me a general idea of the content. For example, I scan news articles or emails but read textbooks in detail when I need to learn something.

× In the past I am reading a lot of fiction, but now I am reading more biography.

✓ In the past I read a lot of fiction, but now I read more biographies.

The student used present continuous 'am reading' when referring to a past habitual action; English uses simple past 'read' for past habits. Also 'biography' should be plural 'biographies' when referring to the genre generally. Suggestion: use simple past for past routines and plural for countable nouns when speaking generally about books.

× It's interesting and cooler.

✓ It's interesting and cooler now.

The fragment lacks clarity of time reference; using 'now' makes the comparison explicit. Also 'cooler' needs a comparison target; adding 'now' clarifies that biographies are cooler compared with previous reading. Suggestion: include the comparison target or time marker (e.g., 'now') to make 'cooler' meaningful.

× Absolutely, I prefer absolutely.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer paper.

Repetition 'I prefer absolutely' is ungrammatical and redundant. The modal/adverb 'absolutely' can modify 'prefer', but the phrase should state the preference object. Suggestion: pair 'absolutely' with the object, e.g., 'I absolutely prefer paper.'

× I prefer to reading on paper because I can straight better and it doesn't tear my eyes.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because I can read more easily and it doesn't hurt my eyes.

After 'prefer', use either 'to read' (infinitive) or 'reading' (gerund), not 'to reading'. 'Straight better' is incorrect collocation; use 'read more easily' or 'read more comfortably'. 'Tear my eyes' is wrong; use 'hurt my eyes'. Suggestion: choose correct verb form after 'prefer' and use natural collocations for reading comfort.

× Uh, for example, I usually read novels and uh, biography book.

✓ For example, I usually read novels and biographies.

'Biography book' is awkward; use 'biographies' or 'a biography' depending on meaning. When speaking generally about types, use plural without article. Suggestion: use plural 'biographies' for the general category or 'a biography' for a single book.

× I'd like to read the Olive book carefully because, uh, in every book, uh, have, uh, build up build and uh, if I, uh, don't read carefully, I can't see, uh, important details.

✓ I'd like to read the Olive book carefully because in every book there is a build-up, and if I don't read carefully I can't see important details.

The original lacks the verb 'there is' for 'have' and repeats words 'build up build'. The phrase needs clear subject-verb structure: 'there is a build-up' and a coordinating conjunction 'and' before the second clause. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'there is' to indicate existence and keep clauses connected with 'and'.

× Well, I usually prefer scanning text first.

✓ Well, I usually prefer scanning texts first.

'Text' can be plural 'texts' when speaking generally about multiple items; preference for gerund 'scanning' is correct. Suggestion: use plural for generalizable nouns when referring to multiple instances.

× It saved a lot of time and give me first example of for charters in that book.

✓ It saves a lot of time and gives me a first impression of the characters in the book.

Tense should be present simple 'saves' and 'gives' when stating habitual actions. 'First example of for charters' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'first impression of the characters'. 'Characters' spelling corrected. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual statements and correct collocations like 'first impression' and 'characters'.

× For example I can scan new articles or mail but read textbook.

✓ For example, I can scan news articles or mail but read textbooks.

'New articles' should be 'news articles' and 'read textbook' needs plural 'textbooks' or an article: 'read textbooks' for general statement. Also include comma after 'For example'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms 'news articles' and pluralize when speaking generally about textbooks.