Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: state your main opinion in one clear sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with simple linking words. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., use infinitive forms and consistent tense) and reduce hesitation. Use vocabulary like "prefer" and phrases to compare.

예시: I don't enjoy reading very much; I prefer watching films and TV series. For example, I find visual media more engaging because it shows emotions and actions clearly, so it's easier for me to follow the story.

제안: Answer directly, give a clear reason and a concrete example. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use vocabulary like "digital" or "e-books" and link reason with "because" or "so".

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because digital content often includes images, videos, or hyperlinks that make the information clearer. For example, when I read an article online it sometimes has videos or diagrams that help me understand the topic.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific situation and contrast with when you skim. Fix grammar: use "need to" + base verb and correct word order. Use linking words like "because" and "however" for contrast.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm studying because I must understand details and remember facts for exams. However, when I'm reading for fun, I often skim or skip parts if I'm not in the mood.

제안: Give a clear preference or explain how you use both with specific purposes. Keep sentences concise and grammatical: use plural/singular correctly and finish ideas. Use linking words like "for example" or "so".

예시: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on the task. For example, I scan articles to get the main idea quickly, but I read textbooks in detail when I need to understand complex concepts.

× I don't like reading, but I do reading sometimes.

✓ I don't like reading, but I do read sometimes.

The phrase 'do reading' is incorrect because after the auxiliary 'do' we use the base form of the verb. Use 'do read' or simply 'read' to say the habit. Suggestion: 'I don't like reading, but I do read sometimes.'

× I prefer to watch movies and series than reading because I want to.

✓ I prefer watching movies and series to reading because I want to.

When comparing preferences, use 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer doing A to doing B.' Also use the gerund 'watching' and 'reading' for activities. Suggestion: 'I prefer watching movies and series to reading.'

× I wanted to see things done within.

✓ I wanted to see things done in person.

The phrase 'done within' is unclear and likely a mistaken preposition. 'In person' or 'with my own eyes' fits the intended meaning of witnessing actions. Suggestion: clarify meaning: 'I wanted to see things done in person.'

× I prefer to read on the screen because I want to see something in uh, for example, in the TV, I want something umm, showing.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I want to see something, for example on TV; I like it when something is shown.

Use 'on a screen' or 'on screen' and 'on TV' (no 'in the TV'). Also use passive or active 'is shown' rather than 'showing.' Removed fillers and corrected prepositions. Suggestion: 'I prefer to read on a screen because I like seeing things, for example on TV; I like it when something is shown.'

× What's really the text? What's to show?

✓ What is the text really about? What is being shown?

Colloquial 'What's really the text?' and 'What's to show?' are ungrammatical. Use 'What is the text really about?' and 'What is being shown?' to form clear questions. Suggestion: 'What is the text really about? What is being shown?'

× I usually need to read carefully when I'm studying because it is need to be focused what I need to learn and study and I don't focus when I I'm not in a mood.

✓ I usually need to read carefully when I'm studying because I need to focus on what I have to learn, and I don't focus when I'm not in the mood.

Errors include 'it is need to be focused' (incorrect structure), repetition 'I need to learn and study', and 'in a mood' should be 'in the mood.' Use present tense 'need' and the correct phrase 'focus on.' Suggestion: 'I usually need to read carefully when I'm studying because I need to focus on what I have to learn, and I don't focus when I'm not in the mood.'

× I prefer both style of reading.

✓ I prefer both styles of reading.

Use plural 'styles' when referring to two types and 'both' requires plural noun. Suggestion: 'I prefer both styles of reading.'

× Scanning is the way for me to umm to have it in my mind and detailed for me to know what it is mean and.

✓ Scanning is the way for me to get an overview in my mind, and detailed reading helps me understand what it means.

Use verbs and gerunds correctly: 'to have it in my mind' is awkward; 'get an overview' is clearer. 'What it is mean' is incorrect; use 'what it means.' Also supply 'reading' after 'detailed.' Suggestion: 'Scanning is the way for me to get an overview in my mind, and detailed reading helps me understand what it means.'