Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は肯定から始まっており内容は分かるが、繰り返しや雑音（umm）が多く、文法や語順の誤りがある。具体性はあるが語彙選択と表現を改善し、1〜3文で簡潔に述べる練習をするとよい。例えばジャンル（mystery）の説明といつ読むか（at midnight）を自然な文で繋げる練習をすること。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading, especially mystery novels, and I often read late at night, usually around midnight.

제안: 意図は伝わるが文法の誤りと不自然な語句（"watch automatic", "audience"）がある。選択した理由を一つか二つに絞り、具体的な利点（e.g. convenience, adjustable font）を正しい語順で述べる練習をすること。リンク語（because, so）で理由を明確に繋げるように。

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient: I can adjust the font size and carry many books on one device.

제안: 回答が混乱しており、意味が不明瞭。読み取る対象（説明書、契約書など）と状況（組み立てるとき、勉強するとき）を明確に区別して述べる練習が必要。短い文で主語と目的語をはっきりさせ、接続詞で対比（when I need to read carefully, but when I don't）を示すとよい。

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm dealing with instructions or contracts, for example when assembling furniture. But I don't read carefully when I'm skimming news or casual blog posts.

제안: 意見は示されているが語彙と表現が不自然（"script scaling", "understand for book"）で冗長。スキャンニングと詳細読みの違いを簡潔に述べ、その理由を具体例で補うと説得力が増す。接続語（because, so, therefore）を使い、文を2〜3文にまとめるとよい。

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the plot and characters more deeply. For example, when I read novels I pay attention to small details that reveal the author's intent.

× I like reading actually I like umm, mystery categories, umm, books and I my hobby is umm, reading the book on the midnight.

✓ I like reading. Actually, I like mystery novels, and my hobby is reading books at midnight.

The student used 'mystery categories' instead of 'mystery novels' and 'the book on the midnight' which is incorrect. Use plural nouns correctly and omit unnecessary definite article: say 'mystery novels' or 'mystery books' and 'reading books at midnight'. Also add punctuation and conjunctions for clarity. Suggested improvement: Learn common collocations (mystery novels/books), use plural for general statements, and use time expressions without 'the' before 'midnight'.

× I prefer to on the screen to read on paper because screen is we we can watch automatic and it has a subtitle and audience.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen rather than on paper because with a screen we can play videos automatically and it can show subtitles and reach a large audience.

Problems: wrong preposition order ('prefer to on the screen'), missing articles ('screen' needs 'a'), and unclear phrases ('watch automatic', 'audience'). Use 'prefer to do A rather than B' and proper articles. Clarify meaning: 'play videos automatically', 'show subtitles', 'reach a large audience'. Suggested improvement: Practice the pattern 'prefer to do X rather than Y', remember to use articles before singular countable nouns, and choose correct verbs for multimedia functions.

× I think I need to read carefully something umm describe books, especially umm my my chair or my bed when I build it.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when something describes books, especially the instructions for my chair or bed when I assemble them.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Something describe books' is incorrect; likely meaning is 'when something describes books' or 'when something is describing'. Also 'my chair or my bed when I build it' should use 'instructions' and plural 'them' for items. Use 'assemble' instead of 'build' for furniture instructions. Suggested improvement: Clarify intended meaning before forming the sentence, use relative clauses correctly ('when something describes...'), and match pronouns and verbs in number.

× I prefer detailed reading to script scaling because detail reading I can understand for umm, book, uh, books details. It is something interesting.

✓ I prefer detailed reading to skimming because with detailed reading I can understand the book's details. It is more interesting.

Errors: 'script scaling' is incorrect; likely 'skimming'. 'detail reading' should be 'detailed reading'. 'I can understand for book books details' is wrong word order and missing possessive: use 'the book's details'. Also compare with 'more interesting'. Suggested improvement: Learn common reading strategy terms (skimming, scanning, detailed reading), use adjectives properly ('detailed reading') and possessive forms ('book's details').