Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, động từ phù hợp với chủ ngữ), cấu trúc câu ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn; tránh tiếng ừ ờ (filler) quá nhiều; thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Ví dụ: dùng “it makes me feel relaxed” thay vì “it's make me feel unwind”, “I usually read novels or comic stories” thay vì “I usually are read”. Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi một hoặc hai câu bổ trợ cụ thể (thói quen, ví dụ cuốn sách/ tác giả).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. I usually read novels, especially contemporary fiction, and sometimes light-hearted comedies like rom-com short stories. For example, I recently finished a novel by Haruki Murakami that helped me unwind after work. Reading also expands my vocabulary and gives me fresh ideas for conversations.

제안: Sửa lỗi câu và dùng từ chính xác; giảm filler; làm rõ ý bằng cách dùng một câu chủ đề rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giảm mỏi mắt, thích cảm giác sách giấy). Tránh từ không đúng như “near size” hay “constable”. Dùng liên từ (because, so, therefore) để liên kết ý. Giữ ngôn ngữ đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate. Also, I enjoy the texture and smell of books, which makes reading more enjoyable. For long texts like novels, a printed book feels more comfortable than reading on a screen.

제안: Cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể và giải thích lý do. Tránh lặp từ và fillers. Sử dụng linking words (for example, while, because) để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: nói rõ bạn đọc kỹ khi cần hiểu chi tiết (hợp đồng, đề thi) và không cần đọc kỹ khi chỉ lướt tin tức hay bài đăng mạng xã hội.

예시: I need to read carefully when the material is important or technical, for example exam papers, legal documents, or official forms, because any mistake could have serious consequences. On the other hand, I skim casual content like social media posts or short news articles when I just want the main idea.

제안: Tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ “deteriorating” sai ngữ cảnh); diễn đạt rõ ràng sự khác biệt giữa scanning và detailed reading bằng câu chủ đề và ví dụ. Dùng linking words (however, whereas, because). Giảm fillers và hoàn thành câu cuối cùng.

예시: It depends on the situation. I usually scan social media posts or emails to get the main idea quickly because I don't need every detail. However, I read in detail for important texts like legal documents or academic articles, since they require careful understanding and accuracy.

× Yes of course, I really enjoy reading because it's make me feel unwind and I'm relaxed.

✓ Yes, of course. I really enjoy reading because it makes me feel relaxed and unwind.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' (third person singular). 'Unwind' is a verb; here an adjective 'relaxed' correctly describes the state. Use parallel adjective 'relaxed' instead of 'feel unwind'. Suggestion: use 'it makes me feel relaxed' or 'it helps me to unwind.'

× I'm also expand my knowledge.

✓ I also expand my knowledge.

The auxiliary 'I'm' (I am) plus base verb 'expand' creates a progressive structure meaning 'I am expanding'. If the intended meaning is a habitual action, use simple present 'I also expand' or more natural phrasing 'I also expand my knowledge' or 'I also increase my knowledge.' If present continuous intended, write 'I'm also expanding my knowledge.'

× I usually are read novels or a comedy story umm and I feel like it's very entertainment for me.

✓ I usually read novels or comedy stories, and I feel like it's very entertaining for me.

'Are read' is incorrect: use simple present 'read' for habitual action. 'A comedy story' should be plural 'comedy stories' or 'a comedy story' depending on intent; plural fits with 'novels'. 'Entertainment' is a noun; use adjective 'entertaining'. Also add comma before 'and' for clarity.

× Well, I refer to read on paper modern on a string.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen.

'Refer to' is wrong; use 'prefer'. 'Modern on a string' is incorrect word choice and likely 'rather than on a screen'. Ensure comparative structure 'prefer to read A rather than B.'

× Umm, the reason for that, umm, just uh, umm, is help me to not near size and umm, I like the the smell of of paper is bring back to me the constable to enjoy.

✓ The reason is it helps me avoid eyestrain, and I like the smell of paper because it brings back pleasant memories.

Grammar and word choice errors: use 'helps me avoid eyestrain' (avoid + noun) not 'help me to not near size'. 'Smell of paper' correct; 'is bring back to me the constable to enjoy' should be 'brings back pleasant memories'. Use proper verb form 'brings' for third person singular 'smell' or 'it'.

× Well umm, it depend on what I read umm such as umm if it is a document on uh exam paper or legal context umm I need to read carefully and on the flip side is when not.

✓ Well, it depends on what I read. For example, if it is a document, an exam paper, or a legal text, I need to read carefully; otherwise I do not.

Use third person singular 'depends' with subject 'it'. 'Exam paper or legal context' should be parallel nouns: 'an exam paper or a legal text'. 'On the flip side is when not' is unclear; use 'otherwise I do not' or 'otherwise I do not need to.'

× Well it depends on what I'm reading. Umm I refer scanning when I read a post on the social media or umm, I just need to read demand idea on the e-mail umm.

✓ Well, it depends on what I'm reading. I prefer scanning when I read a post on social media or when I just need to get the main idea of an email.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'On the social media' should be 'on social media'. 'Read demand idea' is incorrect; use 'get the main idea'. 'E-mail' -> 'email'. Maintain natural collocations.

× But on the flip side, a deteriorating umm such as legal context, I need to.

✓ But on the flip side, for detailed texts such as legal documents, I need to read carefully.

Original sentence fragments and wrong word 'deteriorating'. Use 'detailed texts' or 'long/dense texts' and 'legal documents' to be clear. Complete the clause with 'I need to read carefully.'