Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần nói rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và đúng ngữ pháp. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No + reason), tiếp theo 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ: 'feels', 'scion', 'style') và ngữ pháp (tense, modal). Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'health books' và 'science books'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially non-fiction. I often read health books and popular science because I like learning practical tips and understanding how things work.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Sử dụng cụm từ chính xác (e.g. 'digital age', 'access e-books', 'harmful to my eyes', 'prefer paper books'). Tránh cấu trúc sai ngữ pháp như 'can easily to assess' và 'reading book on papers'. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ để nối ý.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because digital screens strain my eyes. Although e-books are convenient in the digital age, I find printed books more comfortable and better for long reading sessions.

제안: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: nói khi nào đọc kỹ và khi nào đọc lướt. Dùng từ chính xác (e.g. 'guide me', 'instructions', 'advertisements'). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể và liên từ để diễn đạt lý do. Tránh lỗi động từ và danh từ sai (ví dụ 'guys' → 'guide').

예시: I read carefully when the text contains instructions or directions, for example assembly manuals or travel guides. I usually skim advertisements or casual news because I only need general information.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng: trực tiếp nói 'I prefer scanning' rồi giải thích lý do bằng tiếng Anh chuẩn. Sử dụng cụm từ đúng (e.g. 'scanning', 'detailed reading', 'strain my eyes', 'save time'). Tránh dịch sát từ tiếng Việt khiến ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai ('deteriorating', 'half my eyes don't housework').

예시: I prefer scanning because it is faster and puts less strain on my eyes. I only read in detail when the information is important or technical.

× Actually I really like my feels when I would enjoy some books just as style health books or scion books.

✓ Actually I really like the feeling I get when I enjoy certain books, such as lifestyle, health, or science books.

'feels' is an incorrect noun choice and 'my feels' is ungrammatical; use 'the feeling I get'. 'would enjoy' is incorrect modal here; use simple present 'enjoy' to express a general preference. 'just as' should be 'such as' to give examples. 'style health books or scion books' are incorrect word choices and order — replace with 'lifestyle, health, or science books'. Suggestion: use precise nouns and present simple for general likes.

× In the dizzy tour age everyone with a phone or a laptop can easily to assess with e-books or on Internet so it's more convenient for everyone.

✓ In the digital age everyone with a phone or a laptop can easily access e-books or the Internet, so it's more convenient for everyone.

'dizzy tour age' is an incorrect phrase; use 'digital age'. 'can easily to assess' incorrectly uses 'to' and wrong verb 'assess' instead of 'access'. Prepositions: use 'access e-books' (no 'with') and 'the Internet' not 'on Internet'. Also add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: use correct verbs and articles with 'Internet'.

× But for me it's too harm for my eyes so I love reading book on papers.

✓ But for me it's too harmful for my eyes, so I prefer reading books on paper.

'too harm' is incorrect; use the adjective 'harmful'. 'reading book' needs plural 'books' or 'a book' depending on meaning; here general preference requires plural 'books'. 'on papers' is wrong; use the uncountable noun 'on paper'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and countable/uncountable nouns.

× I often read carefully with books that guys me using something or guides me go somewhere and for advertise I sometimes read not carefully.

✓ I often read carefully books that teach me how to use something or guide me to go somewhere, and for advertisements I sometimes do not read carefully.

'with books that guys me using something' uses wrong verb 'guys' and incorrect structure. Use 'teach me how to use something' or 'show me how to use something'. 'guides me go somewhere' needs 'guide me to go somewhere' or better 'guide me to a place'. 'for advertise' should be 'for advertisements' or 'advertising'. 'read not carefully' is awkward; use 'do not read carefully'. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('teach', 'guide') and proper infinitive structures ('how to', 'guide me to').

× I prefer scanning to deteriorating because it's easy to read and half my eyes don't housework doing to read.

✓ I prefer scanning to detailed reading because it is easier for my eyes, and I do not want to do housework while reading.

'deteriorating' is the wrong word; likely intended 'detailed reading'. 'it's easy to read' should be 'it is easier for my eyes' to explain preference. 'half my eyes don't housework doing to read' is ungrammatical; likely means 'I don't want to do housework while reading' or 'my eyes get tired if I do housework while reading'. Suggestion: choose correct lexical items ('detailed reading') and use clear clause order: 'I do not want to do X while Y' or 'my eyes get tired when...'.