Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で内容も明確ですが、文法や表現の自然さを改善する必要があります。例えば「recently」の位置や時制、「education or academic subject」の語順と複数形／単数形の使い方を修正するとより自然になります。また、支持情報として具体的な本のタイトルや理由を1文加えると説得力が増します。回答は5文以内に収め、冗長な語句は避けてください。

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. Recently I haven’t had much time, but I still read practical books about education and academic subjects. For example, I recently read a book on classroom management that helped me improve my lesson planning.

제안: 主張は明確ですが、表現が不自然で冗長な部分（"compared to on the screen", "It is."）があります。理由をもう一つ具体的に加え、リンク語（for example, because, so）を使って論理的に繋げると良いです。文は短く簡潔に保ち、余分なフレーズは削除してください。

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I can concentrate better. For example, when I study for exams I find paper books help me focus for longer periods.

제안: 内容は適切ですが文法ミス（冠詞、複数形、理由の不完全な表現）があります。理由を明確な一文で完結させ、具体例と結果（何が起こるか）を付け加えるとよいです。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って論理の流れを整えてください。

예시: I need to read carefully when I deal with important documents such as contracts, instructions, or academic papers because missing details could cause serious problems. For example, overlooking a clause in a contract might lead to unexpected obligations.

제안: 回答は曖昧で繰り返しが多く、文が不完全です。まず明確なトピック文を述べ、その理由を具体的に一つか二つ示してください。冗長なフレーズ（"I can. I can read more relaxed in a relaxed way, and yeah, I don't."）は避け、代わりに適切な接続語で理由や状況を説明してください。文法と語順の修正も必要です。

예시: It depends on the situation, but I generally prefer scanning because it helps me find key information quickly. For example, when researching for an essay I scan several articles to pick relevant points before reading some of them in detail.

× Although I don't have enough time to read recently, I sometimes read practical books about education or academic subject.

✓ Although I haven't had enough time to read recently, I sometimes read practical books about education or academic subjects.

The sentence uses 'don't have' with 'recently', but the present perfect ('have not had') is appropriate to describe a state continuing up to now; also 'academic subject' needs plural 'subjects' to match 'books' and general usage. Suggest using present perfect for ongoing recent lack of time and pluralize 'subject' to 'subjects'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer to read on paper rather than on the screen because I feel much more comfortable with my eyes compared to on the screen. It is.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on the screen because it is much more comfortable for my eyes.

The original repeats 'on the screen' and places 'with my eyes' awkwardly. Simplify by using 'it is ... comfortable for my eyes' and remove redundancy. Also 'compared to' is unnecessary. Reposition adverbial phrase for natural English. Grammar problem type ID:20

× I need to read carefully when I read an important documents such as contracts, instructions and academic papers because missing some important information.

✓ I need to read carefully when I read important documents such as contracts, instructions, and academic papers because I might miss some important information.

The noun phrase should be 'important documents' (remove 'an') to match plural; the clause 'because missing some important information' lacks a subject and verb. Add 'I might miss' or 'I could miss' to form a complete clause. This fixes article and sentence structure issues. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It depends on the situation, but I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I can. I can read more relaxed in a relaxed way, and yeah, I don't.

✓ It depends on the situation, but I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I can read more quickly and in a more relaxed way.

Fragments like 'because I can.' and 'I can read more relaxed in a relaxed way, and yeah, I don't.' are incomplete or ungrammatical. Use 'read more quickly' or 'in a more relaxed way' to complete the thought. 'Relaxed' should be changed to adverbial form 'relaxedly' is rare; better: 'in a more relaxed way.' This produces a coherent sentence. Grammar problem type ID:26