Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response direct and coherent: state your opinion clearly, give one or two concise reasons with correct grammar and linking words, and avoid contradictions. Keep it under 5 sentences. Use vocabulary like "enjoy," "prefer," "distracting," and "concentrate."

예시: I don't enjoy reading very much because I find it hard to concentrate on one thing for a long time. For example, when I try to read a book I often get distracted and lose interest quickly, so I prefer listening to audiobooks or watching videos instead.

제안: Answer directly (screen or paper) and give clear reasons using linking words (because, therefore). Correct grammar: subject-verb agreement and proper word choice. Mention specific benefits of screens (convenience, searchability) and keep sentences short and logical.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can adjust the font size, search for words quickly, and carry many books on my tablet, so I usually choose digital reading.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence stating both situations. Use linking words (when, because, but) and correct verb forms. Give a specific example of reading carefully (studying for exams) and a casual example (reading for pleasure) to show contrast.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for lessons or preparing for an exam because details and accuracy matter. However, when I'm reading for fun at home, I usually skim or relax and don't focus on every detail.

제안: Give a clear answer (scanning or detailed) and correct word choice (scanning, not skiing). Provide a concise reason and an example using linking words (because, for example). Fix grammar and avoid vague phrases like "for the people."

예시: I prefer scanning because I often look for key information quickly rather than reading every word. For example, when I search news articles I just scan headings and the first paragraphs to decide if I want to read more.

× I can't stand reading because of I really hate to read something I can focus on to one thing on my whole day.

✓ I can't stand reading because I really hate having to focus on one thing all day.

The sentence contains incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing: 'because of I really hate' should be 'because I really hate'; 'to focus on to one thing' should be 'focus on one thing'; 'on my whole day' should be 'all day'. Combine verbs correctly: 'hate having to focus' is natural. Use prepositions 'on' with 'focus' and 'all day' to indicate duration.

× If I read something I prefer to on a screen because it These days technology has very improved and we have seen more comfortable to eat a read and paper is an old population.

✓ If I read something, I prefer to read on a screen because these days technology has improved a lot and reading on a screen feels more comfortable; paper seems old-fashioned.

Multiple problems: 'prefer to on a screen' should be 'prefer to read on a screen' (preposition placement and missing verb). 'These days' should be lowercase and separated. 'has very improved' is incorrect; use 'has improved a lot' or 'has greatly improved'. 'we have seen more comfortable to eat a read' is unintelligible; intended meaning is 'reading on a screen feels more comfortable'. 'paper is an old population' should be 'paper seems old-fashioned' — 'population' is incorrect. Fix prepositions and vocabulary for clarity.

× When I on my lesson I have to read carefully because I can't understand when I not focus on on my paper on or in my exam.

✓ When I'm in my lesson I have to read carefully because I can't understand if I don't focus on my paper or during my exam.

Problems with present continuous and auxiliary verbs: 'When I on my lesson' needs 'When I'm in my lesson'. 'when I not focus' requires auxiliary 'don't' for negative present: 'if I don't focus'. Remove duplicate 'on on' and choose correct preposition: 'on my paper' and 'during my exam' or 'in my exam'. Use 'if' instead of 'when' for conditional understanding.

× But in my normal day, like I'm sitting in my room and read something, it is not important to carefully to focus.

✓ But on a normal day, when I'm sitting in my room and reading something, it is not important to focus carefully.

Use 'on a normal day' (preposition), and 'when I'm sitting' plus gerund 'reading' for simultaneous actions. Remove extra 'to' before 'focus' and place adverb 'carefully' after 'focus' or use 'focus carefully'. Ensure tense consistency (present continuous for ongoing action).

× I prefer skiing because I really bored to read something and reading is so dull for the people and.

✓ I prefer skimming because I get really bored reading and find reading so dull.

The original has wrong word 'skiing' instead of 'skimming' (vocabulary). 'I really bored to read' is incorrect: use 'I get really bored reading' or 'I am really bored when I read'. 'for the people' is unnecessary; use 'find reading so dull'. Remove trailing 'and'. Fix preposition/verb forms to correct gerund use.