Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 어순 오류를 줄이고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 현재 답변은 시제와 관사 사용, 반복(‘because’를 두 번 사용)에서 문제가 있습니다. 주제문(예: I enjoy reading)에 이어 왜 읽는지와 언제 읽는지에 대한 구체적이고 짧은 이유를 하나 또는 두 개의 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, so, because)를 적절히 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read books on weekends because I am busy with school during weekdays, so weekends are the only time I can relax and finish a book.

제안: 명확한 주제문을 사용하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 단어 선택(‘a screen’ → ‘reading on a screen’), 어순, 철자(‘square’는 오타로 보임)와 관사 사용을 고치세요. 또한 비교 표현을 쓸 때는 linking words(‘because’, ‘while’)로 대조를 분명히 하세요.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because I can buy and download books online instantly, while buying paper books requires going to a store which takes more time.

제안: 주어와 동사 형태를 일치시키고 의미가 모호한 표현(‘not scheming skill’)을 명확하게 바꾸세요. 질문에 대해 직접 답한 뒤 구체적 예시(과제, 계약서, 기사 등)를 들어 언제 자세히 읽는지와 언제 스캔해도 되는지 구분해서 말하세요.

예시: I need to read carefully when I am doing assignments or studying for exams because details matter, but I don't read carefully for light news or short articles when I only need the main idea.

제안: 문법(시제, 동사형), 어휘(‘scheming’ 대신 ‘skimming’), 문장 구조를 바로잡으세요. 주제문으로 선호를 밝히고 이유를 하나 또는 두 개의 간결한 문장으로 설명하세요. 예시나 빈도(예: often, usually)를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.

예시: I usually prefer skimming because I don't have much time for detailed reading; by skimming I can quickly understand the main points and decide which parts are worth a closer look.

× Yes, I tend to reading all book all weekend because weekdays I don't have any free time because I have to go to school. So when I get some free time I really like some reading a book.

✓ Yes, I tend to read books all weekend because on weekdays I don't have any free time since I have to go to school. So when I get some free time I really like to read a book.

The verb 'tend' should be followed by the base form 'to read', not 'to reading' (rule for verb + to-infinitive). 'All book' is a singular/plural issue; it should be 'books' for general plural. The phrase 'weekdays' needs the preposition 'on' -> 'on weekdays'. The second sentence uses 'really like some reading a book' which mixes structures; the correct pattern is 'like to read a book' or 'like reading a book'. Suggestion: use 'tend to read', 'books', 'on weekdays', and choose one consistent structure such as 'I really like to read a book.'

× I prefer to read a screen because paper I have to go to physical store book shop, but square is really convenient to buy a book.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because for paper books I have to go to a physical bookshop, but online stores are really convenient for buying a book.

Use the correct preposition 'on' with 'screen' -> 'read on a screen'. The phrase 'paper' should be 'paper books' and needs the preposition 'for' -> 'for paper books'. 'Physical store book shop' is incorrect word order; use 'a physical bookshop'. 'Square' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'online' or 'e-book stores'. Use 'convenient for buying a book' or 'convenient to buy books'. Suggestion: use 'read on a screen', 'for paper books', 'a physical bookshop', and 'online stores'.

× If student have doing any assignment they have to read carefully and check the detail and not scheming skill.

✓ If students are doing any assignment they have to read carefully, check the details, and not skim the text.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match general meaning. 'Have doing' is incorrect; use 'are doing' (present continuous) for ongoing actions. 'Check the detail' should be plural 'details'. 'Not scheming skill' is incorrect vocabulary and form; likely intended 'not skim' or 'not use skimming skills' — corrected to 'not skim the text'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement ('students are'), correct continuous tense ('are doing'), pluralize 'details', and use appropriate verb 'skim'.

× I usually prefer scanning because I don't have too much time on detail reading when I was reading a book because scheming is I tend to really know summary.

✓ I usually prefer scanning because I don't have much time for detailed reading when I read a book since skimming helps me get the summary.

Tense mismatch: 'when I was reading' should be simple present 'when I read' to match habitual action. 'Too much time on detail reading' should be 'much time for detailed reading' (preposition and adjective form). 'Scheming' is a misspelling; correct word 'skimming'. The clause 'is I tend to really know summary' is ungrammatical; better: 'skimming helps me get the summary.' Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, 'much time for detailed reading', 'detailed' as adjective, and correct vocabulary 'skimming' and clear causative structure 'skimming helps me...'.