Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 总体回答直接、内容积极，但可以更自然地表达并提供具体例子以增强说服力。注意句子连贯性，避免机械套用结构（如 “can not only... but also...” 后面缺少具体例子）。尝试用一到两句补充说明具体阅读材料和收获，句子不超过五句。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy reading. It broadens my horizons and has helped me improve my writing—for example, reading essays and novels taught me new vocabulary and ways to structure paragraphs.

제안: 回答表达了喜好和原因，但语言有些不自然和重复（如 “It's easy for paper to note. Take note.”）。可以用更自然的短句解释原因并补充具体细节，如做笔记或翻页的感受。保持句子简洁连贯。

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and causes less eye strain. Also, I find it easier to underline and jot notes in the margins when reading a physical book.

제안: 回答逻辑清楚但用词重复且表达笨拙（如 “some comic” 应为 “comics”）。建议用更自然的对比句，并举例说明“重要文件”包括哪些，以及“读小说时随意”的原因。注意语法和名词复数形式。

예시: I read carefully when I'm dealing with important documents, such as contracts or official emails, because details matter. But when I'm reading novels or comics, I tend to read more casually to enjoy the story.

제안: 回答表达了偏好，但句子不完整且不够具体（“I don't want to miss. Some detail.” 非自然表达）。建议用完整句子说明为什么需要细读，并给出场景或后果，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss important information or subtle points. For example, when studying for exams or reading technical articles, careful reading helps me understand complex ideas.

× Yes, I love reading very much. Reading can not only broaden my horizons but also improve my writing skills.

✓ Yes, I love reading very much. Reading can not only broaden my horizons but also improve my writing skills.

该句语法正确。'very much' 用作副词短语修饰 love，'not only ... but also ...' 结构使用恰当，因此无需改动。

× I prefer to read on paper because I think paper is beneficial for my eyes and I enjoy the experience on paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I think paper is better for my eyes and I enjoy the experience of reading on paper.

原句中 'beneficial for my eyes' 可以接受，但更常用的搭配是 'better for my eyes'；此外 'the experience on paper' 结构不自然，应改为 'the experience of reading on paper' 来明确体验的内容。建议用法：使用介词 of+动名词短语来说明具体体验。

× It's easy for paper to note. Take note.

✓ It's easy to take notes on paper.

原句中 'It's easy for paper to note.' 结构错误，paper 不能作为动作的承担者；另外 'Take note.' 作为独立句不符合上下文，应合并为 'take notes'（动名词复数）表达记笔记的习惯。建议使用 'take notes' 来指代做笔记的动作。

× When I read the important documents, I read carefully, and when I read some novels or some comic, I read carelessly.

✓ When I read important documents, I read carefully, and when I read novels or comics, I read carelessly.

错误主要是可数名词复数和冠词使用：'some comic' 应为复数 'comics'；'the important documents' 可简化为 'important documents' 更自然。时态方面原句在现在时背景下使用一致，因此不需改为过去时。建议注意可数名词单复数一致及不必要的定冠词使用。

× I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss. Some detail.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss any details.

原句 'I don't want to miss.' 后面缺少宾语，应为 'miss any details'。'Some detail.' 作为独立短语不完整且数量词使用错误，'any' 更适用于否定句以表示任何细节。建议在否定句中用 'any' 并使用复数 'details' 来表达不想遗漏多个细节的意思。