Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and why), limit to 3–4 concise sentences, use correct grammar (verb forms, articles), and give one specific example of what you read and how it benefits you. Use linking words (because, so, for example) to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy reading because it improves my vocabulary and expands my knowledge. For example, I often read historical novels that teach me about past events and different cultures. Also, reading relaxes me and sparks my imagination, so I usually read before bed.

제안: Give a clear preference sentence first, then briefly explain 2 specific reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use linking words such as because and however to show contrast.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because the smell and texture of a book help me relax and remember what I read. However, I sometimes use a screen for convenience when travelling or reading news. I also find screens strain my eyes after long periods, so I usually limit screen reading.

제안: Answer directly with two clear situations: when careful reading is needed and when scanning is enough. Use specific examples (e.g., study materials, recipes, fictional summaries) and correct grammar. Keep it concise and use linking words like when and but.

예시: I read carefully when the information is important, for example when studying for an exam or following a recipe where details matter. But when I just want the general idea, such as reading a short news summary or a simple story, I only skim the text.

제안: State your preference clearly and give 1–2 specific reasons and 1 example of when scanning is useful. Improve sentence structure and use precise words (detailed reading, skim/scan). Keep to 3–4 sentences and link ideas with however or for example.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand characters and themes more deeply, especially in novels. However, I use scanning when I need quick facts, like when reading a long academic paper or news article to find the main points. Overall, I read in detail when I want to enjoy or study the text.

× Well, you don't know that my hobby is reading.

✓ Well, you may not know that my hobby is reading.

The original uses an incorrect negative declarative 'you don't know' which sounds awkward in this context. Replacing with 'you may not know' conveys possibility and fits spoken register. Suggestion: use modal 'may' or 'might' to indicate lack of prior knowledge.

× So that mean I really fond of reading.

✓ So that means I really am fond of reading.

Missing third person singular verb agreement and linking verb 'am'. 'That' as subject requires 'means', and 'fond' needs 'be' verb. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and include the appropriate form of 'to be'.

× And why? Because with me I think which thing is like a part of improve your brain and also your vocabulary.

✓ And why? Because, for me, I think reading helps improve your brain and your vocabulary.

The original has unclear structure and incorrect phrase 'which thing is like a part of improve'. Rewriting clarifies meaning: use 'helps improve' and proper noun phrases. Suggestion: simplify clause structure and use 'helps + base verb' to express contribution.

× But I think the efficiently part of reading is that you can climb the knowledge and also you have much more information.

✓ But I think the most efficient part of reading is that you can gain knowledge and have much more information.

Incorrect adjective/adverb 'efficiently part' and odd verb 'climb the knowledge'. Use superlative 'most efficient' and verb 'gain' with 'knowledge'. Suggestion: choose correct adjective forms and common collocations like 'gain knowledge'.

× Soon for your old way and also sometime I think reading is a lot of fun, like they give me a atmosphere to have a friend in imagine.

✓ Also, in my older days and sometimes now, I think reading is a lot of fun; it gives me an atmosphere where I can imagine having a friend.

Multiple structural problems: 'Soon for your old way' is unintelligible, tense/time reference wrong, article errors 'a atmosphere' and pronoun 'they' incorrect. Rewriting clarifies time reference and corrects articles and relative clause. Suggestion: break into simpler clauses and use 'gives me an atmosphere where...' and 'a friend' with correct articles.

× I'm interested in reading on paper because the fragrance of paper is making me feel really memorable and it's give me the feel of relaxing.

✓ I'm interested in reading on paper because the smell of paper feels memorable and it gives me a feeling of relaxation.

Use 'the fragrance of paper' is acceptable but 'is making me feel really memorable' is wrong (people, not smells, are memorable). 'It's give' is incorrect verb form. Use 'feels memorable' and 'gives me a feeling of relaxation'. Suggestion: match subject and verb forms and choose natural collocations.

× But on the screen like if you read it for a long time, the arm maybe get tired and it can be worth more with your brain too because like you have.

✓ But when you read on a screen for a long time, your arms may get tired and it can be harder on your brain too because you see more on the screen.

Problems: 'the arm maybe get tired' lacks subject-verb agreement and modal position; 'it can be worth more with your brain' is unclear. Correct to 'arms may get tired' and 'harder on your brain' plus clearer clause 'you see more on the screen'. Suggestion: use correct modal + base verb order and plural possessive 'your arms'.

× Much more seen on screen and the light on that screen is hurt your body the health that like breathing on paper is a paste and it's a common way for anyone to.

✓ You see much more on a screen, and the screen's light can harm your health; reading on paper is gentler and is a common method for many people.

Original has incorrect prepositions and vocabulary ('hurt your body the health', 'breathing on paper is a paste'). Rewriting uses correct prepositions 'on a screen' and verb 'harm your health', and clarifies comparison. Suggestion: use clear prepositions and standard verbs for health effects.

× Umm, the time when I read carefully is when I read about my favorite character or the some part of Portuguese or the detail that the author need we to read it and memorize it.

✓ I read carefully when I read about my favorite character, a part of a Portuguese text, or details that the author wants us to read and memorize.

Tense mostly present but grammar errors: 'the some part of Portuguese' wrong article and noun use; 'the author need we' incorrect verb form and pronoun. Use present simple 'wants us' and correct articles. Suggestion: use 'wants us to' + base verb and correct noun phrases.

× But however, in some case that I don't really care about, read carefully.

✓ However, in cases that I don't really care about, I do not read carefully.

Fragment missing subject and verb 'read carefully' at end. Also redundant 'But however'. Correct to full clause with subject 'I' and auxiliary 'do not'. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and ensure full clause structure.

× It's usually like a exception story or just some.

✓ They are usually minor or exceptional parts of a story, or just some notes.

Original uses 'a exception' incorrect article and singular; fragment 'or just some.' unclear. Rewritten to plural 'They are' and clearer nouns. Suggestion: match number and complete the thought.

× I found a detailed reading because like if you notice the book, the story, the brain will like much more interested in that story that I was to write.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because if you pay attention to a book's story, your brain becomes much more interested in it.

Confusing phrasing 'I found a detailed reading', unnecessary 'like', and awkward clause 'that I was to write'. Use 'prefer' for preference and clear causality. Suggestion: use 'prefer' and 'pay attention to' instead of 'notice'.

× But in some case I think scanning is quite good when you read a long news or a book that about academic that you just.

✓ But in some cases I think scanning is useful when you read long news articles or academic books where you only need the main information.

Errors: 'in some case' -> 'in some cases'; 'a long news' wrong noun; fragment at end. Rephrase to 'news articles' and 'academic books' and complete the clause. Suggestion: pluralize and use correct collocations.

× Need to read the inform The best information about that book with me is OK for both, but I prefer detailed reading more.

✓ You need to read the important information. For me both are okay, but I prefer detailed reading.

Sentence fragments and word order problems: 'Need to read the inform' lacks subject; 'The best information...' is jumbled. Split into two sentences, clarify subject, and use 'prefer detailed reading' without 'more' (redundant with 'prefer'). Suggestion: ensure each sentence has subject and verb and avoid redundant adverbs.