Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn cần nói rõ, mạch lạc và đúng ngữ pháp. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi (Yes/No + brief reason). (2) Tránh lặp từ và sửa phát âm/nhầm từ (ví dụ “read” chứ không phải “reeled”). (3) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về loại sách hoặc lý do bạn thích (tác giả, thể loại, nội dung). (4) Giữ độ dài 2–4 câu, ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. My favorite book is a mystery novel by Agatha Christie, and I usually spend about two hours reading each evening because I like solving the puzzles in the plot.

제안: Bạn nên nói câu trả lời trực tiếp trước (I prefer paper/screen), rồi giải thích rõ ràng với lý do cụ thể. Sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp (e.g. “I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate...”). Tránh từ không chính xác như “destructive” khi muốn nói “distractions”. Dùng một liên từ để nối ý (because, while). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I can focus better on the story and remember details. Reading on a screen often brings distractions like social media notifications, so I get interrupted more easily.

제안: Bạn cần tổ chức câu rõ ràng: nêu hai trường hợp (khi cần đọc kỹ và khi không). Sử dụng từ đúng (ví dụ: “scan” hay “skim” thay vì “Cavalry”), và tránh lặp/tiếng ừ. Dùng liên từ như “when” hoặc “if” để phân biệt hai tình huống. Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: đọc báo, đọc tài liệu học tập).

예시: I don't need to read carefully when I'm skimming a book to get the general idea, for example when previewing chapters. However, I read carefully when studying for an exam or when I need to understand detailed instructions.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lặp, từ không đúng (ví dụ “elite”). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer scanning/detailed reading) và giải thích vì sao với một ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh tiếng ừ/âm tiết lặp, giữ cấu trúc 2–3 câu, dùng từ phù hợp như “scan” hoặc “read in detail”.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the author's ideas and appreciate the language. For example, when I read poetry or technical articles, I read slowly to grasp every point.

× I reeled Britt Ding the book.

✓ I read a book called Britt Ding.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form and word order. Use the past tense 'read' (pronounced 'red') for completed action, and include an article 'a' before 'book' and 'called' to introduce the title. Suggestion: say 'I read a book called Britt Ding.'

× The book I the book I like is the my book and I usually spend 2 hours to read it.

✓ The book I like is my favorite book, and I usually spend two hours reading it.

Problems: unnecessary repetition, incorrect article usage 'the my', incorrect infinitive 'to read' after 'spend' (use gerund). Also write numbers as words in formal speech. Suggestion: combine clauses, use 'my favorite book' and 'spend two hours reading it.'

× I want to read in on a paper more in screen because reader in paper I can concentrate on the content of the story, where in screen I can have some destructive like and social media.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because when I read on paper I can concentrate on the story's content, whereas on a screen I am distracted by things like social media.

Issues: wrong prepositions ('in on a paper', 'in screen'), incorrect comparative structure, wrong word choice ('destructive' should be 'distracted'), and pronoun/verb forms. Use 'prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen', 'when I read on paper', and 'distracted by things like social media.'

× Wait a minute, for the first time we don't need to read Cavalry to tap the chapter general the story, and the next time we need to recovery to have some, uh, some detail of your story.

✓ For the first read-through we don't need to read every detail; we just skim the chapters to get the general idea of the story, and the next time we read we need to go back to recover some details of the story.

Many structural problems and wrong word choices: 'first time' should be 'first read-through', 'Cavalry' and 'tap' are incorrect words here, 'general the story' should be 'the general idea of the story', and 'recovery' should be 'go back to recover' or 'read again to find'. Suggestion: describe skimming first and detailed reading later, using 'skim' and 'go back' or 'read again.'

× I love uh, with everything more because I can see the uh, elite, elite of the art of, umm, uh. Way the way to heal the.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I can appreciate the quality of the writing and the way the author develops the story.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Replace filler words and unclear phrases with clear vocabulary: 'prefer detailed reading', 'appreciate the quality of the writing', and 'the way the author develops the story.' This fits the question about preferring scanning or detailed reading and uses appropriate tense and structure.