Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и упорядочьте мысль. Начните с простой утверждающей темы, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных примера. Обратите внимание на правильные фразы: «I am keen on / I absolutely enjoy», «lie on the sofa», и перечисления оформляйте связками (for example, such as). Поддерживайте длину ответа до 3–4 предложений.

예시: I am keen on reading because it is an exciting activity. For example, when I have free time I like to lie on the sofa and read books about history or journalism. I find reading relaxing and informative.

제안: Уточните выбор и приведите 1–2 ясные причины, избегая незавершённых фраз. Исправьте выражения: «classical type of reading» → «traditional reading», «the odor of book» → «the smell of books». Свяжите причины словами: because / and. Держите ответ полным и аккуратным (2–3 предложения).

예시: I prefer traditional reading on paper because I enjoy the smell and feel of books. I also find paper books more comfortable for long reading sessions, and they feel more authentic to me.

제안: Структурируйте ответ: прямо назовите ситуации, когда требуется внимательное чтение, затем противоположный случай. Уточняйте понятия (e.g. scientific texts, legal documents) и давайте пример. Используйте связки: for instance, whereas, because. Избегайте размытых терминов («something historical») и сокращений в произношении («ROM com» лучше как «romantic comedies»).

예시: You need to read carefully when the text contains important facts, for instance in scientific articles or historical documents, because accuracy matters. By contrast, you can read more quickly for light fiction or romantic comedies when the exact details are not important.

제안: Дайте чёткое предпочтение и объясните причину с примером. Используйте связки: however / but / for example. Исправьте фразы: «know everything about book» → «know most details of a book», «include the facts of reading» → «understand the facts». Сделайте ответ в 2–3 предложениях и избегайте тавтологии.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand the ideas and facts in a book. However, I sometimes scan articles when I only need the main points, for example when researching for a short assignment.

× I absolutely keen on reading because it's so exciting type of activity because when you have the free time you can just link on the your sofa and read about everything history, journalism and other.

✓ I am absolutely keen on reading because it's such an exciting activity; when you have free time you can just lie on your sofa and read about everything: history, journalism, and other subjects.

The sentence misses the verb 'to be' (subject-verb agreement) and has several word choice and structure errors. Use 'I am absolutely keen' (present simple with 'be' for state). 'Such an exciting activity' is the correct collocation. 'Free time' does not need 'the'. 'Link' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lie' (to recline). 'The your' is incorrect; use 'your sofa'. List items need separators and a noun after 'other' (e.g., 'other subjects'). Suggestions: add the missing verb, correct verb choice, remove unnecessary articles, and provide parallel list structure.

× I prefer the classical type of reading, so I like read on paper because I like to feel the odor of book and I feel that it's more like historical and.

✓ I prefer the classic type of reading, so I like to read on paper because I like to smell the book, and I feel that it is more traditional and ...

The verb 'like' needs the infinitive 'to read' after it. 'Classical' should be 'classic' in this context. 'Odor of book' should be 'smell of the book' or 'the book's smell'; include the article 'the' before 'book'. 'It's more like historical and' is incomplete and awkward; use 'it is more traditional' or complete the comparison. Suggestions: use correct verb forms (to read), appropriate adjectives (classic/traditional), include necessary articles, and finish comparisons.

× I suggest that you need to read carefully that it's something historical or science and you don't need.

✓ I think you need to read carefully when it is something historical or scientific, and you do not need to read so carefully otherwise.

The phrase 'I suggest that you need to' is awkward; 'I think' or 'you need to' is better. 'Read carefully that it's something historical or science' is ungrammatical — use 'when it is something historical or scientific.' 'Science' should be the adjective 'scientific.' The sentence ends abruptly with 'and you don't need.' Complete the contrast with 'otherwise' or 'for fiction.' Suggestions: use clear subordinate clause 'when', correct adjective forms, and complete contrasts.

× You should not read something so carefully if it's something about the fiction or ROM com something not important information.

✓ You should not read so carefully if it is fiction or a rom-com, or if the information is not important.

'The fiction' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun 'fiction' or 'a romance/comedy' genre. 'ROM com' should be written 'rom-com' and requires an article 'a rom-com' if singular. 'Something not important information' is ungrammatical; use 'if the information is not important.' Suggestions: use correct noun forms and articles for genres, hyphenate 'rom-com', and place adjectives before nouns properly.

× Of course I prefer detailed reading, but I don't think that it's so important for every book but.

✓ Of course I prefer detailed reading, but I don't think it is necessary for every book.

The sentence has a redundant 'but' at the end and an awkward phrase 'so important for every book but.' Use 'necessary for every book' to convey meaning. 'It's' should be 'it is' or 'it's' consistently; avoid dangling conjunctions. Suggestions: remove the extra 'but' and use a single clear contrast.

× I prefer to know everything about book and include the facts of reading.

✓ I prefer to know everything about a book and to include the facts when reading.

'About book' needs an article: 'about a book' or 'about books.' Parallel infinitives require 'to' before the second verb: 'to know' and 'to include.' 'Include the facts of reading' is unclear; 'include the facts when reading' or 'include the factual details' is better. Suggestions: add articles, maintain parallel structure with infinitives, and clarify 'facts' with a suitable noun phrase.