Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar, and give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and filler words. For example, say why you like reading (relaxation, learning) and when/how long you read, using correct verb forms and concise phrases.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. I usually read for about an hour in the evening, often fiction or short articles. This routine helps me unwind after work and pick up interesting facts.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference, give two concise reasons, and avoid hesitations. Use correct grammar (prefer to read / I prefer reading) and specific examples (e-books, websites, convenience).

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. For example, I can carry many e-books on my phone and use search functions to find information quickly.

제안: Start with a clear contrast: when careful reading is necessary and when skimming is enough. Use specific examples (study, work emails vs. news headlines, leisure blogs) and linking words (however, whereas). Fix grammar errors and unclear phrases.

예시: I need to read carefully when I am studying for exams or reviewing work documents because accuracy matters. However, I usually skim news articles or blog posts for the main idea when I am just browsing for enjoyment.

제안: Give a direct preference and explain why with a clear, short reason and an example. Avoid unclear or fragmented sentences. Use linking words if you contrast both styles.

예시: I usually prefer scanning because I want to find key information quickly, for example when researching a topic online. But I choose detailed reading when the material is important or complex, such as academic papers.

× Definitely I like reading because give me to relax and in more information.

✓ Definitely I like reading because it helps me to relax and gives me more information.

The student omitted the auxiliary verb and misused verb forms. 'Give me' should be 'gives me' to agree with subject 'it' (or use 'helps me to relax and gives me...'). Use present simple for habitual statements and ensure subject-verb agreement; add 'helps' to express the relaxing effect and 'gives' for providing information.

× Exemplary reading in the evening umm around in the evening umm for one hour.

✓ For example, I read in the evening for about one hour.

Sentence structure and verb usage are incorrect. Use 'For example' instead of 'Exemplary', and use the present simple 'I read' for habitual actions. 'Around in the evening' is redundant; 'for about one hour' expresses duration.

× I prefer read on a screen because it is most popularly umm, re read and books.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because it is more popular for reading books.

After 'prefer' use the -ing form 'reading'. 'Most popularly' is incorrect; use comparative 'more popular' and clarify object: 'for reading books'. Ensure adjective/adverb use is correct.

× Umm, I'm exactly uh right now. Read uh, on a screen.

✓ Right now, I am reading on a screen.

Word order and verb form are wrong. Use 'I am reading' (present continuous) to describe an action happening now. Remove filler words and place time expression at start or end.

× Uh, is this new or new pair? It's new papers and.

✓ Are these newspapers new? They are new.

Question formation and noun choice are incorrect. Use plural 'are these newspapers' for multiple items, and the verb 'are' for present. 'New papers' is better as 'newspapers'; complete the second sentence.

× When I can find K moments it is so important.

✓ When I can find quiet moments, it is very important.

Phrase 'K moments' is unclear; likely 'quiet moments'. Use adjective 'quiet' and adverb 'very' for emphasis. Ensure subordinate clause placement and commas.

× For books I'm just trying to get the inner journal a day and the article or doing live reading for relaxation.

✓ For books I try to read an inner journal article a day, and I read other articles for relaxation.

Tense and phrasing are confused. Use present simple 'I try' for habit. Clarify 'inner journal a day' as 'an inner journal article a day'. Use parallel structure for the two activities.

× I usually skim rather than read.

✓ I usually skim rather than read in detail.

Comparative action needs clarification: 'skim rather than read' is acceptable but 'read' should be specified as 'read in detail' to contrast with skimming. Also maintain parallelism; keeping base forms is fine but add object for clarity.

× Very world.

✓ It makes the reading very wide in scope.

'Very world' is ungrammatical and unclear. Provide a full clause explaining the idea: perhaps meaning 'It makes reading very broad' or 'wide in scope'. Use subject and verb to complete the sentence.

× I think the let's say reading she's walls or of more more others story then scanning reading.

✓ I think, let's say, reading novels or longer stories is better for detailed reading than scanning.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Clarify intent: use 'reading novels or longer stories' and comparatives 'is better for detailed reading than scanning'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and proper noun choices ('novels' instead of 'she's walls').