Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and contractions, shorten and organize into 2–3 sentences with a clear topic sentence and one supporting reason. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid repetition. Be more specific about what types of reading you dislike and when you do read.

예시: I don't really enjoy reading books because I find it boring to concentrate on details for a long time. However, I do read when it's necessary, for example I study textbooks for my courses because they contain important information.

제안: Clarify and complete the response with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. State preference directly, give a reason, and add a brief example. Remove filler words (uh) and correct collocations (comfortable, paper materials).

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I have eye problems and screens strain my eyes. For example, reading a printed article is easier for me than reading the same article on my laptop for hours.

제안: Organize answer into a clear contrast: state when careful reading is needed and when scanning suffices. Use linking words (when, but, because) and give specific examples (types of texts). Fix grammar and avoid hesitation.

예시: It depends on the situation: when I'm studying I need to read carefully because textbooks contain important details I must understand. But for casual things, like social media posts or short news items, I usually skim them quickly.

제안: Give a direct answer and then explain with a clear example. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (scan, skimming, important) and avoid repetition. Mention why scanning saves time and when detailed reading is necessary.

예시: I prefer scanning for less important material because it saves time and helps me find key points quickly. However, I use detailed reading when the information is important, such as when preparing for exams or writing assignments.

× Actually I not really love reading book cause for me it is really boring when I have to focus on something for long, just focus on the details for long period I just reading it when it really necessary for me like the textbook in my studies I have to follow it.

✓ Actually I do not really enjoy reading books because for me it is really boring to focus on something for a long time; I only read when it is really necessary for me, like textbooks for my studies, which I have to follow.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'do' for negation, incorrect verb 'love' vs 'enjoy', singular/plural 'book' should be 'books', informal 'cause' should be 'because', missing 'to' before infinitive, 'for long' needs 'for a long time', incorrect tense/form 'I just reading' should be 'I only read', missing 'it is' before 'really necessary', run-on sentence. Suggestion: Use auxiliary verbs for negative present simple (do/does), use plural for general nouns, use proper connectors and punctuation to split clauses, and use correct verb forms and prepositional phrases (for a long time).

× Actually I have some eyes problems, so for me reading on the paper materials is much more com comfortable for me and my eyes, uh, when we focus on the screen for a long time, I think it's quite straightforward when can get some.

✓ Actually I have some eye problems, so reading printed materials is much more comfortable for me and my eyes; when we focus on a screen for a long time, I think it causes strain.

Errors: 'eyes problems' should be 'eye problems' (compound noun), redundant 'for me' repeated, 'the paper materials' better as 'printed materials' or 'paper materials', typo 'com comfortable', awkward clause 'it's quite straightforward when can get some' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms, avoid repetition, fix typos, and replace unclear clauses with clear descriptions like 'it causes strain' or 'it is tiring'.

× So actually it depends on the situations like when I follow my studies, I have to, uh, read the in, uh, like, uh, important details or information. So I need to follow it carefully. But when it's just, uh, news, awesome. So social post, I will really.

✓ So actually it depends on the situation. For my studies, I have to read important details or information carefully. But when it is just news or social media posts, I do not read them carefully.

Errors: 'depends on the situations' should be 'depends on the situation' or 'depends on the situation/situation types'; extraneous fillers ('uh') interrupt flow; 'read the in' is ungrammatical; sentence fragments 'news, awesome. So social post, I will really.' are incoherent. Suggestion: Remove fillers, use singular/plural consistently, form complete sentences, and choose precise vocabulary like 'social media posts' and 'do not read them carefully'.

× So what I said it is depends on the situations like if I have to raise something that not really important for me, I just, uh, scanning on it, just some scheming reading for be because it, it, it, it will set my time.

✓ As I said, it depends on the situation. If something is not really important to me, I just scan it; I do some skimming because it saves my time.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'So what I said it is depends', missing auxiliary and subject-verb agreement 'it is depends' should be 'it depends', 'raise something' is wrong verb choice, 'that not really important for me' missing 'is', incorrect verb form 'scanning' should be 'scan' or 'I just scan it', 'scheming' should be 'skimming', 'for be because' incorrect, repetitive filler 'it, it, it'. Suggestion: Use simple declarative sentences, correct subject-verb agreement, choose accurate verbs ('scan' and 'skim'), and avoid fillers.