Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が通じますが、文法ミス（時制と否定の扱い）、不自然な表現、冗長さが目立ちます。まずトピック文で直接答え、その後で子供の頃との対比を示すために適切な時制（過去形）を使い、理由を簡潔に述べてください。また接続詞（e.g., however, but）を使って文をつなげ、文の数は3文以内にまとめると自然です。例：現在の好み→過去の状況→変化の理由という順序で組み立てましょう。

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading books now. However, I didn’t like reading as a child because I found long sentences boring and difficult to understand. Over time I became more interested in stories and improved my reading skills.

제안: 回答は明確ですが、表現が少し不自然で文法ミス（"not good for my"）があります。理由を述べる際は具体性を加えると良いです（例えば目の疲れ、持ち運び、紙の感触など）。また接続表現（for example, because）を使って理由と結論をつなげてください。文は最大3文程度にまとめましょう。

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the feel and smell of a physical book. For example, paper is easier on my eyes and I like turning real pages. Screens tend to strain my eyes after a long time.

제안: この回答は混乱しています。質問はいつ注意深く読むか、逆にいつ注意深く読む必要がないかを尋ねています。まずトピック文で二つを明確に分けて答え（e.g., I need to read carefully for work documents; I don't need to read carefully for casual novels）、理由や具体例を添え、文法（現在進行形の誤用）を修正してください。接続詞（however, whereas）を使うと論理的になります。

예시: I need to read carefully when I’m studying or reading work-related documents because accuracy matters. In contrast, I don’t read carefully when I’m enjoying light novels or magazines, because I read them mainly for relaxation.

제안: 答えは明確で自然ですが、より説得力を持たせるために詳細な理由や具体例（登場人物の描写や情景描写を楽しむ等）を加えると良いです。接続語（because, for example, so）を使って因果関係を明瞭にし、文は2〜3文で簡潔に保ってください。

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I usually read novels and like to savor the characters and settings. For example, I enjoy pausing to imagine scenes and understand characters’ motivations, so I rarely skim.

× Yes, I like to read books now but when I was a child I don't like to read books.

✓ Yes, I like to read books now, but when I was a child I didn't like to read books.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'When I was a child' refers to the past, so the verb should be in the past tense ('didn't like') rather than present ('don't like'). Use a comma before 'but' to join the clauses clearly.

× It is because it's boring and hard to read the sentences but now I like.

✓ It was because I found reading sentences boring and difficult, but now I like it.

The first clause refers to childhood (past) so use past tense ('was', 'found'). The original sentence also omits the object after 'like'; add 'it' to clarify. Rearranging to 'boring and difficult' and using 'found' improves clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to read on paper. I like the touch of the surface of books.

✓ I prefer to read on paper. I like the feel of the surface of books.

'Touch' is a noun but 'feel' is more natural collocation when describing texture. No definite article change required, but wording improved for naturalness.

× On the other hand, screen is not good for my.

✓ On the other hand, screens are not good for me.

Use the plural 'screens' or 'the screen' depending on meaning; 'screens are' matches general statement. 'My' is a possessive adjective and incorrect here; the object pronoun 'me' is required.

× I read books carefully. When I have to read books about my work, on the other hand, I'm not reading books.

✓ I read books carefully. However, when I have to read books for my work, I don't (always) read them carefully.

The original second sentence uses present continuous 'I'm not reading books' which conflicts with meaning. If intended to say they do not read work books carefully, use simple present negative ('I don't read them carefully') or add 'always' for nuance. Also use 'for my work' rather than 'about my work' for naturalness.

× I prefer detailed reading because I usually read novels.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I usually read novels.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Detailed reading' as a noun phrase and 'read' present tense agree with the habitual action 'usually'. No change needed.

× I want to enjoy reading them so I do not scan books.

✓ I want to enjoy reading them, so I do not scan them.

Repeating the object 'them' makes the sentence clearer and avoids ambiguity; add a comma before 'so' to join clauses properly.