Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Cụ thể: sửa thì động từ (I also read), bỏ cụm mơ hồ (“along in my bathroom”), và chia câu hợp lý (một câu chủ đề + 1-2 câu bổ trợ). Thêm liên từ phù hợp để mạch lạc (for example, because, so).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read in my free time to relax after studying, and sometimes I read in the bathroom when I need a quiet moment. Reading helps me unwind and forget about stress.

제안: Giảm tính nói lặp và cải thiện lựa chọn từ; dùng lý do cụ thể và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng từ thông tục như 'cause; thay bằng because. Nên nói rõ hơn về lợi ích của sách in và giữ câu ngắn, mạch lạc với từ nối (because, moreover).

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I find it less tiring than looking at a screen. Also, printed books help me concentrate better and remember information more effectively.

제안: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn: bắt đầu với câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó giải thích hai tình huống khác nhau. Tránh lặp từ 'information' quá nhiều; dùng từ thay thế (details, facts). Dùng liên từ để phân biệt (when..., but when...).

예시: You need to read carefully when you are doing research for a lesson or completing a task because you must understand the facts and details. But when you are relaxed, you can read just for pleasure without focusing on every detail.

제안: Sửa cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp: dùng thì và dạng động từ đúng (I will scan / I will read it in detail). Thêm một câu chủ đề và lý do ngắn để làm rõ sự lựa chọn; tránh dùng 'so' không chính xác. Dùng liên từ 'if... then...' hoặc 'when...'.

예시: I usually scan a boring book to get the main points quickly, but if a book is interesting I read it in detail so I can remember the plot and enjoy the characters.

× Definitely yes. I also reading books along in my bathroom and when I have free time I always reading books to relax and wind down after study.

✓ Definitely yes. I also read books in my bathroom and when I have free time I always read books to relax and wind down after studying.

The verbs 'reading' and 'reading' are incorrectly used without auxiliary verbs; simple present tense 'read' is required for habitual actions. Use 'study' -> 'studying' (gerund) after 'after' to indicate an action occurring after another. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and use gerund after prepositions. Problem type ID:8

× I also reading books along in my bathroom and when I have free time I always reading books to relax and wind down after study.

✓ I also read books in my bathroom and when I have free time I always read books to relax and wind down after studying.

The phrase 'along in my bathroom' is incorrect; 'in my bathroom' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate location. Also 'after study' should be 'after studying'. Suggestion: remove 'along' and use 'in' for location, and use gerund after 'after'. Problem type ID:11

× As for me, I prefer to read on paper 'cause the main reason for this is that when you read on the paper, you will not hurt your eyes and you can improve your eyesight.

✓ As for me, I prefer to read on paper because the main reason is that when you read on paper, you will not hurt your eyes and you can improve your eyesight.

Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. Also 'on the paper' is incorrect; general statements use 'on paper' without the definite article. Suggestion: avoid ''cause' in formal responses and omit 'the' with uncountable/abstract nouns like 'paper'. Problem type ID:17

× That is when you have to search for the information for your lesson to find the information that you need to complete the task, and when you are relaxed, you just read for fun.

✓ That is when you have to search for information for your lesson to find what you need to complete the task, and when you are relaxed, you just read for fun.

Use 'information' without the definite article when speaking generally. Repeating 'the information' is redundant; 'what you need' is more natural. Suggestion: omit 'the' before uncountable nouns in general statements and avoid repetition. Problem type ID:22

× If the book is so boring I will scanning and if that is interesting I will read it detail to remember the plot of the story.

✓ If the book is boring, I will scan it, and if it is interesting, I will read it in detail to remember the plot of the story.

After 'I will' use the base verb form 'scan', not 'scanning'. Also use commas after conditional clauses and 'in detail' is the correct adverbial phrase. Replace 'that is' with 'it is' for the book. Suggestion: in future tense use 'will' + base verb; use 'in detail' for detailed reading. Problem type ID:6