Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Remove filler words (umm, like) and correct grammar (e.g., "I wouldn't say I'm someone who likes reading" or "I don't really enjoy reading books"). Keep it under 3–4 sentences.

예시: I don't really enjoy reading books. The main reason is that I get distracted easily and can't focus on one thing for long, especially when there are other things on my mind. However, I do read short articles or summaries when I need information quickly.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a linking word. Remove filler words and repeated phrases. Use correct phrasing ("access other apps" or "be tempted to check notifications"). One or two supporting details are enough.

예시: If I had to choose, I prefer reading on paper because reading on a screen often distracts me with notifications and makes it easy to switch to other apps. For focused reading, a printed book helps me concentrate better.

제안: Be clear about the situations requiring careful reading. Start with a direct topic sentence answering both parts, then give one or two specific examples. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., "when I'm sleep-deprived I can't concentrate"). Use linking words like "because" or "however."

예시: I need to read carefully when I am studying or when the text contains important details, such as instructions or legal information, because missing a detail could cause problems. However, I don't read as carefully when I'm just browsing news or social media, since the consequences of misunderstanding are low.

제안: Give a direct answer then support it with one clear reason and a brief example. Correct phrasing ("I'm the kind of person who likes to explore" or "I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the author's meaning"). Avoid redundancy ("deeply understand their meanings").

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand the author's ideas fully and notice subtle points. For example, when I read a novel or an academic article, I take my time to analyze the structure and wording to see what the author really means.

× I wouldn't say umm the person who like to read the book because I always get distracted and never can never focus on one thing.

✓ I wouldn't say I'm the kind of person who likes to read books because I always get distracted and can never focus on one thing.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('who like' should be 'who likes'), pronoun and article choice ('the person' awkward; 'the kind of person' fits), plural noun ('the book' -> 'books'), double negation ('never can never' -> 'can never'). Suggestion: Ensure the verb agrees with the singular relative pronoun 'who' referring to 'kind of person' and use plural for general statements about reading. Remove duplicate negatives and choose natural collocations.

× So it's like wild hard thing for me to do in my life.

✓ So it's a really hard thing for me to do in my life.

Errors: 'wild hard' is incorrect collocation; 'wild' misused instead of an intensifier like 'really'. Missing article needed before 'hard thing' (use 'a'). Suggestion: Use appropriate adverbs (really, very) and include articles with countable nouns.

× Umm if I had to choose one I would say I prefer reading on paper because if I read on screen I would get distracted by notification or just I can just easily get it other access so.

✓ If I had to choose, I would say I prefer reading on paper because if I read on a screen I get distracted by notifications or I can easily access things elsewhere.

Errors: article use ('on screen' -> 'on a screen'), third-person singular/plural noun agreement with 'notification' -> 'notifications', awkward phrasing 'get it other access' corrected to 'access things elsewhere'. Tense/modal: keep conditional 'would' for preference but general consequence uses present 'get' for habitual reaction. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns and clearer phrasing for accessing distractions.

× I think when I need to read carefully is when I had a lack of sleep because I always get space start and couldn't really get it in my head.

✓ I think when I need to read carefully is when I have a lack of sleep because I always lose focus and can't really take it in.

Errors: tense mismatch ('had' -> 'have' for general situations), incorrect idiom 'get space start' unclear; corrected to 'lose focus'. 'Couldn't' should be 'can't' for present/general truth. 'Get it in my head' improved to 'take it in'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual situations and common idioms like 'lose focus' and 'take it in.'

× I would say I prefer more detailed reading because I'm always the par a person who likes to explore more and know what author means, which helps me a lot to deeply understand their meanings.

✓ I would say I prefer more detailed reading because I'm the kind of person who likes to explore more and know what the author means, which helps me a lot to understand their meaning deeply.

Errors: word order and articles ('the par a person' -> 'the kind of person'), missing definite article before 'author' ('the author'), verb form 'know' acceptable but 'to know what the author means' kept, pronoun-number agreement 'their meanings' -> 'their meaning' or 'the author's meaning' (singular). Suggestion: Use standard expression 'the kind of person', include 'the' before specific roles like 'author', and keep noun/pronoun number consistent. Use natural adverb placement ('understand deeply' -> 'understand ... deeply').