Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and correct grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid redundancy. Also correct word choice (e.g., 'during my free time', 'the ideas authors put into them', 'I collect books and read them').

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading during my free time. I read because it helps me learn new things and improves my English, and I also enjoy the ideas that authors express. For example, I collect novels and try to read at least one book a month. Because of this habit, my vocabulary and comprehension have improved.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference and give brief reasons in a logical order using linking words. Fix tense and grammar (e.g., 'I preferred', 'we didn't have', 'I bought a physical book', 'I'm more into print now because...'). Complete sentences and avoid trailing off.

예시: I used to prefer reading on a screen because we didn't have many physical books and it was easier to find titles online. However, I recently bought some paper books and now I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and easier on my eyes. For these reasons, I read most of my books in print now.

제안: Provide a concise topic sentence and two specific situations with linking words. Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'related to my studies', 'concentrate on it', 'so I can answer questions'). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

예시: I need to read carefully when preparing for exams or studying for class because I must understand concepts and answer questions accurately. For routine reading like light articles or messages I skim to get the main idea quickly. Therefore, I adjust my reading style depending on how important the material is.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating both preferences, then explain with specific examples and linking words. Improve phrasing (e.g., 'I prefer scanning to decide what to read, but I read in detail when I'm studying or very interested'). Keep it concise and avoid awkward phrases like 'more onto'.

예시: I usually scan when I'm choosing a book or browsing topics to see what interests me. However, when I've chosen a topic I care about—such as a subject for a project—I read in detail because I want to fully understand it. This way I balance quick selection with deep reading when needed.

× Yes, I like reading jury my free time.

✓ Yes, I like reading during my free time.

The preposition 'during' is used to indicate a period of time when something happens. 'Jury' is incorrect here (likely a typo). Use 'during my free time' to show when you read.

× I would love to spend it reading because I got to learn something new, I got to improve my English and I also love the idea of the authors put into it.

✓ I would love to spend it reading because I get to learn something new, I get to improve my English, and I also love the ideas the authors put into their books.

Use present simple 'get' to express general truths or habitual benefits rather than past 'got'. Also correct article and noun agreement: 'idea of the authors put into it' is unclear; change to 'ideas the authors put into their books' for clarity and correct possessive reference. Add comma before 'and' for clarity.

× Right now I collect books and I read it.

✓ Right now I collect books and I read them.

Pronoun must agree in number with its antecedent. 'Books' is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'them' instead of singular 'it'.

× Before, I prefer reading on on a screen because we don't have a book a physical book.

✓ Before, I preferred reading on a screen because we didn't have a physical book.

Referring to a past habit requires past tense 'preferred' and 'didn't have'. Remove duplicated 'on' and correct word order to 'a physical book'.

× I can only access the book that I want to read on the Internet.

✓ I could only access the book I wanted to read on the Internet.

When continuing the past-time narration, change modal/verbs to past: 'could' and 'wanted'. This keeps tense consistent with previous sentence about past preference. 'On the Internet' is acceptable; simplifying 'that I want to read' to 'I wanted to read' is more natural.

× But after some time I was able to purchase a physical book and right now I am more into it because it.

✓ But after some time I was able to purchase a physical book, and now I prefer it because I enjoy reading physical copies.

The clause 'right now I am more into it because it' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Use 'prefer it' to contrast with earlier habit, and provide a clear reason: 'because I enjoy reading physical copies.' Keep tense consistent: 'was able to purchase' (past) then 'now I prefer' (present).

× I need to read carefully.

✓ I need to read carefully.

This sentence is grammatical and fits the context; no change needed.

× Every time I have an exam, whatever it is that it's related with my study, I really need to read it carefully, concentrate into it so that I would be able to understand what the lesson is and so that I would have an answer for my question.

✓ Every time I have an exam, or when it is related to my studies, I really need to read carefully and concentrate so that I can understand the lesson and answer the questions.

Use 'related to' (not 'related with'). 'Study' should be plural 'studies' in this context. Remove unnecessary pronouns 'it' after 'read' and 'concentrate' and use 'concentrate' without preposition. Use present modal 'can' instead of 'would be able to' for clarity and naturalness. 'Answer the questions' is clearer than 'have an answer for my question.'

× And I would treat everything else the same way. I read them carefully.

✓ And I treat everything else the same way; I read other materials carefully.

Change 'would treat' to 'treat' to match habitual present. 'I read them carefully' is vague; specify 'other materials' to clarify antecedent, and keep present tense for habitual action.

× If it's about choosing what type of book I would read or what topic I am more interested, I prefer scanning.

✓ If I'm choosing what type of book to read or which topic interests me more, I prefer scanning.

Use present progressive 'I'm choosing' or simple 'when choosing' and infinitive 'to read'. 'What topic I am more interested' is ungrammatical; use 'which topic interests me more'. This corrects verb and preposition usage.

× But if I have the topic of my choice I am more onto detailed reading because I want to really understand everything about it.

✓ But if I have a topic I choose, I prefer detailed reading because I want to really understand everything about it.

Use 'prefer detailed reading' instead of 'am more onto detailed reading'. 'Topic of my choice' is okay but 'a topic I choose' is more natural. Keep consistent present tense 'prefer' and provide clear phrasing.