Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, specific and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and give a concrete reason or example. Avoid filler words and censoring terms (replace ****). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot because it helps improve my pronunciation and expands my vocabulary. For example, reading novels and articles exposes me to new words and sentence structures that I can practice aloud.

제안: Remove filler sounds, use a clear topic sentence and give specific supporting details or comparison. Explain why paper helps focus and give an example of when you choose paper over screen. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate better and reduces distractions from notifications. For instance, I always choose printed books when I study for exams because I can annotate and focus for longer periods.

제안: Organize into a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., "when...but"). Correct grammar and be specific about situations and reasons. Provide an example of what requires careful reading. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I need to read carefully when I study or prepare for tests because I must understand details and take notes, but I skim casually when I'm reading news or social posts. For example, I read academic articles slowly and underline key points, whereas I only scan headlines on my phone.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain with logical linking words. Fix grammar and comparative phrasing, and give concrete examples of when each method is used. Keep answer concise and coherent.

예시: I prefer detailed reading for learning because it helps me fully understand and remember information, but I use scanning when I'm short on time. For instance, I scan emails to find urgent messages, but I read textbooks in detail to study for exams.

× I like reading very much because it improve our **** pronunciation and vocabulary.

✓ I like reading very much because it improves our pronunciation and vocabulary.

The verb 'improve' must agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to 'reading'), so use third person singular present tense 'improves'. Also remove extraneous characters and keep noun 'pronunciation' singular to match context.

× I prefer to read on paper because, uh, it's uh, important for our focus and, uh, we make, uh, connect with the reading.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it's better for our concentration, and we connect more with the text when we read on paper.

Pronoun and phrase choices were awkward: 'important for our focus' is grammatical but 'concentration' is a more natural noun. 'We make connect' is incorrect; use 'we connect' or 'we feel more connected' and specify 'the text' or 'what we are reading'. The correction keeps tense and meaning appropriate for a general preference.

× Umm, I uh, read carefully when nobody around me because uh, no one can interrupt me. That's uh, I read carefully and when everyone around me, uh, I am not focused carefully.

✓ I read carefully when nobody is around me because no one can interrupt me. When everyone is around me, I am not able to concentrate.

The original has missing verbs and awkward repetition. Add 'is' to form 'nobody is around me' and 'everyone is around me'. Replace 'not focused carefully' with 'not able to concentrate' for natural expression. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× Basically scanning is 1 important is important when we have no much time for reading detailed reading. I think more important it gain knowledge comparison to scanning.

✓ Basically, scanning is important when we do not have much time for detailed reading. I think detailed reading is more important because it helps us gain more knowledge compared to scanning.

This sentence had word order, missing words, and repetition issues. Remove the stray '1', use 'do not have' for negative, change 'reading detailed reading' to 'detailed reading', and rephrase the second sentence to show clear comparison: 'detailed reading is more important because it helps us gain more knowledge compared to scanning'.