Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and addresses the question, but it is slightly wordy and has minor grammar issues. Make the response more natural by starting with a direct topic sentence, reduce redundancy, and correct verb collocations (e.g., “read the news” not “read news from the day”). Use one linking phrase to add your reason.

예시: I don't read often, but I do follow the news for work. For example, I read daily news articles to stay informed about local events and social issues, which helps me in my job.

제안: Good comparison and reasons. Improve by making sentences more concise and using smoother linking words. Use correct articles (“on paper” is fine) and avoid colloquial fillers like “actually” twice. Add a brief contrast phrase to enhance coherence.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because the texture and smell make reading more immersive. However, I often read on screens for convenience and to save time when I'm commuting.

제안: Clear idea but some grammar errors and imprecise phrasing reduce naturalness. Use plural or articles correctly (“case files” or “a case file”), and avoid absolute statements; say “fewer consequences.” Use linking words to contrast the two situations more smoothly.

예시: It depends on the context. For instance, when I'm preparing documents or a case file for work, I read carefully to avoid mistakes. In contrast, when I'm reading a novel for leisure, I usually skim or read casually because mistakes have fewer consequences.

제안: You answer appropriately but use a nonstandard adverb (“detailedly”) and filler (“Umm”). Replace with natural expressions like “read in detail” and avoid fillers. Be specific about when you scan versus read in detail and use a linking word to show contrast.

예시: It depends on the importance of the material. For critical documents or case files I read in detail to make sure I don't miss anything. On the other hand, I tend to scan emails or less important reports to find key points quickly.

× I don't prefer reading, but due to my work requirement, I will sometimes read news from the day, such as knowing what's happening around me as well as knowing more about the society.

✓ I don't prefer reading, but due to my work requirements, I sometimes read the news of the day to know what's happening around me and to learn more about society.

Problems: 'work requirement' should be plural 'work requirements' to match general context (Article/numbering and noun form - Article errors/Plural); 'will sometimes read' is awkward for habitual action; use simple present 'sometimes read' (Modal/Future tense issue). 'news from the day' is unnatural; use 'the news of the day'. 'knowing... as well as knowing...' is repetitive; use infinitive 'to know' and 'to learn' for purpose. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct noun number, and simplify parallel structure.

× I prefer reading on a paper because the texture makes me feel like I'm actually reading something.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because the texture makes me feel like I'm actually reading something.

Problem: 'on a paper' incorrectly uses the indefinite article; the correct expression is 'on paper' (no article) when referring to the medium in general. Suggestion: remove 'a' when speaking about reading in the medium generally.

× But nowadays it's very convenient for us to read through our electronic devices, so reading on screen actually is a good plan for saving time and effort.

✓ But nowadays it's very convenient to read on electronic devices, so reading on a screen is a good way to save time and effort.

Problems: 'for us to read through our electronic devices' is wordy and slightly awkward; 'read on electronic devices' is clearer. 'reading on screen actually is a good plan for saving time and effort' uses awkward noun 'plan' and progressive phrasing; use 'is a good way to save time and effort'. Suggestion: prefer concise phrasing and correct collocations ('read on', 'screen' with article 'a' or none depending on context).

× If it's about documents or case file that I have to submit, I will read carefully because it won't allow any mistakes.

✓ If it's about documents or case files that I have to submit, I will read carefully because they must not contain any mistakes.

Problems: 'case file' should be plural 'case files' to match 'documents or'; pronoun 'it' does not agree with plural antecedent; use 'they' and rephrase 'won't allow any mistakes' to 'must not contain any mistakes' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure noun number agreement and matching pronouns; use clearer modal phrasing for obligation.

× However, if it's just a random book that I'm reading, I would read casually because there are no consequence if I make any mistakes.

✓ However, if it's just a random book that I'm reading, I would read casually because there are no consequences if I make any mistakes.

Problem: 'no consequence' should be plural 'no consequences' when referring to multiple potential mistakes; also condition 'if I make any mistakes' is fine. Suggestion: use correct plural form with 'no' when referring to multiple outcomes.

× For example, if there's a case file that I'm handling, I will read detailedly in order to gain all the information without missing any detail.

✓ For example, if there's a case file that I'm handling, I will read in detail in order to get all the information without missing any details.

Problems: 'read detailedly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'in detail'. 'gain all the information' is acceptable but 'get all the information' is more natural. 'missing any detail' should be plural 'details'. Suggestion: use established collocations ('read in detail') and ensure plural for countable nouns.

× Umm, but I would choose to scan through some document if it's not that important.

✓ Umm, but I would choose to scan through some documents if they're not that important.

Problems: 'some document' should be plural 'some documents' in this context. Also 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural. Suggestion: maintain number agreement between nouns and pronouns.