Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and shows motivation, but has grammatical errors, awkward phrasing and some redundancy. Make the topic sentence clear, correct sentence structure (use articles, verb forms), and reduce repetition. Add one specific example to enrich the answer and use linking words for cohesion.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. As a teacher preparing for the IELTS exam, I read every day to improve my knowledge and language skills; in addition, I read storybooks and online articles for pleasure, for example, contemporary short stories to relax in the evenings.

제안: This answer is clear, well-structured and natural, but replace awkward verb choices (e.g., “refer reading”) and combine ideas more smoothly with linking words. You can add a brief example to be more specific.

예시: I definitely prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and it causes less eye strain than looking at a screen for long periods. For instance, when I study textbooks, I’m more focused and can annotate margins without distraction.

제안: Your response addresses both parts but contains errors and an unclear phrase (“scheme tests”). Improve vocabulary (use ‘skim’ not ‘scheme’), correct grammar, and use a linking word to contrast the two situations. Be a bit more specific about examples of documents or what you skim for.

예시: I read carefully when I’m studying or reviewing important documents, such as lesson plans or academic articles, because I don’t want to miss any details. On the other hand, I usually skim social media posts, news headlines or web pages when I just need a quick fact or update.

제안: Good structure and clear contrast, but fix verb usage (“refer to scanning” is unnatural) and slightly expand with a specific example and a linking phrase for coherence. Keep it concise (no more than five sentences).

예시: It depends on the purpose: if I need a particular piece of information, I scan the text because it’s faster and more efficient; for example, I scan timetables or search results. However, when I’m studying a textbook or reading a novel, I read in detail to fully understand the content and its nuances.

× I read every day mainly because I am teacher and I'm also preparing for the IELTS exam.

✓ I read every day mainly because I am a teacher and I'm also preparing for the IELTS exam.

Missing indefinite article before a profession. In English, when stating someone's occupation in the subject complement, use 'a' or 'an' (a teacher). Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'teacher' to be grammatically correct.

× Besides educational materials are occasionally read story books and articles online for pleasure.

✓ Besides educational materials, I occasionally read story books and articles online for pleasure.

Sentence structure is incorrect and missing subject and proper word order. 'Besides' should be followed by a comma and the subject 'I' is required. Move 'occasionally' to modify the verb correctly. Suggestion: add the subject 'I' and reorder to 'I occasionally read'.

× I definitely refer reading on paper.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on paper.

Incorrect verb used ('refer' instead of 'prefer') and verb choice affects agreement. 'Prefer' is the correct lexical choice here. Suggestion: replace 'refer' with 'prefer' to convey preference.

× it causes less eye strain than reading on the screen for long periods.

✓ it causes less eye strain than reading on a screen for long periods.

Article error combined with noun choice: 'the screen' is unnatural in this general statement; use 'a screen'. Also sentence is acceptable otherwise. Suggestion: use 'a screen' for general reference.

× I also enjoy the feeling of holding the physical book and turning the pages.

✓ I also enjoy the feeling of holding a physical book and turning its pages.

Article and possessive pronoun improve clarity: use 'a physical book' instead of 'the physical book' for general statement, and 'its pages' clarifies ownership. Suggestion: use 'a' and 'its' for natural phrasing.

× I read carefully when I'm studying, reviewing important documents or learning new information because I don't want to miss any details.

✓ I read carefully when I'm studying, reviewing important documents, or learning new information because I don't want to miss any details.

Missing comma in list (style) rather than major grammar error; commas improve readability. Tense is consistent. Suggestion: add comma before 'or' in the series for clarity.

× However, when I'm browsing social media, reading news headlines or looking for specific information, I usually scheme tests instead.

✓ However, when I'm browsing social media, reading news headlines, or looking for specific information, I usually skim texts instead.

Multiple issues: incorrect word 'scheme' should be 'skim', 'tests' should be 'texts', and missing serial comma. Suggestion: replace with 'skim texts' and add comma for list clarity.

× If I'm looking for a particular piece of information, I refer to scanning because it's faster and more efficient.

✓ If I'm looking for a particular piece of information, I prefer scanning because it's faster and more efficient.

Wrong verb 'refer to' used instead of 'prefer'. Use 'prefer scanning' to express preference. Suggestion: replace 'refer to scanning' with 'prefer scanning'.

× However, when I'm reading a book or studying something important, I refer detailed reading to fully understand the content.

✓ However, when I'm reading a book or studying something important, I prefer detailed reading to fully understand the content.

Incorrect verb 'refer' used; should be 'prefer'. Word order 'prefer detailed reading' is correct. Suggestion: replace 'refer' with 'prefer' to indicate preference.