Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more coherent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., “connect the words for their brains,” “I feel I bored”). Use correct grammar for emotions and purposes (e.g., “I feel bored” or “it calms me”).

예시: I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, I often read humorous short articles and action stories to unwind, and I read newspapers regularly to keep up with current events.

제안: Give a direct answer first (paper or screen), then two clear reasons with linking words. Correct word choice and sentence structure (e.g., “I prefer reading on a screen because it’s convenient when I travel”). Avoid invented words like “Afterly.”

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient and lightweight when I travel. For instance, when I’m on a train I read articles on my phone, and I can carry many books without the bulk.

제안: Provide a clear contrast with linking words (e.g., “When I study, I read carefully; however, when I read for pleasure, I skim”). Use correct grammar for reasons and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about what you do when you skim or read in detail.

예시: When I study for exams, I read carefully and take notes so I remember key points. On the other hand, when I read for fun—such as magazines or comics—I usually skim and look at pictures rather than concentrating on every word.

제안: Answer directly (I prefer scanning/detailed or both) and explain when you use each method with linking words. Improve clarity and grammar (e.g., “I scan to get the main idea” or “I read in detail to remember facts”). Avoid vague phrases like “fit my brain.”

예시: I use both methods: I scan texts to get the main idea quickly, but I read in detail when I need to remember facts for exams. For example, I scan news articles but study textbooks in depth to prepare for tests.

× Yes I like reading because reading is a one way to connect the words for their brains and also sometimes I feel nervous and sometimes feel I bored.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it is a good way to connect words in my mind, and sometimes I feel nervous or bored.

Problems: incorrect use of articles and nouns, wrong pronoun reference, and incorrect adjective/verb forms. 'a one way' should be 'a way' or 'a good way'; 'the words for their brains' is unclear — changed to 'words in my mind' to match meaning and correct pronoun. 'sometimes feel I bored' is incorrect word order and missing auxiliary 'am' — corrected to 'I feel bored'. Suggestion: use subject-verb-object word order, choose correct articles ('a' vs none), and use appropriate pronouns and verbs for feelings. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Afterly I used the screen because screen is a very easy to read and the paper are carry out is a very disturbing for me and sometime I travel I prefer to the screen reading like I am a train.

✓ Recently I use a screen because it is very easy to read, and carrying paper is very inconvenient for me; sometimes when I travel by train I prefer reading on a screen.

Problems: 'Afterly' is not a word — use 'recently' or 'lately'. Tense consistency: student mixed past 'used' with general habit; changed to present 'use'. Articles: 'screen' needs 'a' or 'the' depending — 'a screen' or 'reading on a screen' is natural. 'the paper are carry out is a very disturbing' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'carrying paper is very inconvenient'. 'sometime I travel I prefer to the screen reading like I am a train' had preposition and word order errors — corrected to 'sometimes when I travel by train I prefer reading on a screen'. Suggestion: use common adverbs, keep tense consistent for habits, and correct prepositions and article use. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I open the mobile phone and the reading some articles.

✓ I open my phone and read some articles.

Problems: unnecessary article 'the' before gerund and wrong verb form 'the reading'. 'open the mobile phone' is unnatural — 'open my phone' is idiomatic. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions: 'I open my phone and read articles.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× In the study time I read carefully and focus on articles because I prepared my papers and sometimes I read only for funny purpose like articles, newspapers and some magazines.

✓ When I study, I read carefully and focus on articles because I am preparing for my exams, and sometimes I read just for fun, like articles, newspapers and magazines.

Problems: 'In the study time' is awkward — 'When I study'. Tense mismatch: 'I prepared my papers' should match present continuous 'I am preparing' if referring to ongoing preparation. 'funny purpose' is wrong collocation — use 'for fun'. Suggestion: use natural time expressions, keep tense consistent, and use correct collocations ('for fun'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× I'm not concentrate, I focus on the pictures and just.

✓ I don't concentrate; I focus on the pictures instead.

Problems: 'I'm not concentrate' mixes 'be' with base verb — should be 'I don't concentrate' or 'I'm not concentrating'. 'and just' is incomplete; clarified to 'instead'. Suggestion: use correct negation with do-support for present simple ('I don't concentrate') or present continuous ('I'm not concentrating'), and complete the sentence. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yes, I prefer detailing or scanning reading because I am scan all the words and fit my brain.

✓ Yes, I prefer detailed or skimming reading because I scan all the words to suit my mind.

Problems: 'detailing or scanning reading' wrong adjective forms — use 'detailed reading' or 'scanning/skim reading'. 'I am scan' is wrong verb form; use 'I scan'. 'fit my brain' is unnatural — use 'suit my mind' or 'fit my brain' replaced with clearer phrase. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms before nouns and proper verb forms (simple present for habits). Grammar problem type ID:8

× I don't forget it because I have completed my papers and I read one thing very detailed and focus.

✓ I don't forget it because I studied thoroughly for my exams, and when I read something I read it in great detail and focus.

Problems: tense inconsistency: 'I have completed my papers' conflicts with habit; if referring to studying for exams, use past simple or present perfect appropriately; clarified to 'I studied thoroughly for my exams'. 'one thing very detailed' needs noun and adverb form — 'read something in great detail' and 'focus' needs 'and focus' clarified. Suggestion: use appropriate tense for completed actions and proper adverbial phrases ('in great detail'). Grammar problem type ID:6