Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えをもっと明確で自然な英語にし、冗長な表現や不明瞭なフレーズを避けましょう。まず「好きかどうか」を直接答え（肯定/否定のトピック文）し、その理由を2つまでの具体的な詳細で補足します。例えば「I prefer videos because they are faster and more engaging」のような簡潔な理由を述べ、最後に短い締めの文で結論を付けます。発音や不明瞭なフレーズ（例："Long's Hanging"）は明確に言い換えてください。

예시: No, I don't enjoy reading very much. I prefer watching videos on YouTube or TV because they give me information faster and are more engaging. For example, I can get news highlights in a few minutes. So I usually choose videos over books.

제안: 回答を簡潔で論理的に組み立ててください。まず好みを明確に示し、その理由を具体的に1～2点述べます（例：copy-pasteができる、検索が簡単）。リンクワード（because, so, for example）を使って理由をつなげ、意味不明な語句を避けてください。語彙は文脈に合ったものを使い、文は2～3文で収めましょう。

예시: I prefer reading on a screen. I can copy and paste text and quickly search for more information, which saves time. For example, when studying I use the search function to find definitions immediately.

제안: まず『いつ注意深く読むか』という質問に直接答え、対比をはっきりさせましょう（casual vs important situations）。理由と具体例を加え、曖昧な語句（"grave"や"solemn qualification"）を自然な英語に直してください。文を短くし、情報の重要性に基づく判断を説明すると良いです。

예시: I don't read carefully when I'm watching films or dramas because subtitles are just for understanding the story. However, I read very carefully for important documents, such as university applications or official forms, because mistakes can affect the result.

제안: 質問にはまず好み（scanning か detailed reading）を明確に答え、その理由と条件を述べましょう。状況に応じて使い分ける場合は具体例を挙げて説明します。リンクワード（however, because, so）を使って理由をつなげ、意味不明な語句を避けてください。

예시: I usually prefer scanning because it helps me find key information quickly. However, I use detailed reading when the text is important, such as study materials or contracts, because I don't want to miss important details.

× Actually, no, I don't like reading very much because I prefer to watch movies like YouTube or TV, draw TV news to get new information.

✓ Actually, no, I don't like reading very much because I prefer to watch videos on YouTube or television and watch the news to get new information.

The original sentence has unnatural word choices and incorrect verb use (draw TV news). Reword into a clearer structure: 'watch videos on YouTube or television' and 'watch the news' to express how information is obtained. Use parallel structure with 'and' to connect the activities.

× I feel a little bit troublesome to read, Long's Hanging says.

✓ I find reading a little troublesome, as Long said.

The phrase 'feel a little bit troublesome to read' is ungrammatical; use 'find X troublesome' to describe a feeling about an activity. 'Long's Hanging says' is unclear; assuming intended reference to someone named Long, use 'as Long said.' Ensure subject and verb agree and phrase is idiomatic.

× Deepfinder to wait on a screen because onspring account highlight history.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because online accounts highlight important parts.

Original contains nonwords and incorrect structure. 'Prefer to read on a screen' is the correct phrase. Replace 'onspring account highlight history' with 'online accounts highlight important parts' to convey the idea that digital text can be highlighted. Keep subject-verb agreement.

× I like copy and paste. It's more committing to. Summarize the sentences.

✓ I like being able to copy and paste. It's more convenient for summarizing sentences.

'I like copy and paste' should be 'I like being able to copy and paste' (gerund or infinitive structure). 'More committing to' is incorrect; use 'more convenient' or 'makes it easier' and explicitly link to summarizing: 'for summarizing sentences.'

× The number is subtitles or movies or dramas.

✓ For example, subtitles in movies or dramas.

'The number is' is incorrect here. Use a phrase such as 'For example' and specify 'subtitles in movies or dramas' to make the meaning clear and grammatical.

× I. Don't grave carefully because it's not important information, but when I applied solemn qualification at the universities application.

✓ I don't read carefully because it is not important information, but I read carefully when I apply for university programs or formal qualifications.

Fragmented sentence and wrong word choices: 'Don't grave' should be 'don't read.' 'Applied solemn qualification at the universities application' is ungrammatical; use 'apply for university programs or formal qualifications.' Ensure consistent tense and clear clause connection with 'but'.

× I prefer studying because a convert to Durham, but sometimes I miss the important information, so depending on the situation I need to wait with.

✓ I prefer detailed reading when studying because I need to understand the content, but sometimes I miss important information, so it depends on the situation whether I read carefully or skim.

Original sentence contains unclear phrases ('a convert to Durham', 'need to wait with'). Replace with coherent explanation: prefer detailed reading when studying, sometimes miss information, and conclude with 'it depends on the situation whether I read carefully or skim.' This corrects sentence structure and meaning.