Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변은 주제 문장으로 시작했고 관련 이유를 제시했지만 몇 가지 개선점이 있습니다. 문장 연결이 매끄럽지 않고 반복(‘uh’, ‘and’)이 있으며 문법적 오류(‘travel books’, ‘local style of people’)와 어색한 표현이 보입니다. 1) 불필요한 망설임(uh)을 줄이세요. 2) 핵심 이유를 2-3개의 간결한 문장으로 나누고 연결어(For example, In addition)를 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 만드세요. 3) 어휘를 더 정확하게 사용하세요(예: travel books → travel guides; local style of people → local customs). 4) 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지하세요.

예시: I really enjoy reading, especially travel guides, because I love learning about different countries. For example, reading about local customs and traditions helps me understand how people live and why they behave a certain way. In addition, travel books give practical tips for visiting places, which I find very useful.

제안: 답변은 선호를 명확히 했고 이유도 제시했지만 표현이 일부 어색하고 장단점을 균형 있게 제시하지 못했습니다. 1) ‘in paper’ → ‘on paper’ 같은 전치사 오류를 바로잡으세요. 2) 이유를 구체적으로 나누고 연결어(However, Also)를 사용하세요. 3) 문장 길이를 조절해 반복을 피하세요. 4) 예시(Instagram)는 좋지만 간결하게 표현하세요.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable for my eyes and I like the texture of the pages. Also, paper books help me focus better since digital devices often show notifications from apps like Instagram. However, I sometimes use a screen for convenience when I travel.

제안: 답변은 상황을 제시했지만 문법과 표현 문제가 있고 문장 구조가 불완전합니다. 1) ‘terminology’는 불가산 명사이므로 단수 취급하고 관사 사용을 확인하세요. 2) ‘have to concentrate on’ 뒤 목적어 필요(what to concentrate on). 3) 질문 찾기 상황을 더 명확히 설명하고 연결어(for example, so)를 사용하세요. 4) 말할 때 망설임(uh)을 줄이세요.

예시: I need to read very carefully when I study academic journals or follow complicated instructions, because they contain a lot of specialized terminology. For example, when I'm answering exam questions based on a passage, I read slowly to find precise details and avoid misunderstanding.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 많은 발음·표현 오류가 있으며 반복과 문장 불완전성이 큽니다. 1) 질문에 대한 직접적인 주제 문장으로 시작하세요(e.g., I prefer detailed reading). 2) ‘pre pull scale reading’과 ‘just Kenny’ 같은 비문을 바로잡으세요(‘preview or skim’ 또는 ‘detailed reading’). 3) 구체적 이유와 예시를 하나 추가하고 연결어를 사용하세요. 4) 문장을 2~3개로 명확히 정리해 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand the meaning and not miss important points. Before reading carefully, I often skim the text quickly to get the main idea, but then I go back and read in detail to check facts and understand difficult parts.

× I love reading books and my favorite book is travel books because I really love traveling all around the world and I can learn, uh, local style of people and tradition and culture.

✓ I love reading books and my favorite books are travel books because I really love traveling all around the world and I can learn about the local lifestyle, traditions, and culture.

The sentence uses singular 'my favorite book is travel books' which mixes singular and plural; this is a quantifier/number agreement issue. Also 'local style of people and tradition and culture' is unidiomatic. Suggest using plural 'books' to match 'travel books', change verb to 'are', add 'about', use 'lifestyle' and plural 'traditions' for natural collocation and clarity. Example improvement: 'my favorite books are travel books' and 'learn about the local lifestyle, traditions, and culture.'

× I love reading in paper more because it is more comfortable for my eyes and I really love texture of the paper and even when I read in screen I can't concentrate totally because there are so many notification such as Instagram.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes and I really love the texture of the paper, and even when I read on a screen I can't concentrate completely because there are so many notifications, such as Instagram.

Errors include wrong preposition ('in paper' -> 'on paper'), missing articles ('the texture'), singular/plural mismatches ('notification' -> 'notifications'), and awkward adverb placement ('concentrate totally' -> 'concentrate completely'). Also use 'prefer' for preference. Suggestions: use correct prepositions with media ('on paper', 'on a screen'), include 'the' before 'texture', pluralize 'notifications', and place adverbs naturally ('concentrate completely').

× When I read academic journals or uh, difficult instructions because there are so many terminology, so I have to concentrate on and also when I have to find question on it, I have to fully concentrate to find answer.

✓ When I read academic journals or difficult instructions, because there is so much terminology, I have to concentrate; also, when I have to find a question in them, I must concentrate fully to find the answer.

Problems: ungrammatical sentence structure and wrong quantifier use ('so many terminology' should be 'so much terminology' because 'terminology' is uncountable), missing articles ('a question', 'the answer'), and unclear clauses. Suggestions: fix sentence structure into clear clauses, use 'so much' for uncountable nouns, use 'in them' or 'in it' depending on singular/plural, and include articles before singular countable nouns. Use 'concentrate fully' or 'fully concentrate' for natural adverb placement.

× I usually pre pull scale reading because I can totally understand when I read just Kenny. So I usually read very carefully. I have to understand totally and. Perfect.

✓ I usually do pre-scan reading because I can understand the main points quickly, but when I need to understand details I read very carefully. I need to understand everything completely and accurately.

Original contains nonsensical phrases ('pre pull scale reading', 'read just Kenny') and sentence fragments ('and. Perfect.'). This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Suggestions: replace unclear terms with 'pre-scan reading' or 'skimming' and contrast skimming with careful reading. Use complete sentences and natural adverbs ('completely', 'accurately').