Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks specific details. To improve, give a concise topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, and add one or two specific examples or reasons (e.g., types of books you enjoy or how reading benefits you). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, I often buy historical novels and science books from my local bookstore, which broaden my knowledge and imagination.

제안: Good idea expression, but the response is unclear and contains grammatical errors and fillers. Improve by stating a clear preference in one sentence, then give two precise reasons using linking words such as "because" or "so." Avoid filler words and ensure proper tense and article use.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I can follow the text at my own pace and retain information better. When I read on a screen, I get distracted easily and find it harder to concentrate.

제안: You answered both parts but your response is repetitive and a little disorganized. Improve by dividing the answer into two clear sentences (one for when careful reading is needed, one for when it is not) and give specific examples and reasons. Use linking words such as "for example" and "because" to add coherence.

예시: I need to read carefully when the material contains important information I must remember, for example academic texts or instructions, because accuracy matters. In contrast, I usually skim news headlines or social media posts since they are brief and less important.

제안: The answer addresses the question but includes informal fillers and unclear phrasing. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence about preference depending on purpose, then provide one specific example for each method and a brief reason. Use concise, natural vocabulary and avoid repeating words.

예시: It depends on my purpose: I scan social media and news for quick updates because I only need the main points. By contrast, I read academic articles or technical instructions in detail to fully understand and remember the important information.

× Yes, I really like reading. I always buy a lot of books from the bookstore and I really enjoy doing reading.

✓ Yes, I really like reading. I always buy a lot of books from the bookstore and I really enjoy reading.

The phrase 'doing reading' is incorrect; 'reading' is the correct gerund form. This is a present tense/habitual action, so use the simple present 'enjoy reading'. Suggestion: omit 'doing' and use 'enjoy reading'.

× I like to read on paper like the real physical bro as I can clearly like follow my pace to the reading and know what I actually exactly reading because when I reading on the screen I can't focus.

✓ I like to read on real paper because I can clearly follow my own pace and know exactly what I am reading; when I read on a screen I can't focus.

Multiple errors: 'bro' is incorrect word, likely 'book' or 'paper'; 'like' used redundantly; 'follow my pace to the reading' is awkward; missing auxiliary and wrong form 'when I reading' should be 'when I read' or 'when I am reading'. This involves verb + -ing form and present tense usage. Suggestions: use 'read on real paper', 'follow my own pace', and 'know exactly what I am reading'.

× I think when I need to read carefully is when I read the passage, the the book and everything that I need to remember.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I read a passage, a book, or anything I need to remember.

Word order is awkward and article use is inconsistent. The clause 'when I need to read carefully is when I read...' should be simplified. Use simple present for habitual situations: 'I need to read carefully when I read...'. Suggestion: reorder to subject + verb + time/condition.

× I need to and I think I will not need to read carefully when I see the News Online, the social media that the things is not important.

✓ I think I do not need to read carefully when I see online news or social media posts that are not important.

Fragment 'I need to and' is incomplete; 'the News Online' and 'the social media' are incorrect article uses and word order; 'the things is not important' has subject-verb agreement error and unclear noun. This is sentence structure and agreement: use 'online news' and 'social media posts that are not important', and 'do not need' for present generalization.

× So I think it's no need to read.

✓ So I think there is no need to read carefully.

'it's no need to read' is unnatural. Use 'there is no need to' to express lack of necessity. Maintain present tense and adverb 'carefully' to match earlier context.

× Depends on what information I'm reading.

✓ It depends on what information I am reading.

Sentence fragment missing subject; add 'It' to form a complete sentence. Use present continuous 'I am reading' to refer to current/ongoing context.

× If the information is about like from the social media then I probably more on scanning.

✓ If the information comes from social media, then I probably focus more on scanning.

'about like from the social media' is ungrammatical and redundant; 'I probably more on scanning' lacks a verb and has preposition issues. Use 'comes from social media' and 'focus more on scanning'.

× But when a reading importantly I would do a really really detailed reading to make my brand remember, make my mind to have it in my mind remember all the important.

✓ But when reading is important, I would do a very detailed reading to help me remember all the important information.

Many structural errors: 'a reading importantly' incorrect word order; 'make my brand remember' likely intended 'make my brain remember'; 'make my mind to have it in my mind remember' is redundant and ungrammatical. Correct structure: 'when reading is important' and use 'help me remember' or 'help my brain remember'. Remove repetition and choose clear noun 'information'.