Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then name one hobby and add a brief reason or detail. This will make your response more informative while keeping it natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy listening to music because it helps me relax, especially after a busy day.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand and does not clearly name a childhood hobby. Use a simple past-tense sentence, such as “I used to…” or “When I was a child, I enjoyed…,” and add one specific detail.

예시: When I was a child, I enjoyed drawing. I often spent the afternoon sketching animals and cartoon characters.

제안: Your answer includes a clear response and a reason, but some phrases are unclear. Say “playing the guitar” or “listening to music,” use “bored” rather than “born” if that is what you mean, and give one clear example. Keep the verb tense consistent.

예시: Yes, I do. I’ve enjoyed listening to music since I was a child. It helps me feel calm when I’m sad or bored, and I often listen to my favourite songs in the evening.

제안: Your answer is direct, but it needs a little supporting detail. Briefly mention one hobby you enjoy and contrast it with an activity your family members prefer.

예시: No, we have different hobbies. I enjoy listening to music, while my parents prefer gardening.

× My childhood hobbies is to get a advocate we're getting

✓ My childhood hobbies were [the rest of the sentence is unclear].

The plural subject hobbies requires the plural verb were, not is. Were also fits the past-time reference to childhood. The remaining words are unclear, so they cannot be reliably corrected without guessing what you meant.

× I have loved guitar to music since childhood.

✓ I have loved listening to guitar music since childhood.

After loved, use a gerund such as listening when describing an activity you enjoy. The phrase guitar to music is not grammatically formed; guitar music correctly describes the music.

× It makes me feel happy and relaxed whenever I feel sad or born.

✓ It makes me feel happy and relaxed whenever I feel sad or bored.

Born means having come into existence, so it does not fit the meaning of this sentence. Bored describes feeling uninterested and is the appropriate adjective here.