Hobby— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, clear and concise. Start with a topic sentence stating the hobby, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, and, so). Avoid repetition and grammar errors (use articles, plural/singular forms, and correct verb forms). Aim for 2–4 well-formed sentences under 5 sentences total.

예시: My favourite hobby is playing cricket. I enjoy it because it keeps me fit and teaches teamwork, and I usually practice twice a week with my local club.

제안: Answer directly about childhood hobbies with a clear past-tense sentence, then add a specific supporting detail or memory using linking words (e.g., when, because, so). Correct grammar: use past tense for childhood, avoid vague phrases and repetition.

예시: Yes, when I was a child I used to play cricket almost every day. I remember practicing with my friends after school because it was fun and helped me build confidence.

제안: Give a concise direct answer using present perfect or since + time (e.g., I have played cricket since childhood). Then add one specific reason or example, using linking words for coherence. Avoid filler words and unclear phrasing.

예시: Yes, I have played cricket since I was a child. Because I started at primary school, it has become a lifelong hobby that keeps me active and connected with friends.

제안: Answer clearly (Yes or No), then give a specific detail about who shares the hobby and why or how you do it together, using linking words (e.g., because, so, for example). Use correct noun-pronoun agreement and simple grammar.

예시: Yes, my father also enjoys cricket, so we often play together on weekends. For example, we go to the local ground every Saturday morning and practice batting and bowling.

× Yeah, I have hobby, my hobby favorite hobby is cricket, because cricket is very helpful game and there are grow my health for Yeah, yeah.

✓ Yeah, I have a hobby. My favorite hobby is cricket because cricket is a very helpful game and it helps my health.

Errors: missing article before 'hobby' and 'game' and incorrect plural verb 'there are grow my health'. Type: singular/plural and article errors (use of 'a' before singular countable nouns). Suggestion: Use 'a hobby' for one hobby, 'a very helpful game' for singular, and rephrase 'it helps my health' to express benefit clearly.

× I have any hobbies because hobbies very beautiful hobbies.

✓ I have hobbies because hobbies are very enjoyable.

Errors: 'any' is incorrect in affirmative sentence and missing verb 'are'; repetition 'very beautiful hobbies' is awkward. Type: pronoun/determiner misuse and sentence structure. Suggestion: Use 'I have hobbies' for affirmative, 'very enjoyable' or 'very nice' as adjective, and include the verb 'are'.

× My favorite thing and when I chat my most favorite hobby is cricket.

✓ My favorite thing, and when I chat, my favorite hobby to talk about is cricket.

Errors: sentence is fragmented and unclear. Type: sentence structure. Suggestion: Add commas, clarify meaning with 'to talk about' and remove redundant 'most' since 'favorite' suffices.

× This cricket is very helpful hobby.

✓ Cricket is a very helpful hobby.

Errors: unnecessary demonstrative 'This' and missing article. Type: pronoun/determiner misuse. Suggestion: Use the noun directly and include 'a' before 'very helpful hobby'.

× They are helpful for me.

✓ It is helpful for me.

Errors: 'They' refers to plural but 'cricket' is singular. Type: pronoun agreement. Suggestion: Use 'it' when referring to the sport cricket, or 'they' only for plural nouns.

× Well, I have a that's wrapped. I'm such a wrapped hobby for me.

✓ Well, I have a hobby that I have been passionate about since childhood.

Errors: unclear phrasing 'that's wrapped' and 'I'm such a wrapped hobby'. Type: sentence structure and word choice. Suggestion: Replace with clear phrase 'a hobby that I have been passionate about since childhood'.

× Like somehow I'm gonna be hobby whenever I hobby today.

✓ For some reason, I always play my hobby today as well.

Errors: informal 'gonna', incorrect verb usage 'be hobby', and wrong placement. Type: adjective/adverb and verb misuse. Suggestion: Use 'for some reason' or 'somehow', avoid 'gonna', and use verbs like 'play' or 'practice' with the hobby.

× Yeah, that's very helpful. Whenever I am settled, prefer which hobby is cricket because cricket is very helpful hobby and they are very healthy hobbies today, today.

✓ Yeah, cricket is very helpful. Whenever I am free, I prefer the hobby of playing cricket because it is a very healthy activity.

Errors: 'prefer which hobby is cricket' is incorrect structure, missing articles, pronoun 'they' wrongly used, repetition 'today, today'. Type: pronoun and sentence structure errors. Suggestion: Use 'I prefer the hobby of playing cricket' and 'it is a very healthy activity'.

× Well, that's pretty good station.

✓ Well, that's a pretty good question.

Errors: 'station' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'question'. Type: pronoun/word choice. Suggestion: Use appropriate noun 'question' and include article 'a'.

× Yeah, also my father the matching my hobbies and their hobbies is cricket and also my hobbies is cricket.

✓ Yes, my father's hobby matches mine; his hobby is cricket and my hobby is cricket.

Errors: incorrect word order, missing possessive, and subject-verb agreement ('hobbies is'). Type: subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. Suggestion: Use possessive form 'my father's hobby', 'matches mine', and ensure verbs agree with subjects: 'his hobby is', 'my hobby is'.

× So this is gonna be a matching for the hobby and yeah, same hobbies as well.

✓ So our hobbies match; we have the same hobby.

Errors: informal 'gonna be a matching' and redundant phrasing. Type: sentence structure. Suggestion: Use 'our hobbies match' or 'we have the same hobby' in formal responses.